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Great Unexpectations Chapter 16
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Tina nodded. "What about him, Bette?"
"I don’t know if I can be there, in that bed. Where he was."
Tina looked deeply into Bette’s watering eyes. "Bette. Are you trying to tell me that Jodi has never been in your bed?"
Bette’s eyebrows furled as this smug logic came flying her way. "That’s different, T."
"Yeah. You’re right. It is different. I never went all the way across the country to beg Henry to take me back. And I never would’ve. I don’t see him anymore. But you see her every day at work. Do you think that’s easy for me? It’s not. Believe me. But I trust you, Bette."
Bette had no response. She knew Tina was absolutely right. But it still didn’t stop the tightening of the knot in her stomach.
"Bette, we’ve both had other people in our lives. In our beds. That’s going to be something that we either learn to live with, or we don’t. I know what my vote is."
Shit. When did Tina get so fucking wise?
Tina could see that her words were resonating. She leaned in to kiss Bette softly. After the kiss broke, she whispered into Bette’s ear. "I know what you want, babe. I want it too. All of us, living here. A family again. But I need you to spend just one night with me in my bed first. That’s all I ask."
Tina drew back from Bette’s face. Bette did not meet her gaze. Bette instead looked again at Angie, sitting on her lap. Smiling. Bette smiled back at her Boo and kissed her little nose.
"Ok, T. I’ll come over", she sighed.
The look of satisfaction on Tina’s face glowed. Tina stood up. "Ok, good. Why don’t you help us pack up the car. Then later, when your ready, you can come over.
"Hold on, T. So, if I do this, if I come over tonight that means you’ll come back home? For good?"
Tina nodded with a knowing grin.
"Well, then I’m not packing any damn bag into your car. I’ll let you take your toothbrush, but that’s it. Your things are staying here."
Tina leaned in happily with a hungry kiss and sealed the deal. "We’ll see you later."
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Bette spent the better part of that evening unpacking Tina and Angie’s bags and doing the laundry as she had earlier tried to bargain. When those chores were done, she tried to summon the courage to walk to her car. She thought of Tina making dinner and smiled. She thought of Angie waiting for her in her high chair and smiled. She thought of Tina’s bed and the knot came back. She sat down on the sofa and let her thoughts drift her off to sleep.
She awoke three hours later in a panic. Afraid she’d slept through the night and disappointed Tina. She looked at her watch. Nine-thirty. Shit. Missed dinner. Angie’s already in bed. Tina’s doing what? Probably getting pissed. She quickly grabbed her keys and ran out of the house to her car. She sped over, praying that she would see a light on in Tina’s window. No light would mean Tina had given up and gone to sleep. No light would mean Bette was in deep shit. Don’t think about the fucking light. Think about the fact that you left the house without any clothes for work tomorrow. Fuck!! Can’t turn back now.
She finally made it to Tina’s street and searched frantically for a parking space. "Fuck it", she said as she pulled over and double-parked. She ran to Tina’s door, thankful to see a tiny light still on. She knocked on the door while she tried to calm her racing pulse. After an excruciating minute, Tina opened the door with a smile. No smart-ass ‘it’s about time’ comment. No anger. Just Tina. Happy to see her. Bette’s panic began to fade as she was pulled into the apartment.
"You missed Angie. She’s asleep now."
"I’m sorry T. I-"
"It’s ok, Bette. I’m just happy you came", Tina said. "Besides, I already cancelled my cable and it’s hell dealing with those people. So you’re stuck with me now."
Bette’s relief overwhelmed her as she took Tina into her arms and kissed her passionately. Tina led her to the bedroom. Bette would later be surprised to recall that she hadn’t thought of Henry once that entire night. Only Tina.
TBC
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I really enjoyed Shane and Alice’s scenes in that. :D
The overslept panic is awful! It’s the only way my mind will be come unclouded quickly after sleep. Good for Dana getting the last laugh! :D
Yet another chapter jam-packed with funny and psychologically acute moments. Bette covering Boo’s ears because she was afraid that Henry’s name would provoke a smile really got to me. And the Sharpie returns!
Loved this chapter Red. They way you showed them all getting their days started was really cool. Great conversation with Alice and Shane regarding Dana getting the last laugh – that was ingeniously funny…and kind of sad at the same time. It’s good that Tina is helping Bette face her demons. Bette is learning that even though she and T may have some trepidations, they will be alright as long as they keep communicating and working through them together. I’m glad Tina wasn’t upset that Bette was late…I hope Bette’s car doesn’t get towed with her being double parked! Thanks Red! This story is just awesome!
Wonderful read, I love this story more every time you post another chapter. Great update.PPS
This was such great chapter, from Bette and Tina, to the interspersed scenes with their extended family, to the end. What’s one night and the risk of aticket or a towing when you have forever to look forward to? Thanks for the post, red, hope the next is soon.
Bette, why don’t you just give us all a heartattack.
thanks! you’ve outdone yourself again! all of the little snippets were fantastic. hadn’t thought of the coin as a seed, must say. and i’m sitting here hoping bette remembers having double parked. i somehow doubt it … eagerly await your next update! thanks again!
So glad that Dana finally got the last laugh…forever. Glad Bette is willing to admit her weakness. Thank you for your post.
I loved both Bette and Tina in this chapter. Bette able to express her fears and Tina not letting her get away with hiding them :). Great update–can’t wait for more.
I am totally loving all the B&T goodness and your writing in general – keep it (or them wink wink) coming:-)
Have I mentioned I love your writing? Bette trying to wake T was just fun.The Dana – Alice coin thing was a perfect. Glad she has the last laugh. So does it say “Bullshit”? or something else, was a bit confused? Thanks for finding the time to post.
Loved it! PPS!!
Nice…everything abouyt it…how everybody woke up, how Dana was a prankster, how Bette was unsure of sleeping in Tina’s bed (i’d totally be the same way)…pps
Great update Red! How great was that, Dana’s taking the coin? So funny. And loved Alice’s reaction to it – “That little bitch.” So funny. And B&T were very sweet. I’ve had that panic when I’ve overslept for something, you captured it perfectly! Thanks for taking the time to update, I know things area little hectic right now, what with all the crying you must be doing over last night’s game! LOL. Okay, sorry, just had to squeeze one trash talking moment in, I feel deprived since I haven’t been able to watch the games! PPS!!!
Desite the lovely story, all I can think of is the double parked car. I hope Bette remembers.
Ahhh…The return of the mischievous sharpie… hilarious, loved that scene! Brilliant chapter. Happy to see Dana get the last laugh on Alice… sweet. Just love your writing.
I loved this chapter. Having Bette work through her fear of the “bed” brought fourth how much each is willing to do to get back together. Good riddence to both henry and jodi. Can someone please give back ic’s brain so that she can fix Tibette?
that was so great; i’m so in-love with this story…
yep, i can imagine bette’s fear, i’m glad tina was cool about it..tibette rule!!!
God I felt Bette’s heart racing and feeling what she must have been thinking ” omfg I have screwed up” but glad to read your ending it was greatpps
Summon the U-HAUL! It’s funny that Dana really got the last laugh!
Oh, red….so good. Bette needs help. She is so unsure of herself at times. PPS.
Liked Tina calling Bette out on the bed double standard. Love that they are ready to U-Haul but I hope it isn’t too soon. I read for the B and T stuff but surprisingly really liked the idea of Dana getting the last laugh about the coin. PPS.
Dana got the good one or the best this time. B&T are great!