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From Afar
Tina never took her eyes off of Bette now moved back in as
she pulled Bette back down against the bed and now laid her body on top of
Bette. Still looking into her eyes
Tina’s playfulness is momentarily gone “Welcome home Bette. I hope you know that you will never be
leaving again.” As soon as these words
had left Tina’s lips she slides down the length of Bette’s torso letting the
tips of her ***** touch Bette the whole way.
Tina settles in between Bette’s legs, spreading them apart as she begins
to rub her nose on Bette’s inner thigh.
Adding her tongue and kissing and little bites she works her way around
Bette’s hot core.
Bette’s hips are once again beginning their motion that
Bette is unable to prevent. With her
head thrown back into the pillow Bette is willingly giving herself over to
Tina. “Please Tina please.” Bette is
pleading to Tina.
Tina hears Bette’s pleads as she had this vision in her head
of providing Bette the most intense experience she has ever felt. With that Tina brings her lips down on
Bette’s nub, feeling the hardness and heat coming off it Tina thinks that maybe
she should try to cool it off by blowing.
This blowing only intensifies Bette’s sensations as she now
pleads with a roughness to her voice as it is breaking “Tina I can’t stand it
please I need you inside of me I need
to feel you.” Bette finally gets out in a barely understandable voice.
Tina takes this as her signal as she now enters Bette with
two fingers and begins the rub that Bette is so desperate for.
“God Tina more
please more.” Bette cries out in a desperate voice.
Tina still visualizing in her mind exactly the reaction she
wants to elicit from Bette feels driven to accomplish this as her own body is
feeling tortured by the mere sound of Bette’s voice. She adds an additional finger and now
vigorously attends to her task.
Soon Bette is lost to this world as she feels one shudder
after another possess her body. All
thought is gone from her mind all that is left is this warm bubble of security
that is her home.
***
Bette and Tina easily fell into sync living together with
both of them leaving in the morning for their perspective employment. Bette tried desperately to be out of the CAC
by two in the afternoon. She so liked
heading home to spend the remainder of the afternoon with Anna as she would
relieve Irene. Anna loved playing the
afternoon away with Bette. To Bette’s
chagrin this plan was only working about twice a week as Bette had yet to back
fill her previous position. Until she
found someone she would continue to have this struggle and she knew it.
***
the last touches on the articles for the awardees. She had finished up an hour ago and now was
just idly messing around with different web sites doing research or her next
series of articles. As she was reading
one of her favorite web pages she sees one of those annoying flashing
advertisements. This one was in
brilliant orange with the words “WHO GETS YOUR MONEY WHEN YOU DIE YOUR INTENDED
OR UNCLE SAM” brazened across the header.
Underneath it went on to say “How much of your estate will make it
through probate if you should die? Learn
how to protect their investment .” As
looked at this she hits her forehead with the palm of her hand. “Of course” she says out loud as she quickly
tries to log onto the
court records which recorded all probate claims and made them available as part
of the public record. As
these records on the web she comes across the probate records of one Melvin A.
Porter.
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You write such a wonderful story. I’m worried about other pictures of Tina. Guess I’ll wait and see; and worry a bit?
I hope you have Bette being nice to Alice. After all, Alice is just worried about her friends. And if Alice can figure it out, others can too.
Thanks for starting my day with a smile.
Have a great week.
Nice chapter. I wish Alice would just let it go..or confront Bette with it. I don’t think she will want the wrath of Bette. Thanks for posting and congrats on the award.
Jwet,
Wonderful news about your award. It is thoroughly deserved. I salute and applaud you and the judges for their good taste to recognize your obvious talent.
As I have said at every opportunity this is a masterpiece. A modern melodrama that has been brilliantly realized.
Doing a little dance: shakin’ my ass and jiggling my hips as I am glad to be back. It is so worthwhile commenting when you know that you are appreciated and missed. Big hugs at ya’.
As for this installment, you manage to install such intensity between Bette and Tina: this is a molding on bodies, minds, spirits and souls. The sum of this union is worth far more than each individual part. The strength and fortitude that these gals are now displaying is a message to us all. It is template to show how wonderful and marvellous life can be when you are prepared to open your heart to someone and share your existence with them.
Isn’t Dana a clever cookie? Getting Alice to do the dirty without having to get low down and dirty.
I can’t wait to see Alice’s face when she finds out the truth about Tina knowledge of MYV and likewise Tina’s expression as she discovers the real meaning of Motif Yen Valor.
As for questions:
How exactly will Bette exact revenge on Tina? Will it involve any toys? How will Alice reward Dana for her cunningness? Will it involve cream and fruit?
Sorry but one track mind in play.
Anywho A final Well Done for your Loyal Fan.
