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    From Afar

    Jackie made her way into Tinas office sometime later.  Popping her head in  Hey, so did your evening turn out OK?

     

    Hey Jackie, Thanks for taking care of the pictures and
    letting me run out that way.  Did you get
    out of there OK then? Tina asks as she leans back in her chair.

     

    Oh yeah, The pictures went well.  You know they will look so great on our Wall
    of Awards. Jackie says.

     

    Thats it. Tina says almost to herself.

     

    Jackie hearing Tina just looks at her Whats it?

     

    Tina looks up to Jackie with a knowing look I was just
    sitting here marveling at how there is nothing here that stands up and shouts
    Bette Porter but you know the wall is it. 
    It shouts Bette to me its the one thing that has her fingerprints all
    over it.

     

    Chapter 77 – Confirmation

     

    Jackie just stared at Tina. 
    It wasnt a question about what Bette had influenced or even if it was
    Bette.  No it was a statement of fact
    about Bette.  The question was what Bettes
    lingering touch was.  Jackie didnt know
    what to say.  If it had been Alice she would ignore
    the Bette reference as just a fishing expedition.  But with Tina this wasnt her style.  She really knows.  The only thing that Jackie could conclude was
    that Bette must have told her.  After
    processing Tinas single statement this far, Jackie hoped Bette had in fact
    told her and not someone else.  Then Tina
    would be on a fishing trip and Jackie decided she wasnt about to reveal any
    more without Tina confiding more.

     

    Looking intently at Tina, Jackie continued on with her
    conversation as if Tina had revealed nothing. 
    Well Im hoping we get some nice life size prints which will bring the
    whole wall to life.  It will be such a
    nice statement as people walk in.

     

    It was Tinas turn to look at Jackie.  As she considered her, Tina was deciding how
    much she wanted to ask Jackie about Bettes involvement versus how much she
    wanted to hear from Bette herself.  Tina
    knew she wanted to understand how Bette put this all together but she didnt
    want to make Jackie uncomfortable.  Tina
    just knew Bette would tell her anything she needed to know.  This made her smile a coy cat eating the
    canary smile.

     

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    Comments

    1. Jwet – you’re such a gem; each of your chapters keeps me glued to my computer screen (when I need stronger glasses, I shall blame you?!!).

      To be honest, I don’t know how I want Alice/Tina/Bette and this secret to play out. I liked how you always used Alice as comic relief and to share information, but you also use Alice as the path between Tina and Bette. Then again, you didn’t let Alice know that Bette was in the delivery room. I keep wondering if Bette will tell her or will Dr. Wilson “let slip” that Bette was there; prehaps when they have to take Anna in for a routine check-up? Of course, these and other questions I have not thought of will be answered? Soon?

      Thanks for such a wonderful story; you continue to paint a lovely portrait of people with love in their hearts.

    2. lol..i cant with Alice…she works even more when she wants to find out somebodys secret..lol..and she is dying to tell Tina her discovery..lol..great chapter Jewt…am i first? yep

    3. Hello! Jwet Whoa! I love Alice LOL! She is so funny she is trying really hard where Bette did the Money come from I love it Jwet it’s getting Interesting I guess Thanks Jwet I’m really Hooked about too where did she get that too? Big Money $100 million LOL! Okay Jwet I’m just can’t wait for you to posted again PLEASE!!!!

    4. great as always Jwet! Alice lifts her head and breaths in through her nose, she can just smell where she needs to go. LOL! I’m waiting patiently for B&T conv about Anna’s birth, I know it’s wrote somewhere on your post-it :)

    5. we gotta give it to alice….she’s so damn good at what she’s doing!!! too bad porter beat her to it…wonderful as always my friend!

    6. two chapters huh? whoa!! it’s ok.. i’ll restart the countdown again… you have already make it up to me by extending the HMS scene! LOL *goes back to read the chapter*

    7. what you do to me, *sigh*. i love this story. so glad that the elephant is gone. al maybe should go to bette. cuz she could get it wrong and fudge things up. ahhh. some HMS. that will be nice, really nice. post soon.

