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Going Brit
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20 minutes of driving later and Helena had reached her destination. After parking she got out of her car, before her stood a huge 6 storey derelict building, which had police tape and several no entry signs plastered across the front. She made her way towards the back of the building, through the ruined alley way and overgrown bushes. She eventually made her way to the back and headed towards the far corner, she pulled back some of the shrubbery that was growing up the side of the building to reveal the ladder attached to the wall, it led up to a metal staircase that went all the way up to the roof. Helena bent down to take off her shoes; she didn’t think it a good idea to tackle the ascent in her 3inch Prada heels, as she was taking them off she saw a pair of Jimmy Choo’s poking out from under a bush, it was all the evidence she required to know she had found her love.
As she began her climb she remembered the first time she had brought Bette up here, they had been officially seeing one another for exactly two months…
***flashback***
“Are you serious? You want me to climb up there??” Bette exclaimed incredulously as she looked up at the feeble looking ladder, which looked like it could collapse at any given moment.
“Darling I assure you it is perfectly safe, come on… please? I promise it’ll be worth it.” Helena pleaded with Bette while staring into her beautiful brown eyes.
“Well I guess this explains the need for trainers, come on then lead the way.” Bette said with an air of resignation, realising the obvious importance of the place to Helena.
“Well I thought you’d prefer it to being barefoot, trust me I learnt the hard way, climbing this thing in heels is a very bad idea.”
“Climbing this thing seems like a very bad idea period. But I must say the view is amazing” Bette said as began to follow Helena up the ladder, taking in the glorious sight of her bum moving above her. “So are you going to tell me why an abandoned old building holds such value to you?”
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Great Chapter!!! Can not wait for the next. PPS
aww Darkie this is really sweet and funny! YOU definitely have the art of writing sarcastic dialogue down pat! :) hope Bette and Helena dont fight for too long now! post sooon(er) ok? and thanks!
Hey darkie, glad to see you again and like our sexy v already said we missed you in the thread. Great chappy who were you kidding when you said you couldn’t write huh?
Thanks for continuing this story; it’s great!
Really enjoying the story, especially that it is in the UK…love the flashback. Looking forward to the next post!!!
Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the next…Hopefully soon!
Thanks for posting…hopefully she’ll get Bette & us to listen to why she brought the infamous Candy across the waters to hammer some nails. Please post soon.
This looks like an awesome BeLena fic. I’m so excited to see the next chapter. More please!
Good chapter and let see some more!
hey darkie im glad to see your back!!! And im realy happy you posted again we have all missed this in our thread. Cant wait for the next chapter
Hey DA452, what does it look like up there? This is good…please post again, soon.
Great stuff DA452 and it’s really great to have you back…I hope you’re gonna stick around for good too :) We missed you! I’ve just reread the other chapters to refresh my memory…this is a great storyline and I can’t wait to see were you take us…loved the dialogue in this chapter and the way the girls interact…can’t wait for your next post :)