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Frozen – Chapter 5 – The Grinch (Part 2)
Chapter 5 (part 2)
Bette POV
I lived most of my life trying to please my father. I had to be the good girl he wanted me to be. I was Melvin Porter’s daughter and people had to see how well he raised me; how successful I was. I went to Yale – just like he asked – the place where I learned about my sexuality. I had a crush on my professor, Danika Palmer, but falling head over heels for Phoebe Cadlek was what had made me realize I was actually a lesbian.
He found out; I had to make things better for his sake, and I tried to achieve every goal putting in as much effort as I could. At least, that would have made up for the great grief I caused him. A grief I didn’t know I was also causing Tina every time I let him reject her… and our unborn child. I felt like shit that night. On one hand there was my father who wouldn’t have had a grandchild, since in his eyes it couldn’t be possible as there were no blood ties. On the other hand there was Tina who was dealing with the pregnancy, the fact that she was carrying an African-American child, and having a stubborn ass as a partner.
Then there was me… I couldn’t give my father a grandchild, I couldn’t be a good wife to my partner. I remember feeling helpless when we started looking for a donor. I would have given anything to just be able to get her pregnant and make them both proud. In the end we lost the baby, and the world came crushing down.
My only light, after living the Hell, was Angelica. A little human being I came to love as if she was my own flesh and blood. But just like my father said: there were no blood ties. And what little hope I had left in me disappeared as soon as I realized she couldn’t be mine…
Yet, the more I looked across the cave, the more I felt this pull towards her. She was so beautiful, so grown up. My little girl.
“Yes, Kit, don’t worry we’re fine. We’re gonna come back as soon as the storm calms down” I reassured my frantic sister.
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ladywesty says
Hi stranger, long time no see however you didn’t loose your touch as you still write very well and I’m enjoying the story as much as ever. I’m happy you’re gonna continue with it although I hope you won’t keep us too long in suspense this time. Anyway thank you very much for the follow up.
Bibi28 says
I just did a happy dance.! Thank you for coming back.
wkm says
Thanks for updating the story. I’ve missed it.
tibettenation1 says
Omg i fell out on the floor and im still laying there….my gosh everyone BOP is back!!!My life is complete!!! WELCOME BACK MY LOVE BUG!!!yay. Ok i will go read the story now lol
tibettenation1 says
I loved it!!!! Angelica was so adorable but yet sad at the same time..Bette’s heart wont stay harden too long…and poor Tina to hear out of her soulmate mouth she slept with their friend sigh…cant wait for next chapter but make it longer please
TibettesGal says
More, Please! We have waited soooooooo long!! TBsG
Amsi says
Hey i just want to say tq for coming back. I’ll be waiting for the next post.
LizH says
Hi…i never taught you came back…have been waiting for so long…pls update soon…
SassyGran says
Thank you for updating this story,
Please post again soon and with more pages.
mamadoc91 says
Backflip for BOP!!!! Welcome back old friend! Thanks for the posting but what a tease you are…????
ceetime says
Glad you are back, i love this story please post soon
BAT2012 says
Thank you for continuing this story, and what a great comeback. I loved how you got them all together. They need this time alone without the interference of their friends to work things out. Loved how Angie dealt with Bette. Looking forward to the next update.
lipitora says
Hey Dear! You’re back! I said on Twitter how glad I’m. but it’s true! you did me a really happy woman ( is not difficult if my favorite writers are returning) ;-)
I loved Angie in this chapter. She is the only one who can bring the family together. Mother and daughter bond will never go away. and this is the key. so obvious that Bette and Tina still felt for each other, but the pain and guilt is too great.
but we don’t give up the hope ;-)
I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
Please, my friend posting soon.
els73 says
I’m so glad that you are back. we missed you, love your story! pps
Victoria says
I enjoyed your premise…but. this. Ending/chapter was disappointing. You are an excellent storyteller, I’ve enjoyed your previous works.
Bibi28 says
I could’nt help myself and just read this marvelous story again.
You told us you were trying to write more and after 6 months of waiting, i am still hopefull you will return. So, please give this story a proper and hopefully good end.