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    From Afar

    Story written on July 7, 2005 by Jwet.
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    Chapter 75 – Tell … Don’t Tell

     

    At the pounding in her head, Dana knew she was going to make
    Alice pay.  Alice
    get up! with that Dana grab the sheets with both hands and pulled up
    dislodging Alice from her cozy little cocoon that help keep her in her dream
    state.  

     

    With all the motion on the bed, Alice finally moved from her stupor and
    raised her head, smacking her lips.   Peeling
    open one eye, she looks around and sees Dana and asks God did a whole army
    walk though my mouth.  I think I have
    something growing on my tongue. 
    Beginning to smack again, Alice
    looks at Dana and sort of realizes she is a little angry.  Hey Dane what?  Arent you going to practice or something? Alice says all this with
    her one eye still closed.

     

    Yeah that was the plan until someone had to bomb the house
    last night.  Ive got this headache that
    wont quit. Dana chastises Alice
    as she makes her way to the shower, hoping the shower would help.  As the hot water beat on Danas forehead she
    let her mind recall last night with Alice.  What a discovery Alice made last night.  Dana wondered exactly what Alice was going to do with that
    information.  It was quite explosive if
    Tina had no idea.  Dana then wondered if
    Tina knew.  If she didnt was it really Alices job to tell
    her.  After that lunch they had with
    Bette, Dana just couldnt imagine Bette not telling Tina.  God wasnt that the downfall of their last
    relationship, Bette not being honest with Tina. 
    At this thought Dana had to get out of the shower and ask Alice some questions.

     

    Hey Alice,
    what are you going to do with your discovery? Dana yells from the
    bathroom.  Not getting any answer she
    puts her robe on and uses her towel to rub her wet hair.  Hey Al.Al making her way back to the
    bedroom where Alice
    is still stretched out over the bed.  Al
    get up. Dana yells. 

     

    What?? Dana what do you want? Alice asks annoyed at Danas persistence this
    morning.  Dont you have practice?

     

    Yeah I do but before I leave I was wondering what you are
    doing to do with the information you discovered last night? Dana asks Alice as she is now
    standing over her.

     

    At this question Alice
    pries open both eyes and pick up her head and looks at Dana.  What info?

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    1. Thank goodness that Dana is there to be the voice of reason. Without her, Alice has no ability to censor herself. It’s apparent that Alice has never given any creedance to the phrases “mind your own buisness” or “just leave things alone”. I think the gang should play the game ‘Scruples’ with Alice…that would be an eye opener for all of them! Curious to see how Tina will react when/if Alice divulges her information. It could backfire if Tina sees it as an intrusion in their private lives that maybe wasn’t necessary.

      I do so enjoy the way that you are able to get Bette and Tina to convey so much to each other, with so little conversation. Excellent.

    3. Hey, now it’s my turn to do the happy dance! I’m so glad things are working out for Bette and Tina! You are amazing and sweet, Jwet! I meant every word!

    4. I love Dana & Al… and all between B&T but I don’t… i feel that “você está aprontado algo”… I keep enjoying it every little word, every little emotion… every little thing you out on the screen… so Jwet you’re faboulous.

    5. Where there is a will there is an ALice. Alice and Dana are so funny. Bette and Tina are so sweet and adorable, and well there are so many words I could describe them with but i won’t. Loving it!!

    6. Hello Jwet:I am so glad to see Dana and Alice interaction. I am enjoying myself with each chapter that you bring to us…I’ll be catching th next one when you send it ti us. Excellent job.

    11. jwet *thud*. i’m so happy. this was so good. al better keep under control. even tho t knows she’ll probably get herself into trouble. i know, there has to be drama, but some good times is good too. keep it coming. thanks

    14. Fantastic update mate, I love the unsaid emotions between these two. This is how we all want to see them, and its only you that has been able to achieve that! Great Job xx

    15. Great,just great im so glad you went this way with the story instead of Tina getting all pissed about it (as alot of us expected..lol)all Bettes hard work was worth it,so poor Alice all excited and for nothing, too cute! lol thanks really enjoying this story

    16. OMG..i have no words to describe how happy i am with that happy family..and about Alice she is too much even for herself..lol..but i love her..you made my day Jwet..have a nice day thank :-)

    17. Goody goody…just the right touch of tender moments!!! Think there’ll be some hilarious moments when it comes to Alice just having to tell Tina about her discovery! Can’t wait!! after the devastating london bombing news, this made my day so much better! Thanks!!

