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From Afar
Yeah youre right.
How did you know that it was me that was hesitating? Bette asked in a
slow quiet voice.
Oh Bette, you have never changed. Something this important to you can not go
unanalyzed and examined and thought out with every rock turned over before you
are sure that it is fool proof. Well
real life is never fool proof and well what you feel from Tina is the best
guarantee youre going to get. So let
your heart lead Please let your heart lead. Kit pleads with Bette.
Ok I will and Ill let you know what happens OK? Bette
says as she gets off the phone with Kit.
As Bette hangs up the phone she thinks about what Kit has said and
realizes that Kit is right. Tina was
making the invitation last night and then again this morning. She was not going to complicate this by
over-thinking it. Looking down at her
desk Bette comes to a snap decision. She
needed to get out of here. She had a
surprise dinner to prepare. Not even
bothering to straighten up her desk, Bette got up, grabbed her purse and walked
out of the door.
On the way out she let James know she would be gone the rest
of the day. James eyebrow went up as he
had been expecting a lot of files to be shuffled back his way but as Bette made
her way to the door he got up and walked into Bettes office. Letting out a whistle James couldnt contain
the chuckle he was having at Bettes expense.
James could never remember a day when Bette hadnt left her desk as
clean as she had found it. This was a
first for Bette, to just leave with files spread everywhere. James smiled, as he walked in to straighten
up Bettes desk for her.
***
had just finished reading what seemed like her hundredth article concerning
non-profit foundations and their funding.
Most of the articles concerned different types of financial malfeasance
by the officers or different figures of authority within these
organizations.
her eyes with her index finger and thumb while pushing up her glasses. She closed her eyes while she was doing this
trying to rest them for a moment.
and readjusted her glasses as she picked up another reprint and with
highlighter in hand began lining the important passages.
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I have to agree with you first responder, Mango, I don’t comment often, but never miss a story. This is really one of the very best on this site and always a pleasure to read. Thanks so much.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh. SUPER!!! Need I say more?
Starting to feel so sorry for poor Alice lol… all that hard work and for nothing! so things are running smoothly for now..lol which is great as always loning this story thanks
Alice is going to feel like an idiot when she finds out that Tina all ready knows. You have captured the personality of these characters so well in your story..post soon….or who knows I may just email you. : )
I get the feeling that Alice’s ‘investigative reporting’ has more to do with being nosy or possibly even because she is jealous that she was left out of the loop by Bette. If Bette hadn’t already told Tina, Alice would be walking a thin line between being a friend and becoming an enemy. Hopefully the information that she is gathering on Helena will be enough to sidetrack her into implicating Helena is some wrong doing. Now, that would make Bette happy.
Day dreaming Bette is just too cute. Kit telling her like it is was excellent. Tina loving the fact that Bette was there cooking dinner was a wonderful ‘awww’ moment.
Hey Jwet, excellent post I was thinking the same as angelak in regards to Kit knowing about Melvin´s money having to do with the MYV, if so didn´t Melvin left anything to Kit?
And please let Alice do the right thing and not cause the III world war :-).
Thanks
KG
you know, I’ve changed my mind! don’t want them to talk about Anna’s birth at all…or until Anna’s 18th Birthday at least ;) thanks
I’m just catching up with my fanfic after vacation and you are writing faster than I can read and comment! Love the direction you’re going – the delightful romance between B& T and Alice’s sleuthing. Your story is a pleasure to read and your productivity amazes me. Keep up the good work!
Hello Jwet: I will be waiting to see if “Bette” will be going home. I am in line with all the other’s waiting to see how this fabulous story will turn out. Excellent job.
can’t wait!!! lol excellent you know I have this smile on my dreaming face… thanks
Yeah.. (sigh..) the days you cannot sleep or eat, focus on anything but your love – the best ;)
Here’s hoping Bette will just let go and go with the flow!
I see the downfall of Ms. Helena Peabody is in the works. Alice will make sure of it! Myu-ha-ha!!!!
Loved the chapter, and thanks for the help with MYV. I din’t mean to sound like such a baby about it , but I had lost sight of the other lettering with all of my reading and hecked sechdule. Poor Alice, she can waste more energy on simple task—geez. I think her time will be better spent on Helena’s missapropreation of funds. Besides, I know Ms. Peabody is still going to try to pour some more cold water on Bette and Tina, she just can’t help herself. That is why I want you to put or attach dog, Alice, on her a**. Please post again soon.
