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    From Afar

    Story written on May 27, 2005 by Jwet.
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    Chapter 52 – Catching Fire (HMS 1)

    At hearing this Tina laughs hard. This truly is a new Bette and she likes this Bette more and more. Wow what a revelation. So you dont mind putting down roots here? Tina asks, as this will give her insight as to Bettes feelings towards staying.

    Oh no. That actually is the most appealing aspect, being here for both you and Anna. I want to provide Anna with a stability that only comes from having a solid home. Bette says immediately.

    Thats so nice. Is all Tina says but she is thinking so much more.

    Bette can see that Tina is happy with this conversation, which leads her to continue. I have to give my response on Monday but as things stand now Im taking it. Bette says this as they are pulling down her street.

    As they pull into the apartment parking lot, Tina puts the car in park and turns it off quickly. Without even turning to Bette, Tina opens her door and comes around to the passenger door and proceeds to open the door and extend Bette her hand. Bette watched Tina do all this with a growing smile crossing her face. Seeing Tinas hand Bette grabs it and was immediately pulled up into Tinas embrace. Having her lips inches apart from Tinas, Bette looks into Tinas eyes and can read Tinas want and need.

    Bette were you planning on asking me up to your apartment or do you want the evening to end here? Tina asks in a husky voice.

    This was the moment, the decision that Bette had been nervous about all day. Looking into Tinas eyes there was no doubt where they were going if Bette said YES. Kit was right, this was predestined the moment they agreed to date. How did Bette ever think she could be Tinas friend and stay in the background?

    Yes, I would love for you to come up. Bette replies in a quiet faltering voice.

    Upon hearing Bettes response Tina loosens her embrace on Bette and allows Bette to lead the way to her apartment. The whole walk to the elevator and the entire elevator ride, Bette is trying to reason with making love to Tina and how it might jeopardize her future with Anna. As these thoughts are going through her mind Bette steals side-glances at the beautiful profile of Tina. Tina looked so confident and assured.

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    1. FANTASTIC,SEXY,HOT AND JUST DAMN GREAT…WONDERFUL CHAPTER…..THANKS,I THINK WE ALL NEEDED THAT FOR THE LONG WEEKENED PLEASE POST SOON………………..

    4. That was amazing.. I loved the way you wrote Bette in this story – the fear, the letting go – it was so emotional. And now it’s Tina’s turn ;)?

    6. Oh…wow…wow…that’s all I got…wow. That was so beautiful Jwet. Aw. Hot.

      Heh, you feel free to use the ‘impregnator’ bit, just give me credit, heh, kidding.

      More soon please woo!

    9. OMG…WOO-HOO…that was so ******* HOT!! Finally…hehe…so beautiful!! Well done JWET! Please update soon…I wonder what Bette has in store for Tina…::winkwink::

    14. Hello, Jwet.I just wanted you to know that I did receive Chase’s IM message regarding you would like to talk with me. I have attempts to send an E-mail to you several times and I must say with out success. I don’t normally like asking other’s for fear of bothering them. But since you contacted Chase, and
      Chase has forwarded your message to me. I would like for you to ask Chase to forward you my IM and E-mail address to you. I will send her an IM message stating that I have given my permission for her to advance my personal information on. I am looking forward to talking with you. Have a great weekend and be safe. Sincerely, Carol.

    15. JWET…MAYBE YOU COULD HAVE IRENE BE STRAIGHT FOR AWHILE…THEN MAYBE HER FEELINGS WILL CHANGE LATER WHEN SHE ENDS UP HAVING FEELINGS FOR SHANE BECAUSE THEY SEEM LIKE THEY HAVE SOME SORT OF CHEMISTRY…..JUST A SUGGESTION

    19. So very nice, and worth waiting for. Not just HMS…but making love. Well done. (Yesterday’s was good, too…I’m a little slow on that comment.)

    20. Brilliant!!!! Also glad that Tina took the initiative with this stage of their relationship, Bette needed it to be that way.

      I don’t often leave comments, but this story is so worthy! Its also one of the VERY FEW I actually print out to read over and over!!

