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From Afar
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Bette felt a sense of contentment and happiness. This was the first awareness that spread
through every pore and into every space of her thoughts as she slowly awoke and
her mind began to grasp where she was.
Even before her eyes were open a slow smile spread across her face. This was the first clue to Tina had that
Bette was waking as she had her snuggled close in the crook of her arm. Tina had been watching Bette sleep for a short
while now just enjoying the sight before she would have to rise to attend to
Anna.
As Bette slowly began to open her eyes, she immediately
looks up into Tinas loving eyes. Oh the
pure joy of this moment. This had been
everything Bette had dreamed of and remembered all wrapped into one
vision. Tina, her Tina, looking down
upon her as she woke. This had been one
of Bettes dreams to wake to those loving eyes once again. The reality of this moment far exceeded any
remembrance or fond memory that Bette had been capable of summoning up. The joy was evident in every mannerism that
was Bette as she looked up into Tinas eyes.
I love you Tina Kennard Bette whispered from the bottom of her heart.
At the quiet almost revered softness of Bettes voice made
the meaning of her words all the more poignant as tears threatened to overflow
her eyes as Bettes words pierced Tinas heart as only Bette could. I love you too Tina whispered with the same
soft sincerity. As the words washed over
Bettes face the happiness which radiated from her eyes made Tina catch her
breath. The gasp she heard was from her
own mouth as she realized just how lucky she was to have Bette here with
her. Slowly she brought the head down
and pressed her lips to Bettes to seal all the feelings she was having and
communicate them back to Bette. The kiss
was slow and meaningful as Tina put all her love into the kiss.
Bette closed her eyes as she saw Tinas approaching lips,
waiting for the moment of contact as she wanted nothing more than to
communicate her love through her kiss.
What Bette felt as Tina took control, the bond that was between them
made Bette feel as if there was no other place in the world that mattered. Just being here, right now in this bed, being
loved by Tina was all that Bette ever wanted or needed. Just as Bette was moving to return Tinas
kiss they both hear Anna begin to stir through the monitor. As Tina pulled back, Bette opened her eyes,
still the two of them communicated their love as they both knew they had to get
up.
Well thats my wake up call. Ill be right back. Tina said as she began
to get out of bed.
OK but before you go.
Are we good? Bette asked just to make sure she wasnt dreaming.
Oh were good. Tina responded quickly. I just wish I could show you how good.
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Thank goodness that Dana is there to be the voice of reason. Without her, Alice has no ability to censor herself. It’s apparent that Alice has never given any creedance to the phrases “mind your own buisness” or “just leave things alone”. I think the gang should play the game ‘Scruples’ with Alice…that would be an eye opener for all of them! Curious to see how Tina will react when/if Alice divulges her information. It could backfire if Tina sees it as an intrusion in their private lives that maybe wasn’t necessary.
I do so enjoy the way that you are able to get Bette and Tina to convey so much to each other, with so little conversation. Excellent.
Jwet, wonderful chapter again! This installment provided a much needed break after hearing the news coming from London today. Thank you.
Hey, now it’s my turn to do the happy dance! I’m so glad things are working out for Bette and Tina! You are amazing and sweet, Jwet! I meant every word!
I love Dana & Al… and all between B&T but I don’t… i feel that “você está aprontado algo”… I keep enjoying it every little word, every little emotion… every little thing you out on the screen… so Jwet you’re faboulous.
Where there is a will there is an ALice. Alice and Dana are so funny. Bette and Tina are so sweet and adorable, and well there are so many words I could describe them with but i won’t. Loving it!!
Hello Jwet:I am so glad to see Dana and Alice interaction. I am enjoying myself with each chapter that you bring to us…I’ll be catching th next one when you send it ti us. Excellent job.
Yeah, i agree with Christy. famally, great and sweet chapter. Please post soon
Oh their good , i’m good and you are ohhhhh soooo good. thnx Jwet great chapter.
So good. Finally. At Last.
oh they are soooooo goood
jwet *thud*. i’m so happy. this was so good. al better keep under control. even tho t knows she’ll probably get herself into trouble. i know, there has to be drama, but some good times is good too. keep it coming. thanks
Hunty38 is on the money. This is all your vision, your huge talent, and your excellent storytelling.
Now let’s make sure that good is at the low end of things. Looking forward to moving to better and best.
Fantastic update mate, I love the unsaid emotions between these two. This is how we all want to see them, and its only you that has been able to achieve that! Great Job xx
Great,just great im so glad you went this way with the story instead of Tina getting all pissed about it (as alot of us expected..lol)all Bettes hard work was worth it,so poor Alice all excited and for nothing, too cute! lol thanks really enjoying this story
OMG..i have no words to describe how happy i am with that happy family..and about Alice she is too much even for herself..lol..but i love her..you made my day Jwet..have a nice day thank :-)
Goody goody…just the right touch of tender moments!!! Think there’ll be some hilarious moments when it comes to Alice just having to tell Tina about her discovery! Can’t wait!! after the devastating london bombing news, this made my day so much better! Thanks!!
Wonderful as usual. Bette and TIna happy the best story.
EXCELLENT!!! I am so glad Tina has a better understanding then Alice obviously does…Great writing can’t wait to read more….
Thanx Jwet for that. I’m a Brit and as you might have heard, there have been 7 bomb explosions in London, so…not a great day for us… Anyway, your up-lifting account has helped brighten up my day, even if just a little bit.
