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    From Afar

    Story written on May 29, 2005 by Jwet.
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    Chapter 53 -Want and Worship (HMS 2)

    Oh Baby please, I know you had a baby and I still think you are the most beautiful woman alive. Please let me see you. Bette says to encourage Tina.

    At that Tina pulls her arms out from around Bette as she slowly gets up and stands in front of Bette. With her head down Tina slowly reaches around to her back and unzips her dress. Bette hears it as Tinas arm moves down her back. With that done Tina looks to Bette again, meeting Bettes eyes. Seeing her encouraging look Tina removes both the thin shoulder straps and lets the dress fall to the floor. Underneath Tina is wearing a strapless bra and delicate silk panties. Bette immediately notices Tinas ***** are larger than she remembers and there are faint marks across Tinas abdomen but she just looks so beautiful. This is truly reflected in the adoring look that Bette was giving Tina.

    Seeing the loving intensity of Bettes gaze, Tina is filled with warmth the burns in her heart.

    Getting up Bette moves closer to touch Tina. Putting her hands on Tinas waist, Bette looks closely into Tinas eyes trying to see if she understands how beautiful she is. Seeing the doubt easing away but wanting to eliminate any shadow that might remain Bette whispers God, Tina please let me take your beautiful body. Let me show you how much I love you so.

    As Tina nods her head in an ever so slight nod, Bette now has a goal in her mind to physically demonstrate to Tina just how beautiful she was in the best way Bette could think of .by showing her.

    Bette swallowed hard as she pulls back to look once more at Tina, letting her eyes sweep slowly up and down Tinas body as she approaches to within inches of Tina. Stopping Bette finally looks directly into Tinas eyes. There she sees all of Tinas insecurities as they cloud up her vision. Returning Tinas intense gaze, Bette opens up her soul trying to convey to Tina all her love, want and worship. As they communicate so much with their looks. After a moment as Bette moves closer to Tina and brushes her cheek with her own as she whispers Tina can I worship you the way you deserve?

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    6. Okay, turn on the air conditioner. My monitor needs a fan of it’s own, as there is smoke coming from all sides. Keep them cumming, good work!!!!

    9. Damn that is so hot and amazing, love it. I just woke up but not really awake and now reading this chapter is totally awake and need somthing cold to drink or shower. Anyway post soon, thank you! Excellent chapter!

    10. Yes, Sundays are “day or rest”. Thankfully!

      For someone who claims not like writing HMS, you do it so well!

      Thanks for another wonderful chapter.

    12. OMG..Jwet, baby if i die of pneumonia of taking a lot of cold showers that will be your fault..lol..i´m so glad Tina still feel safe in Bette´s arms..thanks for another amazing chapter..and i hope will be a 2 round..lol..thanks;-)

    13. It’s amazing when you find that person who is your one true temple.. I think they are going to want to worship there for awhile ;) Thanks JWET – so worth the wait.

    16. OMFG, you have nothing to worry about. You are a natural at writing this stuff. This was incredibly beautiful and amazingly hot! Keep up the great work!

    17. This was wonderful! I usually just skim over the sex scenes on fanfic because I feel like I’m reading the same scene over and over again.Good HMS are truly hard to write and I applaud any who attempts it. However, I read every single word you wrote. It was tender, important to the story, and delightfully vivid.

    21. Well good morining to you too. AHH this is the best thing, I just got out of the shower and decided to read some fan fic before work. OMG how can I go to work with this huge smile on my face. Everyone is going to think I just had sex. Ok J what you do with Irene is your idea, I don’t want to do anything to the plans you already have. I quess you like my wicked thoughs because I think it is the second time you have made a comment about maybe changing your story?? Anyways have a great day, I know I will LOL

    24. This chapter is so sweet. Bette was so gentle. It just melts my heart. Thank you so much for the time you put into this story to make it so wonderful. Now as for yard work. I finished mowing yesterday and I am dearly paying for it. There is no need to call the doctor tomorrow to only hear what I know already. STUPID… LOL… I hope you had a great weekend. See ya in the moring From Afar. :)

    25. Yes, it is HMS (I did say that), but it’s also more — something deeper than just sex going on between them, and you’ve managed to convey that quite well. Twice.
      Very nicely done; thanks for this.

    29. JWet,
      Am back after a wonderful weekend: rested, recharged, refueled and ready for action.
      As for you babes.
      Standing up cheering for another terrific installment. I understand that these last two chapters make you feel awkward and embarrassed but please accept that they are truly passionate, stunning, scorching, sensuous, sexy and satisfying for your readers. We really do appreciate that you are ‘outside your box’. Take heart that they convey exactly the right meaning and tone to everyone. Your talent shines through as always. The realism and natural rhythm of your writing sculpts and shapes these splendid scenes. The care and consideration you place on every word, phase and sentence shines though. You really so make it look so easy and effortless. This crusade has been well worth all the hard work and labour.
      Thanks you as always,
      Queries I have:
      Have Bette and Tina been continuing their Yoga classes? Which path are they following; Karma, Bhakti, Jnana, Hatha, Tantric (Yes, please as this is a personal fave.), Kundalini, or Raja? Are their little chants going through their minds? ‘More, more, more’ or ‘Now, now, now’ or ‘Don’t stop, don’t stop, please don’t stop’ closely followed by ‘Please stop I can’t, can’t’ take anymore. If Bette is worshiping Tina’s shrine where do the flowers go? Is there another type of offering that is preferred?
      To quote Dickens’s “More sir!”
      Please make it real soon.
      Your Loyal Fan.
      PS – you have had me blushing too. Remember ‘Sex is like a game of bridge: If you don’t have a good partner, you’d better have a good hand’

    30. JESUS Jwet!!! I just came in for a cool down from being at the grill to come and read this! I don’t know which is hotter…the grill or that chapter!!! Well got to run! got a little BBQ ‘lime’ (island slang for small party) going on and yours truly is the C-H-E-F!!!

    31. I seem to be having problems leaving comments on some stories…oh well. Last try this time. Really enjoying your stories, have finally gotten somewhat caught up. Look forward to much more from you.

    33. it seems I’m late every time. I loved this chapter and it was a very Hot one as well. I’ll be looking forward to the next chapter.

    34. OK HI! see if i ever go out of town again! wow- just so glad that this was here to come home to. thanks so much for this- you did a great job and one would never know that you had a problem writing these scenes. done like a pro in my book!

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