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God’s Gift- Pt 30
I pulled at the side of the road.
“Mom, what are you doing?” I ignored Angelica’s question.
I couldn’t drive and talk. At least not the way I wanted to. I looked at her. “What was in the tray? Why did you have to go talk to the waitress?”
“Is that what this is about?”
“What? You know if I were the one flirting with the waitress you would be livid.” I think I got her with that one.
She sighed. “She left me a note with her number on it. I went to the counter to give it back to her.”
“Why didn’t you just throw it away?”
“I was going to but then maybe I wanted to talk with her.”
“Why the ***** would you want to do that?”
“I dunno maybe because I felt like I should.”
“Why?”
“Because it felt good having someone lusting after me.”
“I lust after you. I crave you.”
“I mean someone young. And I did flirt with her a little so I didn’t want her thinking that it meant more than it was.”
“I don’t believe I’m hearing this.”
“Let’s talk about this when we get home ok? Its not safe here on the road like this.” She said very calmly.
The ride home continued in silence. We got inside, the children went to bed and we went to our room. I tried to hold her, but she pushed me away. I had time to think and I know that Tina wouldn’t go outside our marriage. I was mad but I understood what she was saying. And perhaps at 57, if a young girl were to show any interest in me I too would feel flattered. I tried once again to touch her, “Bette, don’t.”
She used my name. Not babe or baby, but Bette, which means she’s mad. “I’m sorry I overacted. I just get insecure sometimes.”
Her eyes softened. “Don’t you know how much I love? After twenty-five years? After everything we’ve been through?”
“I know, I know. But, but you said so yourself. That it felt nice having someone look at you like that.”
“I did. But its nothing compared to what I feel when you look at me.” Maybe I was doing the look, because she had that look in her eyes. The kind of look that I knew I was getting lucky tonight.
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lol..Bette having jealous..cute..is good for every woman feel needed specially in their age..and that girl just saucy and shake them to never forget that even been together for a long time the cant live in a routineand have to show they need each other..great chapter bntfan post soon thanks :o)
I love your story. It´s funny, laughable and makes me smile. Besides that you´re really showing us how much of a handful teenagers and children in general can be. I especially liked this chapter, and I do believe that it´s possible to become jealous even after 25 years of marriage.
Yeah it is nice when someone flerts with you, but in front of your kids at a family dinner? It did seem that Tina was playing a game with Bette, and yes, Tina would have went threw the roof if the roles were reversed. I thought that the waitress was going to make a move on Angelica not her mother. Please continue.
“felt good having someone lusting after me.”
“I lust after you. I crave you.”
“I mean someone young.”
ohhh Tina… don’t go there!
Thank heavens she didn’t keep the note! ;-)
Good chapter. Loving the story. Post soon : )
WOW, FOR SOMEONE TO JUST FLIRT LIKE THAT IN FRONT OF THE FAMILY IS NOT RIGHT..I AM SO GLAD YOU UPDATED….THANKS
I thought she was going to ask for Angie’s info. Oophs!
Yes you can be jealous at ny age. Loved the chapter. The kids are so funny free cake and icecream,plus a free dinner. thanks
Wow, I am so proud of Bette. The old Bette would have let that waitress know is no uncertain terms that one Tina Kenard was hers. But you know we do mellow with age. But you gotta love this story, 25 years and they still both have that look that melts the other one, should we all know such happiness.
I enjoyed this chapter.You can be jealous even if you are in your sixties.Its good that Bette can feel like that sometimes because it only means her love for Tina is strong even after 25 years.
Fabulous story – I just spent the last two days catching up from the beginning. I love how you have covered time and build the lives of Bette and Tina’s children. And the trials of young love – that was a great section. So please post again soon! I want more!