Welcome back! A roller-coaster two days in UK – first the Olympics announcement and now today’s tragic events. Have just had to turn back from London and so the safe-haven of this current episode has been soothing.
just read my comment, wtf was i trying to say. shouldn’t post before going to the gym at 5 in the morning. my other comment is – do you have a direct line to skipton or seahurst. if you do please ask them nicely to post. its been so very long. miss there stories also. if i didn’t make any sense before. loved this chappy and al better control herself and not make t crazy by any comments she makes. i know drama but some quiet moments are good also. thanks.
So great to read another update…You have an amazing story here…right from the beginning it was engaging and has improved with every chapter. Very impressive…I’m glad to read you’ve got several more chapters up your sleeve…
please keep the love longer…no more dyke dramas! at least for now ok???? thank you
aahhh sweet bliss. So nice to finally see them all ‘sexy in love’ again.
Can’t wait to see how Alice broaches the subject with Tina…should be funny.
I hope that Bette tells Tina about all the nasty things Helena’s been saying so Tina can go kick her a$$…not that I wouldn’t want Bette to do the deed…hehe. I don’t care who does it, but Helena needs to be taken to the curb like the trash that she is!
Can’t wait for the next one!!!
Well worth the wait. I think that they have slme catching up to do!!! I think that they should show each other just how good they are!!!! Post soon.
Damn babies have the worst tyming. It’s all good though. Your writing have me feeling all quesy inside, I’ve got love at first sight butterflies yet I’m “known” you; I mean your writing for at least 3 months now. You know it has to be real love. Your attention to detail within your story is what makes your writing so great. Thank you for the tyme and love you put in your writing. It is so appreciative and enjoyed.
Hey Jwet, fantastic and oh so so good..
Thank you.
K
Wonderful chapter, so glad they are good. Looking forward to more.
You totally kick ass… Alice and Dana are so funny together… and what can I say about b&t but.. ahh sweet love!
No, no… thank you!
“we plotted out the next 10 chapters…” Hooray!
Thanks again for a great chapter…”just a little loving early in the morning”… thanks for the moment it was so sweet. Hope Irene doesnt find Bette clothes all over the place :-)
Wow Jwet, that was simply AWESOME!!! It is all coming together now. I just hope Alice doesn’t cause a huge set back by being so intent on finding out about the MYF. That is really not going to be good if she causing a problem for Tina. Even though Tina knows Alice has a way of messing things up.
sooooo good…GREAT JOB AS ALWAYS THANKS
Jwet,
You are soo the mistress of this marvelous melodrama.
The way you have played off Dana and Alice’s hilarious conversation against the truly gentle, tender and loving interplay of Bette and Tina is delicious and delectable. These scenes flow effortlessly and seamlessly together like yin and yang: separate but belonging together.
This could have been cheesy and clunky in a lesser talented hands however you have yet again displayed the genuine artist’s touch and feel for romance and comedy.
What I want answers to:
How big was the fish that got away? ((————–)) this big? DO the dogs have outfits for dancing? Bit of Spandex and glitter?
Do Tina and Dana have the same size feet? Will Dana get drug tested at her next competitive match? IS Alice capable of keeping her big mouth shut? Will Alice burst if she cannot tell someone?
How do children have such impeccable timings? Is in God given or do they just acquire it?
Final note,
I hope that you continue this story as it brings so much pleasure and enjoyment to myself and all the other readers. Your aptitude and storytelling abilities would be sorely missed.
Thank you for sharing,
Your Loyal Fan.
it was great to have B tell T everything, well almost everything and see tina open her arms and bring Bette some peace. I’m glad there “good”. Thank god for dana right now otherwise Alice would have been on Tina’s doorstep.
trusting you still. let them enjoy each other for while. it going to be funny just see how long alice can keep this to her self
Once again great storytelling. I hope you have Bette tell Tina that she was at the birth.Can’t wait for the next chapter.
You do good wake up ;) Good it be in sweeter? ahh.. perhaps with their daughter smiling and giggling with them in bed. Alice, Alice..
Hey Jwet, I had withdrawal problems yesterday so I went back to re-read the first few chapters and my favorite chapter, where Tina took Bette on their “first” date. I had tears in my eyes at the moment of Anna’s birth – Tina “felt” Bette was there. Can’t wait for the moment of discovery by Tina that Bette was indeed there.
I just love the way you write Alice; Dana is a good influence on Alice. I can’t wait till Alice and Tina share their secrets and realizes how much Bette scraficed for Tina and Anna.
I’m so long winded today; oh yeah, I guess I got my wish; you wrote more than 20….even 30 chapters since the “date” chapter!
Thank you so much for sharing your time and talent. I’m one happy chinesegirl!
I loved the interplay between Alice and Dana and this line was just perfect;“I just wish I could show you how good.â€
awesome jwet!
Al and Dana are too funny. I can’t wait to see how Bette will tell Tina her last secret.
Seriously, I love all your chapters!! I’m still here in the Philippines…it’s so hard to find computers here with internet…I’m at a local mall right now…hehe…don’t worry, I promise to catch up as soon as I can. Thanks Jwet for the awesome chapter, I don’t think you’ll read this comment…hehe.
Good chapter. Yes they are so damn good, love them!