    20. Thanx Jwet for that. I’m a Brit and as you might have heard, there have been 7 bomb explosions in London, so…not a great day for us… Anyway, your up-lifting account has helped brighten up my day, even if just a little bit.

    21. Welcome back! A roller-coaster two days in UK – first the Olympics announcement and now today’s tragic events. Have just had to turn back from London and so the safe-haven of this current episode has been soothing.

    22. just read my comment, wtf was i trying to say. shouldn’t post before going to the gym at 5 in the morning. my other comment is – do you have a direct line to skipton or seahurst. if you do please ask them nicely to post. its been so very long. miss there stories also. if i didn’t make any sense before. loved this chappy and al better control herself and not make t crazy by any comments she makes. i know drama but some quiet moments are good also. thanks.

    23. So great to read another update…You have an amazing story here…right from the beginning it was engaging and has improved with every chapter. Very impressive…I’m glad to read you’ve got several more chapters up your sleeve…

    25. aahhh sweet bliss. So nice to finally see them all ‘sexy in love’ again.
      Can’t wait to see how Alice broaches the subject with Tina…should be funny.
      I hope that Bette tells Tina about all the nasty things Helena’s been saying so Tina can go kick her a$$…not that I wouldn’t want Bette to do the deed…hehe. I don’t care who does it, but Helena needs to be taken to the curb like the trash that she is!
      Can’t wait for the next one!!!

    26. Well worth the wait. I think that they have slme catching up to do!!! I think that they should show each other just how good they are!!!! Post soon.

    27. Damn babies have the worst tyming. It’s all good though. Your writing have me feeling all quesy inside, I’ve got love at first sight butterflies yet I’m “known” you; I mean your writing for at least 3 months now. You know it has to be real love. Your attention to detail within your story is what makes your writing so great. Thank you for the tyme and love you put in your writing. It is so appreciative and enjoyed.

    30. You totally kick ass… Alice and Dana are so funny together… and what can I say about b&t but.. ahh sweet love!
      No, no… thank you!

    32. Thanks again for a great chapter…”just a little loving early in the morning”… thanks for the moment it was so sweet. Hope Irene doesnt find Bette clothes all over the place :-)

    33. Wow Jwet, that was simply AWESOME!!! It is all coming together now. I just hope Alice doesn’t cause a huge set back by being so intent on finding out about the MYF. That is really not going to be good if she causing a problem for Tina. Even though Tina knows Alice has a way of messing things up.

    35. Jwet,
      You are soo the mistress of this marvelous melodrama.
      The way you have played off Dana and Alice’s hilarious conversation against the truly gentle, tender and loving interplay of Bette and Tina is delicious and delectable. These scenes flow effortlessly and seamlessly together like yin and yang: separate but belonging together.
      This could have been cheesy and clunky in a lesser talented hands however you have yet again displayed the genuine artist’s touch and feel for romance and comedy.
      What I want answers to:
      How big was the fish that got away? ((————–)) this big? DO the dogs have outfits for dancing? Bit of Spandex and glitter?
      Do Tina and Dana have the same size feet? Will Dana get drug tested at her next competitive match? IS Alice capable of keeping her big mouth shut? Will Alice burst if she cannot tell someone?
      How do children have such impeccable timings? Is in God given or do they just acquire it?
      Final note,
      I hope that you continue this story as it brings so much pleasure and enjoyment to myself and all the other readers. Your aptitude and storytelling abilities would be sorely missed.
      Thank you for sharing,
      Your Loyal Fan.

    36. it was great to have B tell T everything, well almost everything and see tina open her arms and bring Bette some peace. I’m glad there “good”. Thank god for dana right now otherwise Alice would have been on Tina’s doorstep.

    40. Hey Jwet, I had withdrawal problems yesterday so I went back to re-read the first few chapters and my favorite chapter, where Tina took Bette on their “first” date. I had tears in my eyes at the moment of Anna’s birth – Tina “felt” Bette was there. Can’t wait for the moment of discovery by Tina that Bette was indeed there.

      I just love the way you write Alice; Dana is a good influence on Alice. I can’t wait till Alice and Tina share their secrets and realizes how much Bette scraficed for Tina and Anna.

      I’m so long winded today; oh yeah, I guess I got my wish; you wrote more than 20….even 30 chapters since the “date” chapter!

      Thank you so much for sharing your time and talent. I’m one happy chinesegirl!

    44. Seriously, I love all your chapters!! I’m still here in the Philippines…it’s so hard to find computers here with internet…I’m at a local mall right now…hehe…don’t worry, I promise to catch up as soon as I can. Thanks Jwet for the awesome chapter, I don’t think you’ll read this comment…hehe.

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