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At that Tina laughs Really?
Oh Yeah, she turned her key in long ago and hasnt been
involved in any of the decisions around here since you arrived on deck. Jackie
shares with Tina this little tidbit.
Wow Tina once again is surprised.
Yeah she stuck to her word.
She said she could walk away and thats exactly what she did. To be honest I kind of miss her. Jackie now
reminisces a little. You know we had
competed so hard against each other that I always had a healthy respect for
her. But working side by side with her
was a rare experience. I had so much fun
just coming in everyday and seeing all that she had gotten done. It actually became a little competitive as we
both sometimes dont know when to call it quits. Jackie says this last with a fondness that
comes from mutual respect and friendship.
Hard to believe that you two would be so competitive. Tina
tried to say with a straight face but failed miserably.
***
was just arriving at the Planet, a little later than normal. It seemed that Dana would never leave for
practice. Of course all the excitement
about her discovery was the main reason for Dana being late as well.
was still thrilled about her discovery.
It really amazed her how she put that puzzle together. She actually was patting herself on the back
for her brilliant mind or some would say her brilliant weed. She still cant believe how Dana had gotten
her to promise not to do anything until they both decided what to do. As
thought about it now she was left wondering just how Dana had done that, humph.
Oh well
says as she opens the door and walks up to the counter.
is looking at all the sweets on display in the glass counter as she is really
hungry this morning. In her hurry to
view the spread of sweets that lay before her she missed that Shane was at the
counter actually finishing her order of triple shot espresso with a cup of
regular coffee on the side.
As the girl asks
could help her,
finally looks up from the display of baked goods Yeah I think Ill have a
cranberry scone and one of those carrot cake thingys and yeah one of
those muffins and a large regular coffee.
goody.
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Jwet – you’re such a gem; each of your chapters keeps me glued to my computer screen (when I need stronger glasses, I shall blame you?!!).
To be honest, I don’t know how I want Alice/Tina/Bette and this secret to play out. I liked how you always used Alice as comic relief and to share information, but you also use Alice as the path between Tina and Bette. Then again, you didn’t let Alice know that Bette was in the delivery room. I keep wondering if Bette will tell her or will Dr. Wilson “let slip” that Bette was there; prehaps when they have to take Anna in for a routine check-up? Of course, these and other questions I have not thought of will be answered? Soon?
Thanks for such a wonderful story; you continue to paint a lovely portrait of people with love in their hearts.
Thanks for another incredible chapter!
so someone is having fun before us huh??? kidding Jwet. another wonderful chapter that let me here praying for you post soon. *wink*
lol..i cant with Alice…she works even more when she wants to find out somebodys secret..lol..and she is dying to tell Tina her discovery..lol..great chapter Jewt…am i first? yep
Great story Jwet. Love the play between Jackie and Tina. Bette did good telling Tina. Keep up the good work. post soon
Great as usual, And Alice…. well she’s Alice… LOL. Yeah Golf, love that game. Please post again soon, I’m addicted. ;)
Hello! Jwet Whoa! I love Alice LOL! She is so funny she is trying really hard where Bette did the Money come from I love it Jwet it’s getting Interesting I guess Thanks Jwet I’m really Hooked about too where did she get that too? Big Money $100 million LOL! Okay Jwet I’m just can’t wait for you to posted again PLEASE!!!!
great as always Jwet! Alice lifts her head and breaths in through her nose, she can just smell where she needs to go. LOL! I’m waiting patiently for B&T conv about Anna’s birth, I know it’s wrote somewhere on your post-it :)
brilliant as ever
we gotta give it to alice….she’s so damn good at what she’s doing!!! too bad porter beat her to it…wonderful as always my friend!
two chapters huh? whoa!! it’s ok.. i’ll restart the countdown again… you have already make it up to me by extending the HMS scene! LOL *goes back to read the chapter*
Mmmm… Alice mischief, you know I love it! Brilliant weed! lmao… Loved it all.
what you do to me, *sigh*. i love this story. so glad that the elephant is gone. al maybe should go to bette. cuz she could get it wrong and fudge things up. ahhh. some HMS. that will be nice, really nice. post soon.