    21. Thank you Jwet WHOA! It’s really Amazing I love it you make my day really happy LOL that was so Beautiful Awesome Sexy WOW LOL What can I say Thank you so Much LOL Yes they did it okay next Please.

    25. I have been reading all of this story, but never left a comment I think…But today I do. All of your writing is so amazing, and I’m always happy to see that you have posted… And this chapter was…WOW… GOOD AND HOT!!!

    28. It’s like a cleat running the base pads and crossing home plate…home run.

      Realistic, sexy and very loving. Your writing is outstanding. It makes me happy to read what you conceive.

    30. Wow!!That was fantastic…I hope they can slowly work there way back to each other without Tina getting upset with Bette about the foundation.. Because if they do get back together Bette will have tell Tina what she has done for her..BUT will Tina accept it has help or control….Post soon please you are an excellent writer.

    31. You captured the intensity, of emotions between the two of them just perfectly Jwet, great chapter, can’t wait for the next installment.Thanks.

    33. I’m doing my lil’ happy dance.. Oh yea. That was so so so GOOOOOOD. I cannot believe I am awake enough to read. I played on the Lu/Tina board and hear until 3am. But this was well worth getting up for. As for getting my yard cut. Hey it’s better than pouring gas on the fence line and setting it on fire like before. LMAO…. So when do you want me to do your’s.. :)

    34. Now that made my week and soon to be weekend! Bette is just so gosh dang adorable when she shows her insecurity and vulnerability…it’s a complete 180 to her public persona. However, Tina never did answer the entire question on Bette’s fear of loss. Is it that Tina doesn,’t even see it as a possibility so she doesn’t need to reply? God I hope so! BTW, it is a long weekend for me but it’s not ‘Memorial Day’ weekend. I live in the Caribbean, it just so happens that one of our holidays is this Monday too. But thanks! hope you have a great weekend yourself!

    35. Thanks for the segue from the previous chapter. It helps a lot!
      So, Tina took the initiative! Must be part of that new executive mindset that she’s sporting. That foundation keeps paying dividend after after dividend!
      I thought this wasn’t coming until CH 57? I guess Tina couldn’t wait that long. Ha!
      Thanks for bringing it – a great way to start Friday. Round 2 should continue after Tina removes her clothes and relocates them to the bedroom.
      HOT!

    36. OMG..that was fucking HOT..i´m so glad they finally work things out..and also that Tina take control cuzz Bette never will..she was to scared..and i hope the peace will reign in the Bette and Tina land..lol..thanks for another amazing chapter;-)

    38. Whoosh. Managing to breathe, just.
      Hubba hubba Ding dong!
      Jwet, you dog, you!
      I must thank you for providing a truthful and genuine reconnection between these fabulously realised creatures. The twist in the scene was Tina’s forwardness and take charge attitude while Bette was the hesitant and apprehensive party. I admire the delicious way you fulfilled all of the wants and desires of both these characters and your readers. Given that this type of erotica makes you uncomfortable, I must congratulate you on a sizzling, sultry, sweltering and sensuous sex scene. Hot Monkey sex indeed.
      Envisaging Bette’s response will keep me up at nights and in a cold, cold, cold shower so please post real soon. My little heart can’t take all this excitement.
      Questions raised today are:
      Can’t think of any as am still focused on the HMS. Normal service will resume after the weekend.
      Happy holidays to all that are off. I’m not so will be slaving away at work.
      Hope you have a fantastic weekend.
      Your Loyal Fan.
      PS – ‘Secret Lives of Walter Mitty’ is a laff fest. Freaky, deaky at coincidence mind.

    40. Quiet please, the judges are ready to announce Jwet’s HMS scores. For artistic endeavor 9.9, Technique 9.9, Execution 10.0. Damn that straight judge on the right…he just doesn’t get it does he? I think it was a perfectly hot 10! Can I get a Woo Hoo?

    41. Yeah!!! I can see this is going to last of couple of chapters!! I know I’m enjoying it, I will have to think about Irene, good or bad person. So she seems so nice, could she be working for Helena?? Just a though.

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