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God she’s beautiful chpt 18
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Alice: Excuse me for a moment Kit
Kit: Do ya thang
Alice takes the call…
Alice: Dana what’s up?
Dana: Nothing what’s up with you?
Alice: Nothing I was by Bette’s house talking with her sister Kit
Dana: Oh well are you going to be by there for long?
Alice: Now why?
Dana: I was thinking did you want to join us tonight. Shane’s throwing a party?
Alice: On a Wednesday night?
Dana: Yeah she got a job working with some famous woman
The music in the back ground makes it hard for Alice to hear
Alice: Dana your breaking up I’m losing you if I do call me right back
Dana: Hello Alice…Alice….Alice…*****
Dana ends the call…She goes outside in the back yard and calls Alice back…It’s more quiet back there
Alice: Dana
Dana: Yeah Alice it’s me she got another job working with some famous woman. I forget her name
Alice: When is it over?
Dana: I think at 2. So come over and join us and ask Bette if she wants to come. She can bring Tina
Alice: I will. Hold on
Alice looks at Kit
Alice: Do you want to hang out tonight?
Kit: Where?
Alice: At my friend Shane’s. She threw a party tonight in celebration of a job she got
Kit: Ok I’m there.
Alice lifts the phone to her ear
Alice: Dana is it ok to bring Kit?
Dana: Yeah Shane invited everyone so come on
Alice: Ok we’ll be there. I’ll see you later
Dana: Don’t take all night
Alice: Dana can I go please?
Dana: See you later
Alice: Bye
Alice ends the call
Kit: Just give me a moment to freshen up?
Alice: I’ll be waiting…
MEANWHILE AT SHANE’S HOUSE…
Dana makes way into the house…She excuses herself through the packed room…She makes her way over to Shane…She is smooching with the girl from the club that night…She taps her on the shoulder…
Dana: Shane
Shane looks up
Shane: Excuse me.
She looks at Dana
Shane: Yeah
Dana: They are on their way
Shane nods her head and smiles
Shane: Thanks
Dana: Your welcome…
MEANWHILE AT TINA’ S HOUSE…
The movie ends…Tina cuts the tv off…
Tina: So what do you think?
Bette: I think that he deserved every moment of it. He had it coming
Tina: Yeah he did. I just can’t believe that he threw her out the house like that. And her grandmother is just as crazy as the husband. Can you imagine just being with someone that doesn’t even acknowledge you?
Bette: No. Being in a relationship like that has to be awful
Tina: It is I’m sure of it
Bette’s cellphone rings…
Bette: Bette Porter
Alice: Bette it’s me Alice
Bette: Hey
Alice: What are you and Tina doing after the movie?
Bette: Well we were heading to my house so she can meet Kit. Why what’s up?
Alice: Dana just called me and invied us all to a party that Shane is throwing
Bette: So?
Alice: So Kit’s coming and I think that you and Tina should too?
Bette: Hold on
She looks at Tina…
Bette: T do you want to go to a party?
Tina: Sure who is throwing it?
Bette: You remember Shane don’t you?
Tina: I remember. Sure I would love to go
Bete lifts the phone to her ear
Bette: Ok we’ll go
Alice: Great I’m already at your house just meet me here
Bette: Ok we’re on our way…
Bette ends the call…
TBC????…
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Woohoo! Am i first??! I love your story vakkav! Five stars as always!
Yes, TBC!!! I love your story.
what is with you people. if you had zero stars and zero readers, then maybe you would get the hint that no one likes your story. lol BUT youve got stars and readers girl. so get to writing another chappy, -_+please.
tina. hmmm liking tina thinking about spending alone time with bette. but then who wouldnt. teehee. enjoying how they are getting to know each other, slowly, thus far. thanks.
TBC???? do you have to ask???? great chapter they are great together no presure jsut enjoying the time together..post soon thanks
you must continue..we would die if you didn’t. ; )
Hey I’m still reading Whoa! that was so great I Love it Beautiful Story Please post soon Thanks!
Yes please continue. How sweet, watching movies at home instead, always much more that you can do there than in a theater. Not sure I would have left to go to a party.
Man Bette and Tina are so cute and romantic, and they are so in love, love it. Post soon, thanks!
‘TBC?’..Tease..like u even need 2 ask..this shit is priceless..thnx 4 writing!..dun stop..PLEASE mst Post so0N..
do continue…you’re doin great!
So…Bette has Tina all alone to herself in Tina’s bedroom, with no Alice to distract them, and she’s not making a move?
Must be love!
Yes, continue!
Of course you must continue. You have a good thing going and I’m anxiously waiting for the next chapter. Kiitos!
thanx 4 the post, very lovely of spending time at the house rather than going at the movies, well let them have fun at shanes party, i really enjoy your story.