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From Afar
Tina pulled away from Bette and moved back to the door to
make sure it was closed. Then she turned
and went to the dresser picking up a box of matches and pulling out one striking
it. Bette could do nothing but watch as
every motion Tina made seemed to be the most sensuous thing that Bette had ever
seen. She watches transfix as Tina moves
from candle to candle lighting every one she must have laid out earlier. When one match went out Tina would pull
another out and repeat the process until soon the room was aglow with a golden
hue that made Tinas face look mysterious and seductive. As Tina blew out the final match she turned
to Bette with want and desire written clearly on her face as she set the matches
down. Standing next to the bed now she
motioned for Bette to join her.
Bette hesitated for only a moment before she moved toward
Tina. The whole atmosphere surrounding
the two of them seemed electric as Bette moved.
The slightest friction would cause an explosion of passion as the two of
them were just itching to start rubbing things together. Bette gathered Tina up in her arms, pulling
her close as Tinas ***** could be felt by Bette through her shirt.
Bette knew that she finally had Tina in the place that she
had wanted for oh so long. Bette brought
her lips down on Tinas that at last opened the way for the release of passion
in both of them. It was time for Bette
to become everything that both she and Tina knew that she could be, to take her
and make Tina her own again. Moving
quickly Bette slid her hands down to the bottom of the Tinas blouse and began
to pull it up over her head. Once Tinas
blouse was disposed of Bette continued her assault of Tinas lips. While undoing Tinas bra and letting it to
fall to the floor. Bette was now
nibbling on Tinas bottom lip and sliding her tongue back and forth with
greater urgency. Finally Tina opened her
mouth and Bette began to penetrate Tinas mouth with her tongue. The more control that Bette demanded the more
Tina gave up as the fire in both of their centers was now fully flamed but
Bette had much more in mind as she began to lay Tina down on the bed. Sliding Tina up on the pillows, Bette took a
moment to hover above her as she could see the passion clearly written on
Tinas face as her eyes were half closed, her cheeks flush with the heat that
Tina herself was generating and her forehead was damp with little tentacles of
hair sticking to it. This was a vision
of Tina that Bette would keep in her memory forever.
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That was great!!!!!!!!!! they deserve it!!!!! is hurricane alice coming
GREAT WAY TO START MY LUNCH….I’M GOING HOME TO TAKE A COLD SHOWER…GREAT JOB AS ALWAYS..THANKS
Oh yeah.. this was the way to start my Friday. I love the way you write this with the passion and love forward – it’s not just sex. You can feel them emotionally reconnecting – very intense.
Jwet your are such a sweetie, was not expecting a chapter from you until next week…..THANK YOU…beautifully written as always..have a great weekend Jwet.
thanks for this last chapter :-) I have followed your story even though I didn’t comment all the time. Just know that I really enjoyed reading your story :-) I can’t get enough. Well I’ll also be busy with reading Harry Potter :-) It’s about time they published the book. So happy reading to you :-)
beautiful!!! i so enjoy reading your chapters. i work nights, so it is such a joy to get home in the mornings and see that you have posted a little bit of lovin before heading off to bed. keep up the excellent writing. can’t wait for more. have a great weekend.
Great as usual, I’m bowing down,Just great. post soon
this story has been one hell oa a ride…..phew
Umm – Tasty ! Very lekker, thank you !
uhmmm just one request I dont know if you do requests but can you have Hellno’s ass kicked in one of the chapters…please?
Thanks Jwet… a fantastic way of finishing this wonderful day… too much celebration!!!!
I love coming home from work and finding a story from you. Have friends in for the weekend and may not be on here much at all..so thank you for a great beginning .
What a perfect way to END a day. DOING MY HAPPY DANCE!!!!! DOING MY HAPPY DANCE!!!!! DOING MY HAPPY DANCE!!!!! DOING MY HAPPY DANCE!!!!! DOING MY HAPPY DANCE!!!!! DOING MY HAPPY DANCE!!!!! DOING MY HAPPY DANCE!!!!! DOING MY HAPPY DANCE!!!!!
And the truth shall set you free…
Good to see that good thing do come to those that wait…thank goodness you didn’t keep us waiting long!
Enjoy the book and post again soon. Can’t wait to see how it will go with Alice, or Helena.
I only ask one thing: Bette, you need to take your clothes off, darling. You’re going to get your suit messy…
I can’t wait till Bette tells Tina she was there when the baby was born
Jwet, you never disappoint. I’m so in awe of how seamless this story is; how everything comes together at different points and the reader is let in on aspects of the story, much like the characters make their discoveries. I know this story can’t go on forever, but you make me wish it would. Thanks
Ah, sweet (hot) love. Nicely done.
K
Wonderful chapter. Just can’t get enough of this. Love it.
