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Fun on vacation Final Chapter
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Carmen then left the room and not long after Helena and Lara came out of the room fully dressed and ready to go. As the three walked into the kitchen where Shane, Bette and Tina were they were greated with huge smiles.
“Okay what is up with all the cheesy grins? I thought we were going to look for Alice and Dana…” Helena questioned
“We are…” Just as Shane was about to continue she noticed Carmen put her thumbs up behind Lara and Helena’s back to indicate what she had caught them at.
“…We are…going to look for Alice and Dana but I thought that it wouldn’t be right letting you two fuck while we were left searching.”
Helena and Lara didn’t realise that in the time Carmen had got both of them Shane had already been out to the beach and spotted Alice and Dana.
“Well lets get going the…wait what did you just say? We weren’t…” Helena giggled nervously, “We weren’t doing anything now grab the flashlight from under the sink and lets get going.”
“Way ahead of you…” Bette held the flashlight up to show Helena.
“Where is Jenny by the way?” Lara questioned
“She pulled some girl and went back to her place, so I don’t think we’ll be seeing much of her.” Tina said
“Lets go.” Shane said excited about what all her friends where about to see.
As they walked out of the beach house the friends immediately saw what Shane had. Dana was lying with her arms tightly wrapped around Alice and they were kissing each other. When Shane had saw them they were asleep but now they were making out and Alice had now started kissing down Dana’s neck.
“So that’s why you came in and looked all smug, you said you didn’t see anything.” Bette pointed out
“Yeah I know but I thought that it would be better for all of you to see for yourself.”
“God they are so cute together, I don’t think Ive seen any two people more perfect for each other.” Helena smiled
“I know, and at least now we know that they will both be loved the way they deserve to be.” Shane said
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What a show.. Haha!
Brilliant – keep them coming.
Al is so crazy.It’s a good story and I wouldn’t mindreading more.
well that was great first helena and lara then alice and dana who had their own plan going on great can’t wait for the next post so please petty petty please post soon and great update I love this story
“God they are so cute together, I don’t think I’ve seen any two people more perfect for each other.” Helena smiled. “I know, and at least now we know that they will both be loved the way they deserve to be.” Shane said. “That’s so true,…” I can’t agree more to these observations. They are the best couple. And a clever Alice, Perfect. Good chapter, post soon.
LOOL! I love you too! Yes I think i love your story it´s great! :DThanks for put more lines to Carmen!Great chapter and please post more soon!
LOOL! I love you too! Yes I think i love your story it´s great! :DThanks for put more lines to Carmen!Great chapter and please post more soon!
Haha, loved the update! Please conintue this story, Dana and Alice are SO cute in it. :D
You know I love your writing/stories and I love Danish. However, if you wanted to end this story, this would be the perfect place to do so. If not, I’m certainly not going to stop looking forward to new chapters or stop reading! I trust your judgement on the matter. ;-D Thanks for another great story update!
that was a really cute story. i like it alot. very sweet.