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God she’s beautiful chpt. 9
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Tina exits the room…She bends down and picks up the folder…She opens it…She smiles…She closes the folder…She calles Bette
Alice: You going?
Bette: I’m in. What time and where?
Alice: 8′o clock at the planet. We’ll leave from there
Bette: We’ll be there…
TBC…Shall I contunue?
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DAY 6 THAT EVENING…
Bette is dressed and ready and ***** as always…She is wearing gucci all over…And she smells good too…The brunette looks herself over in the mirror another time before she exits the house…She gets in the car and heads to Tina’s…
MEANWHILE AT TINA’S HOUSE
Tina just finished dressing…She grabs her purse and heads to the livingroom and have a seat on the couch…She waits patiently for Bette…The time is ten minutes to seven…She looks at her watch and then back at the door…She is very nervous and all mushy inside…You could have sworn that she was going to her senior prom with the way that she was feeling…She felt like a school girl gone wild with nothing to calm her down…Her cellphone rings
RING! RING!
She checks the caller id and smiles…
Tina: Where are you?
Bette: I’m outside are you ready?
Tina: I am I’ll be out in a sec
Bette: Ok I’ll be waiting
Tina ends the call and stands up…She looks herself over one last time before she exits her apartment…She walks to the door and takes a deep breath before she opens it…
MEANWHILE OUTSIDE AT BETTE’S CAR
Bette hops out the car and goes over to the passenger side…She opens the door…She looks up at the sound of heels clicking against the pavement…The brunette’s lips depart with a smile revealing her perfect white teeth…She watches Tina as she gets closer and closer and closer…Bette extends her hands in which Tina grabs them…Bette feels as her fingertip rubs against Tina’s soft palm…Tina looks at her and walks closer into Bette’s welcoming arms…The both embrace
Bette: I’m so happy that you came
Tina releases the embrace and looks at Bette
Tina: I’m happy that I came too
Bette smiles…She looks at Tina’s outfit
Bette: Wow you look beautiful
Tina: Well thank you. You look stunning
Bette: Thanks. You ready?
Tina: I’m ready
Bette extends her hand
Bette: Come on lets go
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aww so sweet i cant wait till the date!! so excited please post sono thanx byeness<330927352903857
Good chapter. Bette and Tina are so sweet and can’t wait to see their date. Post soon please, thanks!
keep going. lets see where this goes.
Oh! this is so sweet OMG! I Love it Hey Vakkav that was so Beautiful Story Please continue and it’s getting interesting all the time Thanks.
SWT….keep it up..Post sOOn..
Loving the product placement.
…back to the story…
Tina is so honest she will tell Eric that she met some she is falling in love with and she will leave him. I can dream can’t I. Thanks
You know, this is probably how these things begin in real life, subtly. Not with a bang, but a whimper.
Cataclysmic love at first sight: is it merely an invention?
Discuss amongst yourselves…
Then get back to me.
I like this version of B and T.When are they going to get to that day?
sweet!!!!!!!!!!
Excellent as always, can’t wait for more.
hello vakkav, first time i leave a message but hey i have been reading all your stories. as always greet and yes you love to keep us hanging. i love that: the reward is always great. just one little thing: please let tina not been torn between two lovers, would love to have a strong decision from tina. but you are the writer and it’s all yours. thanks.
great chapter. wonder when’s Tina gonna tell Eric.
God they are so perfect together..Eric needs to go. great chapter
This was so good, but if anyone of their phones rings again I’m going to jump threw the fucking internet and throw them.in water, then come.back out and read what happens next…aarrgghhh