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Gone Too Long
“Oh Tina. I’m so sorry baby. This must be torture for you.” Bette said with tears rimming her eyes. She was overwhelmed at being able to touch Tina so intimately again.
“Please Bette. Lick them baby. I need you.” Tina said also crying.
Bette leaned down and kissed Tina again and then moved down to move her tongue across Tina’s nipple.
“Uhhhhhhhnnnnnnnnnnn. Oh my God. Please.
Bette sucked the nipple into her mouth, and suckled on it gently. She felt Tina start to squirm and thrust her hips up to meet Bette’s stomach. She let go of Tina’s nipple, and moved down her body to undo her jeans. She grabbed the belt loops in Tina’s jeans and pulled them down. She threw them on the floor. She then hooked her fingers in the waist band of Tina’s panties. She looked into Tina’s hazel eyes and saw no objection so she proceeded to pull them off. Bette looked into Tina’s eyes because she was scared to look at Tina’s bare pussy because if it looked anything like her nipples she knew she would start to cry. Tina naked was a beautiful sight. She slowly looked down Tina’s body to her mound then she focused her gaze on her pussy. Her pussy lips were swollen. Her clit stuck out pass her lips and she was soaking wet. She could smell Tina’s arousal waft up to her nose. She loved that smell. Nothing in the world could come close to Tina’s smell. Tina’s smell meant home to her.
“Bette. Baby Please.”
“I love you Tina.”
“I love you too.”
Bette moved her head down between Tina’s legs. She lightly licked at Tina’s clit that was sticking out. She heard Tina gasp. Bette put her tongue at the opening and dragged it all the way to Tina’s clit which she took into her mouth and sucked on gently.
“Mmmmmmmmm………..Oh God………That feels so good babbbyyy.”
Bette continued the process a couple more times. She placed her tongue at Tina’s ready and awaiting opening. She pushed her tongue as far as it would go in to Tina.
“Oh God baby…………please……..make……..me……cum…….mmmmmmmmmmm.”
Bette thrust her tongue in and out of Tina while rubbing her clit in circles with her fingers. Bette felt Tina start to tremble a little. So she replaced her tongue with two fingers and started sucking and licking Tina’s clit.
“Uhn……mmmmmm……..hummmm……ughn…………I……….uhn……….Be……….”
Tina could no longer put words together. She was too far gone the feelings her too much she felt like she was going to pass out. She was shaking uncontrollably. She was almost positive she was going to cum. She tangled her fingers up in Bette’s hair afraid that if she let go it would turn into a dream and she would wake up in her bed again.
Bette felt the signs of an oncoming orgasm. So to finish Tina off and give her what she so desperately needed she latched on the her clit and curled her fingers up to that special spot that she remembered always drove Tina over the edge. She looked at Tina’s face. It was red and contorted she was in the throes of passion. Tears were streaming down her face. Bette took a mental picture of this and put it in her memory.
“Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh……………I’m…………gonna……..cuuuuuummmmmmmmm……………..oooooooohhhhhhh………god…………………cuuuuuuummmmmmmmmiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnngggggggggggggg”
If felt like fire was ripping through Tina’s stomach as she orgasmed. She had never felt anything like that before. She came so hard and so long. All she remembered was seeing Bette’s face then black.
Bette couldn’t believe Tina ejaculated all over her. It had went pass her fingers and onto her shirt. Bette couldn’t believe how erotic it was to see Tina’s cum shoot pass her fingers and land on her clothes. Witnessing this made her extremely horny. She also knew the pleasure was too much for Tina and it made her pass out. It happened before. She knew she would be ok so she got off of Tina and covered her up in bed. Bette went in the kitchen to get Tina some water for when she woke up. She walked back to the room put the water on the dresser and took off her jeans and her wet shirt and layed down and waited for Tina to wake up.
To be continued…………….maybe it depends?
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(39 votes, average: 3.87 out of 5)
great start!
OK, so if this is your first fanfic it was exceptional! I already added you to my favorite authors! Please post soon, I’m hooked!
You are very good at writing the love scenes and describing feelings. That was great. Maybe the ‘talking’ part could be a little better and detailed but I know how hard it is to make it feel ‘real’ to some people like me in this case, but please continue, because I honestly enjoy this :) PPS!
What a start.PPS
Wow, please more, a little more talking yes but good start. PPS
really enjoyed the intensity of the scene.. i can visualize it..thanks
Great start, please continue. So early in the morning to make me feel like this. WOW!!!. Hope this is not a dream by one of them and that they are truly together. Thanks for sharing. PPVS
critical emotional juncture coming up, how will they handle it?
Wow this is good start and hot, like it. Please post more, thanks!
i too hope it not a dream… and i can’t wait to see what helena says… great start… pps