Bette is in heaven so do i..lol..i can feel Alice is going to do something bad and will complicate her friendship with Bette…amazing chapter Jwet and OCNGRATS for the new award you more than deserve it :o) when youre going to pay some beers to us to celebrate?..lol
Very Many Congratulations on your Award Jwet, absolutely deserved to be THE BOMB, if I had my way as a judge it would of been SUPER BOMB, but us judges only have a so much say! LOL
Your story has been amazing from Chapter 1, it has kept us totally engrossed as to where you will take these well loved individuals and once again bring them together, which I believe most of us want for them.
Also, thank you so much for enabling me to experience that De-Ja-Vue feeling so many times – what can I say, “super” doesn’t do it justice. F’kin Amazin Mate!
Hey Jwet, Congratulations on “The Bomb Award” a double wammy, well done YOU..a big thank you for keeping us entertained with this brilliant story that you write.
Thank you.
Jwet, another fine chapter. Congrats on the second award, you absolutely deserved it!
Congrats on your award! I have enjoyed following both series – I love your writing :) Thanks for the sexy chapter ;)
ALICE’S KILLS ME…but I think she tracked the scent….CONGRATULATION ON THE AWARD YOU DESERVE IT…PLEASE POST SOON..THANKS…
wonderful chapter Jwet, as always and be careful Alice… lol
Congraulaions!!!!!!!!!!! Alice is pissing me off!!!!!!!!!! don’t let this break them up!!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait until she feel bette’s wrath!!!!!!!!!!!
Congratulations on your award. Your story is so perfect,I wish it’ll never end. Thank you.
Congratulations – your 2nd award is so richly deserved.
You have taken us on a roller coaster ride of emotions, and captivated us from the first paragraph.
Even after this many chapters I still feel the same level of excitement when you post.
Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
You know, I’m drawn into your story everytime I read it…it’s like I’m there witnessing it in person…very well-written…it’s like I’m always in a trance, I can’t pry my eyes away from my monitor…you rock!!
Alice…she never gives up…I’m wondering if her intentions are to only notify Tina of her find or make it known in public…hmm…I guess I’ll just read on;)
Thanks for the welcome back by the way, it’s great to be back…PI was awesome, but I missed Hawaii dearly!
CONGRATULATIONS on your 2ND win…you truly deserve it;)
JWET…what an absolute treat to see 2 time winner next to your name. Both awards are so well deserved. I can’t wait to congratulate you in person!!
Awsome chapter Jwet and congrats on the award. I realy enjoy your story, post soon. Thanks
Congratulations to the second power! Deja vu is a great thing when it comes to winning an award that is so well deserved. Your story is written with insightful intellect, tremendous wit, agonzing agnst and a reverance for love that we should all be lucky enough to experience at some time in our lives.
Now, on to other things.
I……..HATE……..ALICE. Yes, strong words. A word I rarely use, but one I feel compelled to use nevertheless. She is annoyance personified. What part of ‘leave me and my family alone’ did she not understand?? If she suspects that Tina knows, then why does she STILL feel the need to expose Bette? If she is truly their friend, she would back off. Especially in light of the fact that she is still only suspecting that Tina knows. Is her life’s mission to ruin what Bette and Tina have finally rekindled? It’s almost as if Alice is doing this out of some sort of jealous vendetta. Or is she just so focused on being right that she sees nothing else?
Of course we know that Tina knows what Bette has done. At least to the extent that Bette has told her. So she may not go entirely ballistic if she finds out additional information from Alice’s story. However, Bette not coming clean (although we are assuming that she would eventually) with everything may give Tina reason to doubt that Bette has changed entirely. Hopefully, she will evaluate the information that Alice provides and realizes that there are some things that Bette truly didn’t think were that important to tell her. Because in the end, they didn’t effect WHY she did what she did for Tina…only HOW she was able to accomplish it.
I am glad that Dana was the voice of reason, although it looks like it fell on deaf ears. Dana’s heart is in the right place. I hope she knows where Alice’s Last Will and Testament are because if things get ugly, she may need to produce that document.
Such a wonderful description of Bette going through the house. Hearing Tina’s routine, taking in the smells of the bedroom. All those things that make a house a home and give you that sense of security that you don’t realize you need, until it’s gone.
Bette is finally smart enough to realize that sometimes giving up control allows you to gain control in other areas that you never even realized. Like peace of mind. She has come full circle becoming aware that her committment of leaving early should still be a priority. Before, she would know it should be, but not acknowledge what should be done to rectify it. Great strides she has made.
Tina the tease…oooh, now that’s fun. Her playfulness let the moment be mememorable without being too sappy or too emotional.
I liken your story to one of the Willy Wonka candies. The Everlasting Gobstopper…always sweet, something different everytime and neverending (ok, I am hoping for the last one). And most importantly, it’s scrumpdidilyumptious!
my sincere congrats J! :) you know that I’m addicted to this story. actually I became a serial commentor b/c of your talent. thank you for every amazing chapter and this one is one of this I like even more.
You absolutely deserve the award. This story is quality writing through and through. Congratulations.
JWET,
All of the previous commentors have written such wonderful words that I cannot think of anything else to say except congratulations on your second award. You are a true master of the written word and we, your fans, have been truly blessed by your grace. It is a pleasure to see you receive The Bomb Award.
