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God she’s beautiful chpt. 11
Bette: Exactly. You had your chance and you didn’t want it so let her have a chance maybe she just might
Tina looks at Bette…A tear falls from her face…She turns and walks towards the door…
Bette: Tina
Tina turns around…She looks at Bette
Bette: I never meant for it to be this way. I had other plans
Tina exits her office and walks down the long hallway…She gets back to work…She ends up leaving early from the gallery in hoping for a good day of rest…Seeing Bette and knowing that she and the writer are together makes her heart ache…She arrives home and looks herself in the mirror…
Tina: What the ***** have I done?
GALLERY
Denise comes for Bette after work…They both drive down to the planet…They exit their cars and enter through the planet door…Bette is greated by Bette and she looks at her weird
Marina: What’s going on?
Marina looks at Bette and then Denise…Bette smiles
Bette: Marina this is Denise
Denise extends her hand
Bette: And Denise this is Marina
Marina and Denise shake hands….Marina looks at Bette
Marina: Bette do you mind if I talk to you over there
Bette: Sure um Denise you can have a seat and I’ll be right back
Denise smiles at Bette
Denise: Ok I’ll be over there in the couner
She points to the spot
Bette: Ok I’ll be back
Bette and Marina walk over to the bar
Marina: What’s going on where’s Tina?
Bette: She and I were just friends that’s it
Marina: No you wasn’t you really liked her I saw it in your eyes
Bette: Enough with Tina now can I please have two coffee’s please
Bette looks around Marina with a serious face
Marina: Coming right up
Marina fetches Bette’s drinks…Bette turns and heads towards the table with Denise
Bette: So
Denise: So
Bette: How long have you been working for L.A. magazine?
Denise: For about two years. I have written all types of articles but not about museum’s before
Bette: Well you know what they say it’s a first time for everything
Denise smiles and licks her lips
Denise: What are you doing later?
Alice: Staying the night over her girlfriend’s house
Bette looks over her shoulder…Alice sits at the table
Alice: I’m sorry am I interupting something?
Bette: Yes
Denise: No
Bette looks at Denise
Bette: Denise we were busy talking remember a deep conversation
Alice laughs and looks at Denise
Alice: Oh a deep conversation huh?
Denise: It’s not what you think?
Bette: It’s not?
Bette looks at Denise..
Denise: I’m sorry I have to go
Alice stands
Alice: No please stay we were just getting started
Bette: With what?
Alice: With Denise first off apologizing to you and to me
Bette: For what?
Alice: For breaking the L.A. magazine rule
Bette: And that is?
Alice: No relations to the client
Bette: But Alice you and I dated-
Alice: That’s different I’m the boss and what I say goes right Denise
Denise: Right
Alice: I’m listening
Denise: Bette I apologize for hitting on you. I shouldn’t have and I deeply apologize. And Alice I’m sorry for breaking the agreement that you and I made this morning. Does this means that I am suspened?
Alice: Yes for three days without pay
Denise stands up
Denise: Can I leave now?
Alice: Be my guest
Marina comes up with the coffee in her hands…
Marina: Where is your lady friend?
Bette: She just left thanks to Alice
Marina: Thanl god
Bette looks at Marina
Bette: What does that mean?
Alice: Exactly what it means. What were you doing with her?
Bette: Relaxing until you came
Alice: What happened to Tina?
Bette: Remember what I told you this morning. That’s what happened. We’re through so do me a favor and please leave me alone
Bette gets up from the table…She exits the planet…Marina turns and looks at her
Marina: Do you want me to get her?
Alice: No let her go
TBC…How is it so far?
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(53 votes, average: 3.87 out of 5)
How is it? Do you have to ask us? It is wonderful. Please post soon…I need my fix.
why is it when you have something ,you don’t want it, Then end up wanting it? Bette is doing what Tina wanted her to do.Yet she gets mad at Bette because she is going out. Yet she is still with Eric. Anyway loved the story. thanks
it’s great, please continue
Alice! Another blocker!
I’d give 3 days’ pay to be with Bette Porter. Denise, get out the classifieds!
It is EXCELLENT.
How is it?, Surely you jest. It’s wonderful and please turn Tina’s head around and get her back to Bette. Thanks.
tina better get it together now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
fyi let tina suffer some more, i like it when shes J E A L O U S.
wow….
really good ..please post soon….
Good chapter. This is sad and they need to do something about it. Alice is so funny. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
This is great! I love B&T beginnings and yours fits in perfectly. Please continue with the great story. Kiitos!
Love it. More please ?
I’m looking forward to the next chapter…I’m anxious to see whether Tina is going to come to her senses and dump Eric! I also hope Bette will be able to look past Tina’s facade and really see her heart and know that she really is in love with her. You’re doing a great job! Thanks.
Love it so far> Keep it going. Great Twist!!!
wonderful story cant have it both ways tina. u need to make up your mond about bette or let her date
Great chapter, can’t wait for more.
Ah, Alice saves the day again! She’s been doing that for a while now too. I’m glad Bette respected Tina’s wishes and tried to keep it professional, however, I’d really like to see Tina finish up this job and lose Eric.
im here for the ride
I am staying with this story.Tina needs to get Bette at any cost.
Still Wonderful I Love it Please continue post soon Thanks.
please continue..i hope they talk about what happened and Tina must to tell what she is feeling..great chapter post soon thanks V
Dyke..fucking…drama……get it together ladies