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From Afar
Neither Dana nor Alice says anything for a long while letting Bettes words hang in the air as they absorb them and process them each to their own conclusion. Dana was left wondering how much of this tale applied to her but not wanting to go that far and Alice was still trying to reconcile Bette version of events with what had been Tinas account. The effect was that each remained deep in their own thoughts with little communication between them.
This silence continued until their lunch order arrived. Seeing the waitress Bette smiled at her friends I bet you wish she would have come sooner.
Dana looks up as the waitress arrives No Bette that good that you talked But all the while thinking the opposite as Bettes thoughts now had her thinking.
The remainder of the lunch passed quickly, Bette reminded them both about brunch tomorrow at the Planet when they parted at the conclusion of lunch. With thoughts of Bettes conversation staying with both Alice and Dana well after they left Bette for the day, the drive home was quiet as both girls were deep in their own thoughts and meanings.
Chapter 58 – Basking in the Warmth
Alice was standing in the shower just letting the force of the water physically beat her in an effort to match the mental beating she had been giving herself since leaving Bette yesterday afternoon. For Alice she just couldnt believe how much like her mother she was becoming. All the times Alice had watched the different relationships her mother would waltz through as Alice was growing up, Alice thought she had learned a thing or two. Apparently that is not the case. Alice had labeled her mother as such a drama queen, making herself totally dependent and needy of which ever new flame she was involved with. The outcome of this needless melodrama was the total invasion of the suitors life, like a frontal charge on the enemys front line. Leona would march in become involved in every aspect of the new beaus life, leaving very little room for Alice in the picture. This all consuming addiction of her mothers would consume Leonas every breathing second making her seems petty and selfish. Alices mother was always unable to share the guy even if he just wanted to get a beer with the guys. Alice was now thinking of the march she has made on Danas heart and how she just couldnt stand that Dana had other people in her life. How could I have become my mother? Alice was thinking to herself as she finished her shower. Jesus is this what Dana thinks?
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loved it! but i no its to good to b true
Beautifully written, as always. I just (still) hope Bette comes clean about the Foundation soon. Maybe before the dinner would be good? :)
What a wonderful family they are becoming :) So is the nanny into Shane? The dinner makes me nervous..
Ok in a better mood today. So lets see bette has 2 or 3 days to tell tina the truth!! I hope see doesn’t make a scam up so that everyone at the dinner knows to keep there mouth shut. ok I hope she tell tina, maybe there could be some drama, but then they could be fine. I waiting for the Irene/Helena story.
Ok in a better mood today. So lets see bette has 2 or 3 days to tell tina the truth!! I hope see doesn’t make a scam up so that everyone at the dinner knows to keep there mouth shut. ok I hope she tell tina, maybe there could be some drama, but then they could be fine. I waiting for the Irene/Helena story.
Ok in a better mood today. So lets see bette has 2 or 3 days to tell tina the truth!! I hope see doesn’t make a scam up so that everyone at the dinner knows to keep there mouth shut. ok I hope she tell tina, maybe there could be some drama, but then they could be fine. I waiting for the Irene/Helena story.
Oh Lordy, I think I feel a little trouble abrewing! Its all going too well!
*sigh* What a nice “family” photo.
Great story. Can’t wait for more!
Great update. I’m at odds at how Tina should react to Bette’s involvement with the foundation. I’m sure we can leave that in your trusted hands and creative mind. Eagerly await the rest! Thank you!
That was a picture perfect moment right there. Tina Bette and Anna where they belong. Together! Lovin it!!
Really lovely however I’m fearful of the secret and it’s power to create another rift just when they are reconnecting- I’ll deal with the tension if you won’t mess them up to bad. Thanks for writing it is always a wonderful pleasure to read your chapters.
BEAUTIFUL CHAPTER…IS BETTE FINALLY GOING TO GET CAUGHT?PLEASE POST REAL SOON..
Jwet, please keep all shoes, storms, drama and other ominous warnings at bay for awhile… just let them be happy, they and we…so deserve it.
I would love to see both of our favorite women get back together.”But” I’m not sure. We’ll just have to wait and see. I so loved the image of Bette carrying Anna and taking hold of Tina’s hand. Excellent Chapter, and I’m so looking forward to the next.
absolutely great Jwet, thanks. But toooo shooorrrrtttt!!!!! lol
Aw that is so beautiful, they are the perfect couple, love it. Post soon, thanks!
Great image of the couple…I mean the family…at the end.
So….dinner…is that the place where the road forks?
Beautiful, Love it, keep’em comming, hopefully forever :)
This was beautiful. What a great way to wake up. But I feel some heavy drama coming on……..
Aw, woo! Beautiful as always Jwet. Masterful.
Aww, so cute, I love the last chapter…I can totally vision B&T&A walking into the Planet as one happy family…so cute! Awesome JWET!
Great chapter, as always, looking forward to your next. Please post soon.
ohh that was so sweet they really look content and please dont mess with a happy family..lol..but i know you something will gonna happen in this dinner..lol…great chapter i cant wait for the next ;-)
I lived in Barbados for 3 years whilst I was at college. It’s a really fun place. If you do pick up from where your boss left off you’ll have a fun time! I live in Antigua but I’m not Antiguan…I’m Trinidadian (Trinidad is the most southernly island of them all…about 6 miles north of Venezuela). Antigua is really nice…very small and ‘touristy’ but they’ve got over 365 beaches…so that’s 1 beach for every day of the year!!! As for the story, I’m scared about the MYV Dinner; I fear Tina may learn of Bette’s involvement from someone other than Bette. That might be good, a little angst and drama delaying the reunion and drawing the stroy out further. Hmmmm? However, I’m LOVING mommy Bette. If this were a real life couple Anna would be the luckiest person alive!!!
Oops, I meant the last paragraph*
Alice is agitated and troubled. She suspects the low-down on the Foundation. Bette, Tina and Anna are the picture of familial bliss.
Why do I get this feeling of the calm before the storm?
Thanks for posting another chapter!
Just caught up after a busy weekend. I, too, love Bette as Mommy. And I can’t wait to see where Alice and Dana go with all their thinking.
that was absolutely beautiful! the emotion between them is SO richly expressed in your writing, thank you for this sweet chapter!
Awesome JWET! Seriously… It’s like you to me by the hand and walk my thru their lives. I feel what they feel so strongly. The tears, the laughter. All of it. Your story, your writing. I just can’t get enough of it. OK getting all sappy now. It’s just so AWESOME.. :)
K
Such a sweet chapter for B and T. Love this story, hope it stays happy lol.
so nice bit i too feel like there is another shoe that is hangin in the air, fixin to make it’s way down…
(LWordFanatic) Ok I loved the picture you just created in that last post, but I can so see the impendind drama that will unfold. Please be gentle. “The calm before the storm” — indeed!
That was beautiful Jwet, but me thinks something is going to happen at the MYV Foundation Awards Dinner, aaahhh.
Thanks for the upate.