Thank You for taking the time to enrich our lives with your talent. I hope that you will continue to entertain us for a long, long time!
Jwet – You are a constant contributor to this awesome site and your work is beyond brilliant. You are deservant of this award that has been bestowed upon you — twice. Again thanks for your talent – This has been a wonderful story!
Great as usual. Please post soon.
Jwet, this is a special treat. Your love scenes always first strike the heart and then move to other destinations. This chapter is so well written and was great fun to read.
The series itself is amazingly complete and rounded around the edges. Congrats on the award and thank you for sharing your talent and opening your king size heart to us.
just want to add my congratulations– I’m glad that there is this award so that you can be reminded how much we all enjoy your writing — just a great story, with wonderful characters, great pacing and expression….sincere thanks
C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S!!!
You definitely deserve the win – I hve read all your stories faithfully especially the last one and the beauty of your stories is not so much about the B&T connecting sexually, but the way you build their characters to be strong and stand up for what they want – B to prioritise herself to ensure that family comes first; T – to be more open and not shut down and the family – how supportive they are of these two lovely couple. As for Alice – all i can say she is priceless the way you write about her :D great writing as usual :D
Oh Jwet,
I meant to say “congradulations!” on your well-deserved award! You are the BomB!!!
You’re awesome!! Thanks!
Argh!!! Alice is really starting to piss me off. Can’t she just leave well alone. Brilliant as always Jwet :)
Congrats on the award you fully deserve it!
I’m a little unclear as to why Alice wouldnt just come out and ask Bette about it all… jus wonderin… great chapter!!
Jwet, congratulations on your award. It was well deserved. You know how I feel about this story. Post soon.
the award is so richly deserved. your story shows the incredible talent yoy have. the actual length of time is unbelievable. your story is deep, stimulating, so intelligent and just a great read. your love stories come when it is right, not filler. your leading and im following. thanks for sharing your talent and heart.
alice is pissing me off. great she gave them the file but jeez…. if she kept doing this to my family i would really wonder if she had something out for us. the saving grace is that tee knows. i cant imagine that bette didnt tell her all, so thats all good. shes now seen hurricane tina. slipping that little tidbit in will only make tina come down on her again. the pics storyline will be very interesting. thanks again for this.
Jwet – Congratulations on your award. You ARE the bomb! You know how much I enjoy your story and it’s obvious how much work you put into making it as fantastic as it is. I look forward to reading your work far into the future. Thank you so much for taking the time to write.
Congratulations to the 2 time guru! Your award is so well deserved as you do an amazing job of keeping us all entertained all the time! Thanks for writing :-D
First, CONGRATULATIONS!!! You totally deserve the award. Did I tell you I really really am hooked on your story? Fantastically fabulous!
WOOHOO! Hey Jwet CONGRATULATIONS YOU ARE really DESERVE TO WIN 1OO% Loyal Fan Fic I Love it WHOA! Thanks for Wonderful Story for us AS Always momo.
K
Wonderful as always. Love this. Alice is pure trouble lol.
Congrats Jwet.
Congrats for your award. I think Bette’s going to mad at Alice, she told her to butt out and she meant it.
Congrats!! If anyone deserves it you do.. Now please get Alice shit togethr before she starts some real trouble that Bette will have hard time getting over and she might slip back into a side dshe is trying to change… Post soon..
Hey Jwet Congrats. It’s always nice when those whose work brings joy to others get a chance to have their work publicly acknowledged. You’re the best Jwet, the award only reinforces what we all know.
Oh no did I read your comment to me right. Am I to believe your story will come to an end in at least 15 chapters. NOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooooo! I’m sure that 15 chapters will be completed before November. Say it ain’t so Jwet, say it ain’s so? Please!
CONGRADULATIONS, we are all doing the happy dance in your honor. This was a great chapter (Although, I was feeling that the love scene was onger.).
Now for Alice. Alice, Alice Alice, Bette has told her in nno uncertian terms what her feelings and position in reference to her pocking around in her and her families private livies, and Alice KNOWS that she was SERIOUS. But does that stop Alice, NOOOOOOO. I understand Alice personality and her being a reporter. yada, yada, yada, BUT there are certain lines you DO NOT cross with people, particularly when it comes to friends and family. To go as far as to trace down information about her dead father’s will in probate! HELL-I-NO. She will be lucky if Bette start feeding her out of a long handled spoon ( A southern phrase used when someone betrays you. It is said that you feed them out of a long handled spoon so that they can’t snap off your hand again.). Bette may just cut her off completely, and all the loving and pleading from Tina may not be able to stop it or save thier friendship. In fact, I think that Kit will also be pretty pissed off at her and justifiable so. They may end up treating Alice like they did Helena in S2, with a polite tolerance and done thing else. Well Alice, “A hard head makes a soft behind”. Please post again soon.
Damn this is getting crazy, and drama coming!