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From Afar
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The heat of Bettes breath on her nearly bare shoulder sends a shiver down Tinas back that Bette notices. Sorry, Tina I mean do you need any other help?
Tina turns around and looks up into Bettes eyes as she is inches apart. No Bette this night Tina hesitates as she is searching for words to describe the indescribable. I dont know how to put it. I could not have dreamed of a better evening. Thank you for coming with me and being my date. Tina says with an awe of wonder still in her voice.
At hearing Tina describe the evening in such glowing terms, Bettes heart wanted to explode with joy as these were words which eliminated any doubt that Bette had concerning Tinas feeling. I have the same feeling Tina. I enjoyed your company and well this evening .. Thank you. Bette responded as she walked Tina to the door. When they reached the door, Tina took a quick inventory assuring herself she had retrieved all her items. Turning back to Bette, Tina took her right hand and placed it behind Bettes head as she pulled Bette down to kiss her good night. Tina had intended it to be a quick and sweet kiss but the ambers which had been fanned earlier were still in full flame and this simple kiss took on a life of its own. The passion and joy that they both experience in this evening activities was symbolized by this kiss which left both panting. Tina searched Bettes eyes as she pulled away and found a renewed happiness there that gave Tina hope for the future.
Ill call you tomorrow. OK? Tina asked and didnt move until Bette answered.
Bette nodded and smiled. This seemed so right.
Hours later Bette was lying awake reliving the evening. Smiling to herself as once again she appreciated this take charge attitude of Tinas. As Bette continued to think of Tina, all her old self loathing came back. How could she have been so foolish, so unbelievably selfish? Bette is still haunted by the memories of the desperate, tearful, sweaty efforts she had made to hold on to the shreds of her life with Tina who she had betrayed. To have thrown everything she had for a fling with Candace just was so wrong. The whole experience with Candace had been *****, hot, rough ***** *****. How could I have risked everything in life on the turn of a *****? That was all it was, no tenderness, no gently reprieve, no lovemaking. When you compare the profoundly passionate love making that had been this and every encounter with Tina, Bette wondered how could she have made such a bad choice. Bette once again felt that connection with Tina. That feeling of oneness, totally interfacing with Tina to create a unity of being that Bette has only experienced with Tina. To encounter this place of harmony and complete accord with Tina was such a blessing and also a curse. A blessing in that it symbolized the hope that there maybe a chance for her and Tina to once again live a life as one. But also a curse to have once again experience heaven only to be banished to the prison of her everyday existence from afar.
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I was just about to turn off the computer, and here I get this gift. I was hoping Tina would get into the discussion, but I like the little teasy bits with Shane as a good intro…well done.
Wow J, I can’t beleive I might have inspired something in your writing. Thank you, I don’t know what to say? Wait, maybe you should send a couple of chapter to me, so I can um look them over. LOL Well I hope Irene doesn’t get in over her head. But she is starting to ask question, and I hope Shane picks up on this. Tina is so nice she would never see it coming, and bette I don’t think so know that much about Irene yet. Yoda will have to used her jedi powers.
I love it, as usual, keep’em comming :):)
You capture their thought’s and feelings Perfectly as usual Jwet,great chapter. post soon.
lol..oh Tina, so clueless…as is Bette…lol, lovin’ it!!
I look every day for an update of this wonderful story. I’m happy to see that they seem to be going in the right direction. Please post soon, and thanks for giving my monitor a chance to recover, but if you need to write more NC17 scenes, I will more than understand!!!!
Wonderful as always good writing Jwet WOW! I like the way Irene say to Tina WOW you must have had an extremely GOOD TIME.. LOL and I’m really have a Good time read this Beatiful Story Thank you that was so Great Story I love it you always make my day Good you always GENTLE ON US the way you SAY.. Thank you we always here for your fanfic fan.
Hey Jwet, Well you know you left me speechless.. Still trying to catch my breath.. Hmm maybe I just didn’t understand it. MAybe I should read it a few more times… :) WAHOOO.! Cya.
As always reading your story, always puts a smile on my face. Looking forward to what is going to happen next.
K
That was perfect. Wonderful writing. Love it.
Great Story. I have been reading if from the beginning. YOu capture them so well. Can’t wait for the family to be together.
did I ever tell you how much I love this story?
