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Gone Too Long
She was with Bette for seven and a half years. They were so in love with each other. They were the perfect couple. Sure they had a lot of ups and downs and off and ons, but at the end of the day, no matter how hard they tried to forget it, they needed each other. They broke up because Bette had cheated. Tina had become so secure in her conviction that Bette would never hurt her, that when it happened it completely destroyed her soul. It took her a while but she had finally forgiven Bette for that. To tell the complete truth she wanted Bette back. She wanted the love of her life back. She was always going to be in love with one Bette Porter, and it was time she faced it. Bette shamelessly had begged Tina to take her back, but Tina was just too stubborn. But now less than a year later she wanted her Bette back.
Tina was still on her bed crying, not because she wanted Bette back, but because she was so sexually frustrated. She knew what she had to do to get relief. It was only a phone call away or a short drive away. She would just have to swallow her pride and do what her heart and body desperately needed her to do. So she picked her phone and dialed the number.
“Hello. Bette Porter Gallery.”
“Hi James. It’s Tina….umm….Is Bette around?”
“No sorry Tina she didn’t come in today she said was going to work from home”.
“Oh is she sick or something?”
“Um honestly I don’t know. Why don’t you try calling her at home or on her cell.”
“Ok James. Thank You.”
“You’re welcome. Have a good day. Bye.”
So Bette was at home. What if she was sick? She slowly started dialing Bette’s number.
“Hello.”
“Bette. It’s me Tina.”
“Hi T. How are you?”
“Oh I think I should be asking you that question since Bette Porter didn’t go to work today.”
“Oh no. I’m fine. I just didn’t feel like going in today and James said…….”
“Bette can I come over? I really need to talk to you.” Tina said, cutting Bette off mid sentence.
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(39 votes, average: 3.87 out of 5)
great start!
OK, so if this is your first fanfic it was exceptional! I already added you to my favorite authors! Please post soon, I’m hooked!
You are very good at writing the love scenes and describing feelings. That was great. Maybe the ‘talking’ part could be a little better and detailed but I know how hard it is to make it feel ‘real’ to some people like me in this case, but please continue, because I honestly enjoy this :) PPS!
What a start.PPS
Wow, please more, a little more talking yes but good start. PPS
really enjoyed the intensity of the scene.. i can visualize it..thanks
Great start, please continue. So early in the morning to make me feel like this. WOW!!!. Hope this is not a dream by one of them and that they are truly together. Thanks for sharing. PPVS
critical emotional juncture coming up, how will they handle it?
Wow this is good start and hot, like it. Please post more, thanks!
i too hope it not a dream… and i can’t wait to see what helena says… great start… pps