PERFECT!!!
oh wow…oh wow! This is like a big fat bonus!!! Yipee!, Bette the great is back!! Thank you!!
What a perfect way to start a day. You deliver!
wonderful.I do love this story. Did you know that? I bet you did
Hey Jwet Good morning WHOA! That was so Beautiful Morning Story to get up Thanks Jwet I love it Please continue.
Well its lunchtime here and now im too flustered to eat lol…that was great! but just to be greedy could you possibly stretch it out to another chapter lol coz you know we just cant get enough of their journey back together! both in and out of the bedroom you understand..lol
JWET!! OMG, I finally caught up!! WOO-HOO! What an spectacular chapter!! AWESOME!! What a way to end my night…hehehe, I’m at a internet cafe here in the Philippines…paid 55 pesos just to use the net, sweet huh! Keep up the kick arse work, don’t worry, I’ll catch up again=D
wow! I have 2 chapters of yours today. You and MTS made my day! :)
WOW..you are sooo mean Jwet..how dare you stop like this???..lol..and i agree with gerrie Bette sex machine is back..lol..great chapter J i cant wait for more soooon thanks
What a way to start my morning!!!! Thank you for this great story. Post soon.
Great chapter, I like the discovery and how Tina really appreciates Bette’s effort for pulling this all together. Her willingness to do this with no guarantee that she would get Tina in the end. I would love for Bette to tell Kit the rest of the story. Please continue.
I must say Jwet, I have waited for Bette and Tina to come to this full circle for so long………..and let me tell you it was definately worth the wait! Hot…hot…hot….thanks for sharing your superb writing skills with us.
Fabulous! What a great way to move into the weekend. Have a great break yourself and looking forward to the next instalment with great anticipation.
hurrah, just got back from holiday to such a nice treat, you are superb, i think you should become a writer on the show!!!
OMG. truly sometimes i don’t even know what to say to you after reading your chappys. they make me happy, but its so much more than that and i don’t know if you want to be embarassed if i wrote all the adjectivesi feel by reading your story. damn girl. you have fun with harry and come back to us soon. you deserve a reward for all your sacrificies to us.
That was just incredible
Oh WWOWWWW!!! THat was so HOT! Bette is back!! More please!
hey, finally got around reading one of your chapters and i have a backlog of your chapters to read. i’ll save it for another day when i really have nothing to do.
That was just…raw…with passion. It’s about time Bette got it together and showed Tina just how much she wants her.
I have to learn the happy dance because that’s what I would want to be doing now! *happy dance* *happy dance*
Thanks….How’s Potter?
Great!
My favorite line…”Screaming out her undying love, Tina’s fervor was all about love, passion and forever as tears were streaming down her face.” You slay us yet again.
Hello Jwet: I hope that you have a great weekend and perhaps you may be going to “Our Dayton Air Show” this “Hot and Steamy Weekend.” What a segway into this Hot and wonderful chapter. I enjoyed it and I’m with all the others who will be waiting for othe next chapter.I’m happy to see both women merging and learing how to accept each other. Relationships is just an extension of how we want to be accepted and how we accept others…Bette and Tina are reaching that point to merge and start their lives together….I will be watching for the next chapter…Excellent job.
You make it awful hard for a girl to stay in a fit of petulant sulkiness… lol, but I have a feeling you know that.
What a totally complete story…Your writing is exceptional, and this chapter evokes so much emotion and passion, you feel like your right there. How fortunate we are that you are writing for us to read….Thank you thank you thank you….It’s only sad the rest of the world is missing your writing!!! Pls more, more more…..tks
EXCELLENT!!! as always sorry I haven’t commented I have been on vaction so I had to go back and catch up.. they were all great.. Please continue I am realy interested in the meaning of MYVF.. waiting to see your answer I hope Tina asked before Alice figures it out… and I also like the fact the Alice might find some good shit on Helena.. Post soon. Please
JWet,
Sorry have been MIA lately. Personal issues have kept me from commenting. Will MSN details later.
As for the story: Bravo!
I am so happy that Bette and Tina are finally rebuilding their relationship as equal partners. Tina has been wonderfully understanding about Bette’s puppet mastering of the whole MYV Foundation and her new career.
At last Bette is beginning to see the majesty of admitting her failing and faults.
Your prose is perfect and sumptuously swallows us all into this splendid story. Like flies in a spider’s web we are enticed and captured by your talent.
Not so much HMS as a long, loving reconnection of body, mind and souls. This part was delightfully tender and emotive. The love, lust and longing is tangible. Having a happy face all day now. Thank you.
Not questions as just to Damn Happy to be curious.
Your Loyal Fan.
I just came back from vacation earlier and even the sun, beach and clubs in South Beach, Fl, weren’t enough to keep me from missing this story.
This is so fucking amazing!