Jwet…another fab chapter! Thanks
Hey Jwet, loved the banter between Jackie and Tina neither one of them wanting to give too much away…very nice. Alice, well she always brings a smile to my face you have her down to a T…lol…now what are bear claws Jwet.
Great Chapter and Thank you.
What can I say, You got the super-cool, super-sexy and super cute Bette down to a tee in every chapter. Another great chapter.
K
Great chapter as always. I hope Alice doesn’t cause any harm. Can’t wait for more.
Now I just have to wait for your postings..great chapter and I can’t wait for Tina and Bette to talk more. Hmmm..birth of the baby. ; )
Sorry about not commenting every chapter…this story is so wonderfully written, that I find myself just as excited to read the next chapter now, as I was when you first started writing it. Thanks so much for the incredible amount of time and talent you put into creating, and then telling this story!
Hi Jwet! You’ve done a fantastic job, once again! As I was reading this chapter I beagan to realize another appealing thing about your story…even the side characters like Jackie, Grace and James have a depth to them that is palpable. You obviously put a lot of thought and care in the development of each chapter and for that I am really grateful! Thanks for the time spent on creating this rich body of work! (Now, that said…can I have a cookie?;) Please post again soon!!!!
Poor Alice…searching out the mystery that’s already been dissipated.
Great chapter, I love the inter action between Jackie and Tina. Jackie:The famous Bette Porter has finally met her match in Tina -Good shot. But Jwet I need a little help please I may be a little dense but I don’t see the connection between MYV and For Tina my love. Could you please help me out. Thanks, and Holla back soon.
JWet,
This story just gets more and more delicious as time goes by and some of the answers unfold.
The chess game between Tina and Jackie was wonderfully realised. You managed to convey the inner workings of both characters as they each tried to jab then parry their opponent in to confessing their real motive. The threads of this secret finally unraveled after much nit picking by both parties.
Jackie’s sense of relief is matched by mine own as a reader. At last the truth will set us free!
Now Alice’s dilemma has a poetic justice as she tries to ferret away at the truth while we all know that Tina is conscious of the broad brush strokes if not all of the fine details yet. Also, the morning after the night before is always interesting as self awareness can be a cruel mistress.
Shane’s gentle teasing is wondrous as Alice tries to get her brain and gear to rev up and roar out the comic comebacks. I love the whole “Buying the bakery†conversation.
You have totally nailed all the quirks and idiosyncrasies as dialogue traits of all the main players.
Questions to be answered in the next chapter (hopefully) include:
Did Jackie have the proverbially angel on one side with the devil on the other as she resolved how to play it with Tina? Do Tina and Jackie have poker faces? Will a trip to Vegas be on the cards? Will a chess match between Karpov and Jackie be the next fund-raising event for the MYV foundation?
Does Shane provide lessons in her uncanny ability to see every thing that is going on around her? What blackmail technique has Dana really used to shut Alice up? Is Alice gonna visit Peggy Peabody as that money had to come from someone? Was Melvin related to the Getty’s or Hughes’ for that size of bankroll?
Will be waiting with much anticipation for your next post.
Hope you have a fabulous weekend; fishing, friend and family. And not forget the boat.
Your Loyal Fan
I’m so happy that Bette told Tina….Great job Jwet as ususal…Alice is crazy lady..THANK YOU….
Alice, girl- you late!
I’m going to enjoy watching Alice snoop out the foundation, after everyone else knows all about it!
Thanks for letting it be all good between Tina and Bette. I don’t think I could stand the angst of another breakup between them!
hey- i’ve been a little MIA of late and for that i apologize. life is insane as usual but just wanted to let you know how much i enjoy your updates. hope alls well and thanks again.
A dog with a bone!!!!!!!!!
I’m really looking forward to Alice’s reaction when Tina says “I know Alice..” LOL! I look forward to every chapter :)
Well, after the night that Alice had it’s better that she can smell where to go, rather than she just…smells.
I loved the interaction between Jackie and Tina. Sort of like watching two people fencing. I’m glad that Jackie told Tina that Bette turned in her key. That again, should make it easier for Tina to see that Bette didn’t orchestrate everything.
I’m getting the feeling that Alice is in a sprint race, but will arrive at the finish line only to find that she came in last. Of course, that’s alright with me.
Can’t wait to see where this goes next.
Damn Alice is crazy and so funny, love her!