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Fun on vacation Final Chapter
“I think im going to go check on Al and Dane…” Shane smiled
“babe are you ever gona give up, you wont catch them at anything!” Carmen said
“Well its worth a try.”
As she walked off Carmen started speaking again,
“I should really go check on Helena and Lara, make sure they are actually here.”
“You and Shane are as bad as each other!” Tina giggled with Bette agreeing
“Aren’t you both just a little curious?” Carmen questioned
Both women just sat laughing and nodding there heads like naughty school girls.
“Well I wont be long…”
“WAIT!” Tina shouted
Bette then finished what she was about to say… “we’re coming!”
With that they started to tiptoe silently down the hallway, well what they thought was silently just like when they first entered the house.
Carmen then stopped dead in her tracks and let out a slight scream.
“Fuck whats wrong with you?” Bette questioned unsympathetically
“its okay, its okay its just Shane”
She had bumped into Shane who was making her way back from Alice and Dana’s room.
“Guys Alice and Dana aren’t in their room, its empty…”
“Shit.” Was all that Tina could say
Then Bette spoke up, “maybe they couldn’t sleep and went for a walk on the beach or something.”
“Yeah you’re right, couldn’t sleep, on the beach.” Shane mumbled to herself trying desperately to convince herself that Bette was right.
“I think we should go check.” Tina said calmly
“Il go get Helena and Lara.” Carmen said as she walked towards their room and barged in without knocking
As she walked in she saw a naked Helena on top of Lara.
“Shit, fuck… guys sorry to interrupt and then not leave but Alice and Dana aren’t in their room and they left the club about two hours before us so we are kind of worried…”
Helena then started to speak as she climbed of Lara with a sigh and covered her nakedness with the covers, “its ok darling, we’ll be right there.”
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(36 votes, average: 3.28 out of 5)
What a show.. Haha!
Brilliant – keep them coming.
Al is so crazy.It’s a good story and I wouldn’t mindreading more.
well that was great first helena and lara then alice and dana who had their own plan going on great can’t wait for the next post so please petty petty please post soon and great update I love this story
“God they are so cute together, I don’t think I’ve seen any two people more perfect for each other.” Helena smiled. “I know, and at least now we know that they will both be loved the way they deserve to be.” Shane said. “That’s so true,…” I can’t agree more to these observations. They are the best couple. And a clever Alice, Perfect. Good chapter, post soon.
LOOL! I love you too! Yes I think i love your story it´s great! :DThanks for put more lines to Carmen!Great chapter and please post more soon!
LOOL! I love you too! Yes I think i love your story it´s great! :DThanks for put more lines to Carmen!Great chapter and please post more soon!
Haha, loved the update! Please conintue this story, Dana and Alice are SO cute in it. :D
You know I love your writing/stories and I love Danish. However, if you wanted to end this story, this would be the perfect place to do so. If not, I’m certainly not going to stop looking forward to new chapters or stop reading! I trust your judgement on the matter. ;-D Thanks for another great story update!
that was a really cute story. i like it alot. very sweet.