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    Goodbye my lover. Chapter 2

    Story written on March 10, 2006 by badgirl.
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    “I really love you Bette and I’m going to prove it to you!” Tina whispered. It’s a beginning, not much, but still a beginning!

     

    Bette was looking around the bar as she ordered a drink. She had seen some pretty women when she had walked in. ‘Let’s see if I still got it!’ she thought. She looked around until her eyes fell upon a sexy brunette. She checked her out and studied her until the brunette made eye contact. She smiled at her and the brunette smiled back. This was her cue. She picked up her glass and walked over still keeping eye contact. When she got close she smiled at the brunette and leaned into her to whisper something in her ear. The brunette nodded and they walked off to the restrooms.

     

    “Hey Carmen!” Shane yelled. “Yeah babe?” Carmen asked. “I uhm, am going over to check on Tina ok?” Shane said as she walked towards the door. “Why?” Carmen asked as she stopped Shane by grabbing her arm. “What?” Shane asked looking at her questioningly. “Why would you go over there and check on her?” Shane took Carmen’s face in her hands and looked into her eyes. “Look babe, she’s still my friend ok! And she needs a friend right now!” Shane kissed Carmen on the lips and let go. “You’re to good for this world!” Carmen said as she walked back into the kitchen. Shane just walked out the door to check on her friend.

     

    She went through the back yard and went to the glass doors. She looked through them and saw Tina lying on the floor. She quickly opened the doors and ran over to Tina. “Tina.” she whispered, as she got closer. She saw Tina’s body shaking. She crouched down next to Tina and reached out her hand to wipe the hair away from Tina’s face who was still sobbing on the floor. “Oh Tina!” Shane said quietly as she heard Tina still repeating ‘I’m sorry’. She got closer and just held Tina like any friend would.

     

    As soon as Bette came out of the restroom she went over to the bar, ordered a shot and downed it at once. She paid and decided to go. As she went to her car she grabbed her cell phone and dialled Kit’s number. After two rings Kit answered it. “Hello?” “Hi Kit, it’s me.” Bette said as she got into her car. “Bette! Are you all right? Where are you, I’ve been worried about you!” Kit said. “Look Kit, calm down. I’m fine ok! I just need to ask you a favour.” “Sure, what?” Kit asked. “Uhm, can I stay at your place tonight? I need a place to stay” “Sure baby sis, you don’t have to ask. You know where I hide my key right?” “Yeah I know. Thanks Kit!” “Hey no problem! I’ll see you tomorrow ok.” “Tomorrow?” Bette asked. “Where are you now?” “I’m with Angus.” “Ok, I’ll see you tomorrow then! Oh and thanks again Kit.” “Like I said, no problem. I’ll bring some breakfast with me. Bye!” “Bye.” Bette said and closed her cell. She started her car and was on her way to Kit’s house.

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    2. Ahh all very sad but i love that Tina wants to fight for Bette and wants to prove her love and those papers were an excellent start…Im all teary now!!lol Thanks lovin this

    3. Please continue, this feels that you are heading in the right direction, but there has got to be a lot of talking for Bette and Tina. Nice to see Bette is Angels mom by the adoption coming through. Please post a new chapter soon.

    7. That is so sad,That two people can mess up their life so badly. Tina did the right thing for Bette and Angelica Bette needs that baby in her life thanks

    9. Is so sad see all the pain in this two cause they had an almost perfect life before all this mess but they need to find the way to rebuilding their family, post soon

    10. I’m sad, but I will be okay…lol…There’s nothing they can’t over come…That’s what I try to believe in my heart. I love your story by the way. I apologize that I didn’t post on the last chapter, but I made sure to do so this chappy for sure. Anyway, I agree with B I believe it’s an excellant start, and I’m hoping for some more progress as the stpry goes on. I’m sure you have something in that talented brain of yours, so I hope you share your thoughts with us soon. I’m waiting. Great chapter by the way. Please post soon..bye lady

    11. This is sad and Im crying here, its good that Tina is fight for Bette and let see how she gonna proved it to her. Yes Bette is Angels mother now and happy for her. Ok post soon please, thanks!

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