    8. Hey Jwet, loved the banter between Jackie and Tina neither one of them wanting to give too much away…very nice. Alice, well she always brings a smile to my face you have her down to a T…lol…now what are bear claws Jwet.
      Great Chapter and Thank you.

    9. Sorry about not commenting every chapter…this story is so wonderfully written, that I find myself just as excited to read the next chapter now, as I was when you first started writing it. Thanks so much for the incredible amount of time and talent you put into creating, and then telling this story!

    10. Hi Jwet! You’ve done a fantastic job, once again! As I was reading this chapter I beagan to realize another appealing thing about your story…even the side characters like Jackie, Grace and James have a depth to them that is palpable. You obviously put a lot of thought and care in the development of each chapter and for that I am really grateful! Thanks for the time spent on creating this rich body of work! (Now, that said…can I have a cookie?;) Please post again soon!!!!

    11. Great chapter, I love the inter action between Jackie and Tina. Jackie:The famous Bette Porter has finally met her match in Tina -Good shot. But Jwet I need a little help please I may be a little dense but I don’t see the connection between MYV and For Tina my love. Could you please help me out. Thanks, and Holla back soon.

    12. JWet,
      This story just gets more and more delicious as time goes by and some of the answers unfold.
      The chess game between Tina and Jackie was wonderfully realised. You managed to convey the inner workings of both characters as they each tried to jab then parry their opponent in to confessing their real motive. The threads of this secret finally unraveled after much nit picking by both parties.
      Jackie’s sense of relief is matched by mine own as a reader. At last the truth will set us free!
      Now Alice’s dilemma has a poetic justice as she tries to ferret away at the truth while we all know that Tina is conscious of the broad brush strokes if not all of the fine details yet. Also, the morning after the night before is always interesting as self awareness can be a cruel mistress.
      Shane’s gentle teasing is wondrous as Alice tries to get her brain and gear to rev up and roar out the comic comebacks. I love the whole “Buying the bakery” conversation.
      You have totally nailed all the quirks and idiosyncrasies as dialogue traits of all the main players.
      Questions to be answered in the next chapter (hopefully) include:
      Did Jackie have the proverbially angel on one side with the devil on the other as she resolved how to play it with Tina? Do Tina and Jackie have poker faces? Will a trip to Vegas be on the cards? Will a chess match between Karpov and Jackie be the next fund-raising event for the MYV foundation?
      Does Shane provide lessons in her uncanny ability to see every thing that is going on around her? What blackmail technique has Dana really used to shut Alice up? Is Alice gonna visit Peggy Peabody as that money had to come from someone? Was Melvin related to the Getty’s or Hughes’ for that size of bankroll?
      Will be waiting with much anticipation for your next post.
      Hope you have a fabulous weekend; fishing, friend and family. And not forget the boat.
      Your Loyal Fan

    13. Alice, girl- you late!
      I’m going to enjoy watching Alice snoop out the foundation, after everyone else knows all about it!
      Thanks for letting it be all good between Tina and Bette. I don’t think I could stand the angst of another breakup between them!

    14. hey- i’ve been a little MIA of late and for that i apologize. life is insane as usual but just wanted to let you know how much i enjoy your updates. hope alls well and thanks again.

    15. Well, after the night that Alice had it’s better that she can smell where to go, rather than she just…smells.

      I loved the interaction between Jackie and Tina. Sort of like watching two people fencing. I’m glad that Jackie told Tina that Bette turned in her key. That again, should make it easier for Tina to see that Bette didn’t orchestrate everything.

      I’m getting the feeling that Alice is in a sprint race, but will arrive at the finish line only to find that she came in last. Of course, that’s alright with me.

      Can’t wait to see where this goes next.

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