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From Afar
Previously
Tina knew the moment just before Bette came that this was going to be a powerful *****. Tina looked up to see Bettes face. The force that Bette locked down on her fingers almost brought her motion to a stand still. Bette had her eyes half closed and her head thrown back. The moment her ***** hit Bette lurched forward as if she was trying to get all of Tina inside of her. She screamed Tinas name and a shudder shook her entire body. At this Tina paused, leaving her fingers deep within Bette. She moved up Bettes body to hold her with her free arm. When Bettes shudders began to subside, Tina once again began to move her fingers, ever so slowly back and forth as the contracted muscles almost set Tinas fingers in motion on their own. Once again Bette shuddered and her muscled walls clamped down on Tinas fingers. Tina continued to caress Bette until Tina feared Bette might pass out and only then did she pull out and gathered Bette up entirely in her embrace.
Bette gasping for air couldnt engage her mind in any thought other than the feeling of safety she felt in Tinas embrace. Slowly as Bette began to come back to earth her mind engaged Tina Tina, I love you Tina. Were the first mumbled words.
Still entirely too spent to move Tina continued to hold her Sh .. shh Bette Ive got you. I love you too. Was all Tina needed to say as they both half laid half sat on the couch.
Chapter 53 – Want and Worship (HMS 2)
As Bette slowly started regaining her senses she looked up from the nook of Tinas shoulder that she was nestled. She noticed that she had done a pretty poor job of disrobing Tina as she still had her beautiful red dress on.
Tina can I see you? Bette asked as Tina noticed her look.
Bette actually saw something cross Tinas face. What Tina, what?
At this Tina looked away from Bettes inquiring look. She just pulled Bette closer for a minute Bette Im not the same as you remember me. I mean well .. as Tina is saying this Bette immediately realizes what Tina is getting at. She had a baby and doesnt think that she is as desirable.
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(68 votes, average: 4.24 out of 5)
Wow! I’m just…wow! That was really…Wow! Thanks…
Fabulous, as normal keep it coming, we want more. Look forward to your next chapter.
Oh boy, breat chapter once again, I love it, can’t wait for hte next one :)
K
Damn girl. That was so hot and sweet. Love this!
Intimate and beautiful – Thank you – can you write another 40 or so of these moments ?? lol and then some. Lovely – thank you
Okay, turn on the air conditioner. My monitor needs a fan of it’s own, as there is smoke coming from all sides. Keep them cumming, good work!!!!
it’s a rainny day here. So all I had to do was read it and you made it really sunny. tks Jwet.
Ah, that was amazing. I am once again without words. Heh. Wow. If anyone saw my grin right now…hehe. More!
Damn that is so hot and amazing, love it. I just woke up but not really awake and now reading this chapter is totally awake and need somthing cold to drink or shower. Anyway post soon, thank you! Excellent chapter!
Yes, Sundays are “day or rest”. Thankfully!
For someone who claims not like writing HMS, you do it so well!
Thanks for another wonderful chapter.
love your writing-there are no words left to fully express how beautifully you do it- awesome man- leaves breathless and speachless
OMG..Jwet, baby if i die of pneumonia of taking a lot of cold showers that will be your fault..lol..i´m so glad Tina still feel safe in Bette´s arms..thanks for another amazing chapter..and i hope will be a 2 round..lol..thanks;-)
It’s amazing when you find that person who is your one true temple.. I think they are going to want to worship there for awhile ;) Thanks JWET – so worth the wait.
WOW that was really great,what can i say just a really beautiful story… and so much more to go.thanks
OMG…crap, I have to go…but I LOVE IT so far, I’ll have to finish reading this chapter later on tonight…WOO…the HEAT is on! Brb Jwet!
OMFG, you have nothing to worry about. You are a natural at writing this stuff. This was incredibly beautiful and amazingly hot! Keep up the great work!
This was wonderful! I usually just skim over the sex scenes on fanfic because I feel like I’m reading the same scene over and over again.Good HMS are truly hard to write and I applaud any who attempts it. However, I read every single word you wrote. It was tender, important to the story, and delightfully vivid.