Loved the last few chapters and I like Irene’s curiosity. I am slighlty uneasy that Tina will find out about Bette’s involvement in her career and be angry. I don’t think I could tolerate them coming apart again. I’m hoping you will be gentle with your readers please.
that was really great but i think they still shy to each other and a little “step in eggs” and they know each other very well to be like this i hope they move back together very soon but i know you are a teaser and this is not going to happen so easy..lol..thanks for another amazing chapter ;-)
great chapter as always,looking forward to the next one thanks
FANTASTIC…I LOVE HOW IRENE FEELS SO COMFORTABLE TALKING TO TINA…WHAT WILL TINA SAY…PLEASE POST SOON
Ok, so I’ve disappointed you by only commenting on your NC17 chapters. That’ll change from now on, I promise. This story is worth a comment for every chapter, so I profusely apologise for not commenting on the first 51! I did love every single one of them! If I have to go back to the beginning and leave a response on every chapter for you to believe me, I will. Ask Down Low, I always try and deliver my promises!!! xx
I had to catch up a few of your chapters from being on vacation. Their physical reconnection is beautiful. Your story get better and better.
Jwet, Thanks for the update. Your story remains intriguing. Keep well during your absence.
The BBQ turned out great but I guess living and working in the islands, you sort of take the ‘good life’ for granted. As for the story, another great emotional chapter. Keep up the good work.
So cute; yeah, Bette looks that way too. Nice use of a third party to reintroduce us to Tina and Bette.
Grrrreattttt….thanks.
Jwet, excellente as always. I keep imagining Tina’s face after Shane’s last comment… lol… I like this Bette but I don’t want especulate about what will do next… so I’ll be here up waiting… hehehe
I missed my author not e this time! I guess I was too stunned after Bette’s take to say anything.
What’s with Irene? She needs to MHOB and take care of Anna.
Thank you for getting B&T together. I think the family needs to be reunited – the sooner the better!
love the ending…made me laugh, cute. thanks.
Jwet, Great chapter. I was afraid I that I wasn’t going to get to read this chapter tonight, the site seems so slow. I felt that you captures the true essense of their feeling. I’ll be looking forward to the next chapter.
I was so happy to see a chapter from you. You have made my evening! It was wonderful as always!
Thank you, Jwet, for your beautifully written words and amazing ability to deliver them consistently. Great update!
Wow, I’m like the dead last commenter on this one! Another great chapter, it’s fun having Irene around to ask the outsider’s questions for us! I’m wondering what Alice is up to… is she still trying to redeem herself after the last article, or is she digging deeper? I love this story, the plot is very multidimensional, which is great!
Good chapter. Bette and Tina have a wonderful evening and awesome love scene, love it. They are so happy together and they want to do this slow and make sure everything is good. Bette is a little fear and afraid that she will mess up again but Tina will help her to go through with that fear and be happy with love and family. Ok I just wonder is Tina will answer Irene’s question. Post soon, thanks!
Oh living down here has it’s perks…blue sea, white sand…but then again the hurricanes can give you a good scare. Loved the chapter, feel sorry for Alice.
Jwet,
This story just imbues sweetness and tenderness and love (god dammit!) between Bette and Tina. This is due to you and your incredible gift. I know I have said it before but I’m gonna say it again: ‘Muchas gracias’ from me to you. The way these characters interact is such a honest and a genuine reflection of the show that in literally blows me away. I will now spend the rest of the day with that goofy grin that appears every time I read one of your chapters. A true delight!
Enquiring minds want to know:
Just how big were the smiles on Bette and Tina’s faces? When did Shane and Irene become Woodward and Bernstein? Who is their ‘deep throat’? Will Alice be pissed at this turn of events? Will Tina spill the beans about the night before? Is Shane capable of revealing any personal information? Can she be tempted by the Dark side? Will Irene be lured there?
Awaiting your next post as I am certain there will be more questions than answers provided.
Here to entertain and blush (in equal measures)
Your Loyal Fan.
Thank you so much my day is instantly better. I wish this was in book form, it is such a nasty day that I would love to curl up and read your story all day long. I guess I will just have to be patience (not one of my better attributes especially were your story is involved) I will desperately await your next post!
You grace us with your storytelling and you stand tall all alone. So, I see my Mate Jobadge owes you a few dozen comments. I can vouch for her…she’ll come through. BTW, she’s also a great tipper.
Hey Jwet, just loved this chapter, very nice thanks for the update.