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God she’s beautiful chpt 18
Bette: I see someone else likes art
Tina: I do a little bit but not alot. This piece here is by Isabella Pernel and I love the way that she embroided the color’s here. You see a bit of yellow and then some green and red.
Bette steps closer to the picture
Bette: What is it suppossed to be?
Tina: Love. You see it comes in all colors and shapes as you can see how she demonstrated the wave of the paint brush
Bette: Yeah I like it it’s welcoming
Tina: Yeah it is come on
Tina takes Bette by the hand…
Bette: T are still going to the movies?
Tina: I was hoping that we could do something else if that’s ok?
Bette: That’s ok but what do you have in mind?
Tina stops at the bottom of the stairs…She looks to the top of them and then back to Bette
Tina: Follow me
Bette does…They head to the top of the stairs…They take a right down a long hall and then a left…Tina reaches the door and consoles the *****…She turns it and opens the door…
Tina: Welcome
Bette’s mouth opens wide…The brunette admires the candle lit room that was filled with the smell of fresh honey dew melon…She steps closer inside as Tina closes the door…Tina comes up behind Bette and places her hands on her leather jacket…
Tina: I’ll take this
Bette lets the blond take her coat off…Tina hangs it up in the closet…She goes over to Bette and takes her hand into hers…
Tina: Come on
Tina guides Bette over to the bed…The blond cuts the light on by the nightstand and reveals the white bag…Bette catches a glimpse of the bag before turning to Tina…
Bette: What’s this?
Tina: You’ll see open it?
Bette does…She opens the white plastic bag…She smiles…
Bette: You rented
Tina: Yes I fugured that it would save more money and I figured that we could be alone. I already made popcorn and we have plenty to drink. I made us a comfortable pallet here in front of the tv so I can hold you and you can hold me
Tina smiles revealing her white teeth
Bette: I could do that. You keep on surprising me everytime and I love it. I never know what to expect with you
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(44 votes, average: 3.75 out of 5)
Woohoo! Am i first??! I love your story vakkav! Five stars as always!
Yes, TBC!!! I love your story.
what is with you people. if you had zero stars and zero readers, then maybe you would get the hint that no one likes your story. lol BUT youve got stars and readers girl. so get to writing another chappy, -_+please.
tina. hmmm liking tina thinking about spending alone time with bette. but then who wouldnt. teehee. enjoying how they are getting to know each other, slowly, thus far. thanks.
TBC???? do you have to ask???? great chapter they are great together no presure jsut enjoying the time together..post soon thanks
you must continue..we would die if you didn’t. ; )
Hey I’m still reading Whoa! that was so great I Love it Beautiful Story Please post soon Thanks!
Yes please continue. How sweet, watching movies at home instead, always much more that you can do there than in a theater. Not sure I would have left to go to a party.
Man Bette and Tina are so cute and romantic, and they are so in love, love it. Post soon, thanks!
‘TBC?’..Tease..like u even need 2 ask..this shit is priceless..thnx 4 writing!..dun stop..PLEASE mst Post so0N..
do continue…you’re doin great!
So…Bette has Tina all alone to herself in Tina’s bedroom, with no Alice to distract them, and she’s not making a move?
Must be love!
Yes, continue!
Of course you must continue. You have a good thing going and I’m anxiously waiting for the next chapter. Kiitos!
thanx 4 the post, very lovely of spending time at the house rather than going at the movies, well let them have fun at shanes party, i really enjoy your story.