OMG!! HOTNESS!! I finally finished it!! LOL…omg, need more chapters like this one, wickedly AWESOME Jwet!! HOT!
Holy Mother of God!!! Thanks for jump starting my day!!!
Wow!!! I need some air….awesome chapter…:)))
Well good morining to you too. AHH this is the best thing, I just got out of the shower and decided to read some fan fic before work. OMG how can I go to work with this huge smile on my face. Everyone is going to think I just had sex. Ok J what you do with Irene is your idea, I don’t want to do anything to the plans you already have. I quess you like my wicked thoughs because I think it is the second time you have made a comment about maybe changing your story?? Anyways have a great day, I know I will LOL
OMG Jwet i’m blushing and it aint from the sun shining through my window.
As always love it.
Thank you.
Well you have done it again that was FANTASTIC… I hope all will stay calm BUT I have a feeling you are not done yet..Thanks for posting..
This chapter is so sweet. Bette was so gentle. It just melts my heart. Thank you so much for the time you put into this story to make it so wonderful. Now as for yard work. I finished mowing yesterday and I am dearly paying for it. There is no need to call the doctor tomorrow to only hear what I know already. STUPID… LOL… I hope you had a great weekend. See ya in the moring From Afar. :)
Yes, it is HMS (I did say that), but it’s also more — something deeper than just sex going on between them, and you’ve managed to convey that quite well. Twice.
Very nicely done; thanks for this.
This is twice you’ve made me comment now!!! Oh so worthy of it, and so much more.
WONDERFUL…I JUST GOT HOME FROM MANY COCKTAILS AND I AM SO GLAD YOU POSTED….PLEASE POST SOON…….THANKS
Jwet you are a master storyteller. Their interaction feels more than real…it feels true.
JWet,
Am back after a wonderful weekend: rested, recharged, refueled and ready for action.
As for you babes.
Standing up cheering for another terrific installment. I understand that these last two chapters make you feel awkward and embarrassed but please accept that they are truly passionate, stunning, scorching, sensuous, sexy and satisfying for your readers. We really do appreciate that you are ‘outside your box’. Take heart that they convey exactly the right meaning and tone to everyone. Your talent shines through as always. The realism and natural rhythm of your writing sculpts and shapes these splendid scenes. The care and consideration you place on every word, phase and sentence shines though. You really so make it look so easy and effortless. This crusade has been well worth all the hard work and labour.
Thanks you as always,
Queries I have:
Have Bette and Tina been continuing their Yoga classes? Which path are they following; Karma, Bhakti, Jnana, Hatha, Tantric (Yes, please as this is a personal fave.), Kundalini, or Raja? Are their little chants going through their minds? ‘More, more, more’ or ‘Now, now, now’ or ‘Don’t stop, don’t stop, please don’t stop’ closely followed by ‘Please stop I can’t, can’t’ take anymore. If Bette is worshiping Tina’s shrine where do the flowers go? Is there another type of offering that is preferred?
To quote Dickens’s “More sir!â€
Please make it real soon.
Your Loyal Fan.
PS – you have had me blushing too. Remember ‘Sex is like a game of bridge: If you don’t have a good partner, you’d better have a good hand’
JESUS Jwet!!! I just came in for a cool down from being at the grill to come and read this! I don’t know which is hotter…the grill or that chapter!!! Well got to run! got a little BBQ ‘lime’ (island slang for small party) going on and yours truly is the C-H-E-F!!!
I seem to be having problems leaving comments on some stories…oh well. Last try this time. Really enjoying your stories, have finally gotten somewhat caught up. Look forward to much more from you.
Jwet Still WONDERFUL STORY I love it So SWEET AND LOVING that’s Great.
it seems I’m late every time. I loved this chapter and it was a very Hot one as well. I’ll be looking forward to the next chapter.
OK HI! see if i ever go out of town again! wow- just so glad that this was here to come home to. thanks so much for this- you did a great job and one would never know that you had a problem writing these scenes. done like a pro in my book!