Yay…I am first….
I love this story and I am sorry that I don’t comment too often…reading at work makes it hard to concentrate on letting youknow how much I love this story. I am with Kit….when is Bette moving back home. It seems that most of the big hurdles have been crossed…..unless Alice muddies the water!
Again, I love this story and please keep going!
Alice is a scream. Wonderful chapter as always. They had chicken for dinner huh? Wonder why I’m not surprised.
Jwet, I love this story, so much that I wwent back and read from the beginning yesterday!!! I think that we just all let out a collective sigh of relief!!! Thank you, post soon.
i love happy chapters..lol..i hope Bette move back soon and i was wondering when Tina will tell Tina about Annas birth..amazing chapter J post soon thanks
“Yeah†was all Bette needed to say. And the rest of us say ‘Aww” :-)
Isn’t Kit the most unselfish of sisters! Keep posting – love this story.
I’m amazed at all the work Alice is putting into this! It’s clear Kit has no idea she has given away her fathers money, as she said “she could live anywhere in the world” – I wonder how she will react?
great chapter Jwet. Alice is so persistant. yeah Bette is moving back in.
great great great great great… I could go on and on and on, but I’ll stop now LOL, please post again soon, really soon :)
K
Wonderful as always, so glad they worked things out. So sweet, just love it.
Hey Jwet, thanks for another great chapter.
JWet,
Am sitting at work in almost total darkness as we have had a power cut. Battery power is a wonderful invention.
Weather is steaming hot for bonny Scottie land. In the 90s.
Am not cut out for this.
On to the glorious tale:
What? No subtitle?
Luved it. Kit’s not so gentle persuasion to get Bette to admit what she really wants, was genius and so very Kitty Katty. At least Bette accepted that she has the power and will to be everything that Tina and Anna want and need.
As for Alice, very interesting turn of events. The juicy little morsels that are escaping about the finances of one Miss Helena Peabody could be the start of her downfall and comeuppance. Bette too, needs to have a hand in it I hope.
No questions today as just too damn hot!
Glad to see that you are finally getting the advantage of your boat. Not jealous at all. (Believe that and I have some magic beans to sell you.)
Hope all is well with you.
Your Loyal Fan
Do you ever write any stinkers, Jwet??? This chapter was excellent, as always! I’m just hoping Alice will give it a rest because she’s making me nervous! ~lol~ Thanks for posting!
I always knew Bette had to have at least ONE dish that she could make confidently! looking forward to the talk…
Don’t let alice screw thing up!!!!!!!!!!
GREAT JOB JWET….THANKS
I can’t wait to find out what Alice discovers about Helena! And, your last couple of sentences, just made me sigh, with a dreamy smile on my face. Thanks for your what you said about my last couple of chapters. I am trying to write the third chapter, but between my addiction to other fan fic stories, and with trying to sell my house, I’m afraid my own fan fiction story is retreating further down the list. Thanks though!!
Wo, Bette cooks?! Oooh, you’re redeeming Alice; she’ll be the one who will help Bette and Alice get rid of Helena….nice. Nicely done.
There’s a dreamy smile on my face now! Thanks for putting it there!
Jwet another great chapter. Love to see all the different characters adding their pressures to the B&T drama. It’s a real pleasure to follow your story. Thanks
been at the drs all morning so this was a great way to start the day. i so love this story. its so fulling so rich. thanks for spending your time like this to make us happy. catn wait for the next one.
Hey Jwet OMG! I have a problem in my computer and I just missed you’re Story this morning and thank God it’s fix already and I’m just catching up anyway WHOA! It’s getting Better with Bette and Tina Thanks Jwet I’m still Loven it.
AWESOME!!!! Jwet another great chapter!!!!! OMG I cannot wait. I am freaking out b/c i’m afraid it’s getting close to the end. Don’t even thing of it. They are young and you have to put Anna thru college. rofl….
Great job with this post. I’m so glad to see Bette so giddy with excitement. I’m sure coming home to Bette is everyone’s dream.
Good chapter!