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    GETTING TO THE GOOD PART—Ch. 1

    Story written on January 19, 2007 by toribio.
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    A different spin on the B&T characters

    GETTING TO THE GOOD PART—Ch. 1

     

     

    When Bette’s alarm clock went off she could feel the distinct pounding in her head and the accompanying dry mouth that came with a hangover. She had stayed out too late with the girls the night before but in her defense they were celebrating Alice’s promotion as a full fledged newspaper columnist.

     

     

    Bette slapped her hand down onto the alarm clocking ending its incessant ringing. Why was it that alarm clocks sound so much louder when you have a hangover? Bette buried her head under her pillow hoping to block out the sun from shining so brightly but the annoying sounds of birds chirping in the morning stamped out the possibility of Bette getting anymore sleep.

     

     

    Bette groaned as she sat up holding her head in place to minimize its movement. She reached over to the side table clutching her bottle of water still untouched from the night before. She would have mentally kicked herself for her carelessness but right now thinking would probably hurt too much. She swallowed a few aspirin draining the water bottle hoping they’d work their magic to cease the pounding in her head. Bette dragged herself out of bed if she didn’t have to meet with Franklin later today she would have skipped out on work in favor of cocooning herself in her big comfy bed.

     

     

    Bette was on autopilot her eyes still closed as she made her way into the bathroom. She ever so gently opened her eyes as she came into contact with the sink. Looking up at the mirror she wasn’t too surprised at her reflection although she was grateful she didn’t look as bad as she felt. After a quick stop to empty her bladder and washing up a bit she made her way to the kitchen to turn on the coffee machine. Thankfully she had the foresight to prepare its contents the night before. Once the machine was churning away she made her way back to her bedroom peeling off her clothes strewing them haphazardly onto the ground as she made her way towards the shower.

     

     

    The warm water did wonders for her she was even starting to feel human again. There was still a slight pounding in her head but thankfully that was all the remnants left over from her night out. She looked back into the mirror as she was almost done getting ready for work and smiled you could hardly tell she was out all night getting sloshed with her friends.

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    1. HEY T! YOU HAVE ANOTHER WONDERFULL STORY STARTING AND IT SHOULD BE QUIET INTERESTING TK AN ARTIST.YOU CANT LEAVE US HANGING.you said you had alot things going on butt you have to find the time to come back for updates for both stories..tk a daughterinlaw not for long with bette around!

    3. Toribio…this was absolutely wonderful. It really evoked images of what your narration describes. I hope you’ll continue it. If you do, it is sure to be one of the seminal pieces. It grabbed me…it’s really quite good. Please continue.

    4. Oh, no you didn’t just leave me hangin like that! Hmph, the nerve! LOL! Come on, you’re killing me here! I have tpo know if it was Tina she turned around and saw. i bet it was…. uess I’ll have to wait and see. Please post soon!

    6. i think you should continue with that…so tina is a daughter-in-law? and this is her who just came in? i hope bette won’t get involved with helena again

    18. This story is going to be full of twists and turns. Bette has to meet with Helena 3 times a month and TIna is an artist, who is Peggy’s daughter in law…..interesting. How long before Bette gets Tina to express her “artistic” abilities in a personal setting ? LOL! Please continue….

    19. Yes you should continue this story. I believe that Bette has found her next artist for the upcoming show. I hope that Tina is not with Helena and that the daughter in-law statement was more of a passing issue. It would not be a good situation for Bette to take Tina away from a Peabody.

    20. A T&B beginning,love them. I hope you continue with this one…Tina is PP’s Daughter-in-Law, now is it through Helena, PP has another Daughter or is it the Son. And to top it T is an Artist. Great Start, looking forward to reading more. Thanks.

    21. I’m hooked! I love any story that features Bette and Peggy. But better than that I love the twist you’ve put on things w/ Bette having already had a failed relationship w/ Helena. This should be very interesting…..Is Tina married to Helena or does Peggy have other children? So excited to read where you go with this story. You are off to a great start so please continue.

    25. Wow T this sounds like another great story! Franklin is an ass through and through. And it’s really not cool for Peggy Peabody to force her daughter in Bette’s face – it’s unethical on Peggy’s part to put Bette into that position. Peggy should pay to have her daughter educated elsewhere…you know she could tell that Bette didn’t want to do this part of the “proposition.” I wonder if Peggy has alterior motives. Tina as an artist sounds very inspirational. Can’t wait for more!

    26. Het Tori, A brilliant beginning. Fabulous to have the gang together and having a blast. Bette was overwhelmed by the beauty she saw on the beach and here’s hoping it is the same beauty now asking her if she needs some assistance. Terrific twist to have Tina (I hope) as the artist even if Bette has to put up with teaching Helena about art. Maybe Bette could use Tina’s paintings as an illustration. Getting to know the painter can only help appreciate the art. As always you have crafted a beautiful drama here. Full of promise and excitment. Please continue soon. A Fan.

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