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God’s Gift- Pt 30
***Angelica***
That was the oldest trick in the book. Even I am not too young to see that the waitress was hitting on Tina all night and I knew that Bette saw it. I must say she is doing a really great job at hiding her disgust.
***Renee***
Tina, what the ***** are you doing? Whatever it is please think about your family. She isn’t worth it.
***Bette***
The fact that Tina left the table without saying anything to anyone and avoided eye contact when I asked about the other piece of paper with the bill says only one thing to me. One other fact is that the waitress had the same look in her eyes that I have when I look at Tina. I watched as she walked over to the counter. She gave her card to the cashier and asked something to her. I saw the cashier point to the back and asked another waitress a question. The moments later she came out. She and Tina were talking. I could tell they were whispering because they were doing that in your ear kind of talking. Tina laughed, she blushed. She gave Tina a playful tap on the shoulder. They talked some more. Then they shook hands and she came back to the table.
“You guys ready to go?” She asked.
“Yeah.” “Uhuh.” Came the responses around the table.
We got to the car and I decided to drive home. “What’s wrong?”
“Nothing.” Ok I’m not as good at hiding my feelings from Tina as I thought I was. She could read me like a book.
“Yeah and I’m Japanese.”
“What?”
“Something is bothering you. You haven’t said a word since we left the restaurant.”
“What?”
“What? Did you change you name to lil jon and didn’t tell me?” I tried to lighten the mood.
“Not now ok.”
“When then?”
“If you two are going to fight do it when we get home please.” Angelica said.
“Tina I can’t believe you are asking me why I’m upset. Do I have to read and spell everything for you?”
“Yeah, I think you do. Because I honestly don’t know why you’re mad.”
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lol..Bette having jealous..cute..is good for every woman feel needed specially in their age..and that girl just saucy and shake them to never forget that even been together for a long time the cant live in a routineand have to show they need each other..great chapter bntfan post soon thanks :o)
I love your story. It´s funny, laughable and makes me smile. Besides that you´re really showing us how much of a handful teenagers and children in general can be. I especially liked this chapter, and I do believe that it´s possible to become jealous even after 25 years of marriage.
Yeah it is nice when someone flerts with you, but in front of your kids at a family dinner? It did seem that Tina was playing a game with Bette, and yes, Tina would have went threw the roof if the roles were reversed. I thought that the waitress was going to make a move on Angelica not her mother. Please continue.
“felt good having someone lusting after me.”
“I lust after you. I crave you.”
“I mean someone young.”
ohhh Tina… don’t go there!
Thank heavens she didn’t keep the note! ;-)
Good chapter. Loving the story. Post soon : )
WOW, FOR SOMEONE TO JUST FLIRT LIKE THAT IN FRONT OF THE FAMILY IS NOT RIGHT..I AM SO GLAD YOU UPDATED….THANKS
I thought she was going to ask for Angie’s info. Oophs!
Yes you can be jealous at ny age. Loved the chapter. The kids are so funny free cake and icecream,plus a free dinner. thanks
Wow, I am so proud of Bette. The old Bette would have let that waitress know is no uncertain terms that one Tina Kenard was hers. But you know we do mellow with age. But you gotta love this story, 25 years and they still both have that look that melts the other one, should we all know such happiness.
I enjoyed this chapter.You can be jealous even if you are in your sixties.Its good that Bette can feel like that sometimes because it only means her love for Tina is strong even after 25 years.
Fabulous story – I just spent the last two days catching up from the beginning. I love how you have covered time and build the lives of Bette and Tina’s children. And the trials of young love – that was a great section. So please post again soon! I want more!