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Frozen Beginnings – Chapter Six
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“Yes, I do!” Tina replied with a distinctive bite in her words. “It is all I have heard all day, I do not need you to add to it also!”
The blonde could feel her father’s questioning eyes on her. What was he going to think of her manners towards his guest? Surely he had not brought her up that way. Had she not described Bette in a most favourable light when she had spoken to her father on the phone… even if it was by deference to his age so as to not worry the man needlessly?
“You have not answered my question.” Tina continued in a calmer voice.
“I am here to help you,” A slow smile appeared on Bette’s lips as she took in Tina’s shock at hearing her words. She sat up, reaching over the arm of her chair to retrieve an elegant briefcase.
“I will leave you to your discussion.” Tina’s father chose to take his leave at that very moment. He had made the necessary introduction, he was no longer required.
But Tina looked at her father with alarm as she realised she was going to be left alone with Bette.
“There is nothing to hide, you can stay!” she called after the old man. The scene as it was playing had a startling sense of déjà vu and this alone made Tina shudder with a mixture of fear and excitement. What did Bette, the woman Tina thought she would never see again, want?
“Bette has come here on business. What is the point in me staying here, I have no experience in the art of interior decoration.” John Kennard explained before smiling at Bette with complicity.
“Is that right?” Bette interrogated Tina.
The blonde frowned dropping her eyes to the expensive attaché case by Bette’s feet.
“What are you doing with this briefcase?”
“Tina, please, could you find it in you to be more civil towards our guest?” John Kennard asked softly but with a distinct disapproving tone.
“It’s alright, John. I know who I’m dealing with.” Bette placated with soft laughter.
Tina blushed furiously at what the brunette’s words implied.
“At least let me make it up to you,” Mr Kennard continued, “Have dinner with us.”
Tina was about to protest when her father continued talking on his way out of the door. “Unless you have prior arrangements?”
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You drama Queen;)
i am very happy for the update!
Sorry to hear your laptop died, but good for you that you saved your important stuff.
Tina, tss, what a attitude to the woman who saved you and satisfied your curiosity in a loving and tender way.
I love the mysterious Bette, she is not what Tina think she is.
Their interactions are hilarious, totally love it.
Thanks for the update!
My. my. What a tangled web we weave…
I’m curious at what Bette has to, uh, offer.
I’d be pissy too if I’d been thinking about a certain person and what we did and all of a sudden that person shows up. Wait, that didn’t sound right. I’d be freaking happy.
Thanks for the update Kins!
Thank you for the update……. More please !!!
Another great catchup my dear friend..Thats a crafty NC17..Tina reminiscing her
treasured moments with Bette in the chalet….But I liked it.
I like that Bette is still teasing Tina and I look forward to Bettes explanation as
to what she does for a living….Architect…Builder…Property Magnate…Entrepenure.
Hopefully we will find out in the next chapter which I am sooo looking forward to.
Loved it ….PPS….xx C
Welcome Back! This was amazing! Tina needs to chill the fuck out! She’s going to feel and look like a damn fool when Bette finally tell who and what she does for a living. I said from the beginning that she’s RICH BITCH! pps
Arghh! You’re killing me, Kins! I’m on the edge of my seat here. More please. The sooner the better.
Nice chapter kins, I had to go back and finish the last chapter as I didn’t realize that I didn’t finish it. Love the tenderness in Chapter 5 and here we are with Tina still experiencing the aftershocks of that. She is a bit testy in having the woman she’s been dreaming of sitting there in front of her. I love the low key attitude of Bette as she watches and listens to T rant and rave.
Tina is so flustered with her emotions and desires towards Bette, its very humorous!
Thanks for sharing another chapter with us.
How hot can Bette be?! Tough and rugged outdoors woman and wealthy, smart dashing business tycoon…be still my heart! Poor Tina – NOT! Thanks Kins!!!
Really enjoying the story, thanks
This Bette is hot! I mean hotter than usual – a strong outdoors woman and a sleek business woman! Thank your sharing, Kins!!
Good night! Love all your stories and hours ago
I finished reading: At first glance, however, I am in love with Savannah
which in my humble opinion, you could give continuation.
Now let história.Tina this and do not know what
make your life, do not know how to deal with feeling
he has to Bette, even having a fabulous night with
brunette in turn believes that the offer of employment and a
way of approaching Tina.
And as usual, you wrote NC: 17 excellent.
10 STARS.
ps: sorry my english is not my official language;
I love this story. Although Tina appeared to be shallow in the beginning, I think she has grown a lot. I can understand her anger towards Bette, especially if she was cold with her the next day and is hiding things from her. Bette’s behaviour doesn’t reassure her in any way, she’s even afraid of being mocked. Hope to see an honest chat!
Ok im confused here, why is she so angry…love the update and so ready for this bette and tina talk
Great to have you back Kins!
Hope the computer problems are a thing of the past. This is my second attempt at commenting. For some reason my first attempt was thrown out so I hope I’m not about to have technical problems of my own.
This Bette is absolutely wonderful and her effect of Tina a joy to read! I look forward to reading more of their encounters.
Re-read Chapter 5 before this which added to the continuation and my enjoyment. Look forward to the next chapter. Keep um coming girl!
Does the new computer mean you may revisit the Savannah? Just asking and hoping!
Ugh Kins! 8 puny pages?!?! After SO long?!?! Pls fix your laptop issues so that you can right MORE OFTEN. Sorry about the rant….
Anyways you write very engagingly and I haven’t waited for a story update like this since The Eternal Rocks Beneath AKA the mother of all Tibette fanfic story (that’s a huge compliment). I like you characters and think this can turn out very interesting for both parts because I do believe our hard knock Bette in this story is actually already head over heels for thi slightly childish Tina, much to her annoyance and perhaps surprise?. Post soon!
I cant wait for the revelation of who Bette really is. Thanks for the chapter.
a new update, so I’ve been waiting, and now I’m hanging on the edge here. but no matter, I still have to wait a bit (a few minutes) :DD
Tina remembers the time spent together with Bette, was hot.
It was so exciting chapter, Tina mad that she doesn’t know what Bette work :D
I look forward to the next chapter
OMG, what are you gonna do here? Take care of our girls now Kins. You know how much anxiety I have about the drama. Trusting you…
The writing is amazing as usual. You never disappoint! Thanks for taking the time to write another incredible story!
Awesome