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Great Unexpectations Chapter 16
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Previously…
She turned to face Tina and kissed her gently on the lips. "I love you Tina."
"Mmmm. You too babe", Tina replied on the edge of sleep. Bette smiled and turned around, taking Tina’s arm in her hand and letting it drape over her. Tina’s semi-conscious body sensed the form of her lover’s body begging for a spoon and responded, hugging her close.
Her last thoughts were to repeat the words she’d said to Bette every night since their reunion. Bette had never heard the words because Tina always made sure Bette was asleep. Tonight her lowered inhibitions let her forget this part of the plan. Tonight Bette would hear the words. Tina put her lips to Bette’s ears and softly whispered. "Marry me, Bette."
Bette smiled as a tear escaped her eye. She held Tina closer and soon heard Tina’s tiny snores. Bette chuckled and whispered back. "Ask me again when your sober."
Chapter 16.
Lovely. Her lovely Tina was snoring loudly as the morning breeze wafted through the bedroom. She was laying on her stomach with one arm under her pillow and the other hanging off the edge of the bed. Bette gently pulled the sheet back and admired her bare back. The soft skin between her shoulder blades. The freckle just inches above her fine rear. The long blonde hair that enviously covered her supple neck. God Tina. Wake up.
Bette moved closer to Tina and let her fingers lightly trace their way up and down Tina’s well defined back, admiring the way one skin tone set off the other and vice versa. She let her hand lay flat against Tina’s back and just kept it there, feeling the skin get warmer as the seconds rolled on. She screwed her lips into a semi- amused, semi-annoyed smirk while Tina continued snoring, oblivious to all of Bette’s attentions, subtle as they were. Normally these moves worked. Normally.
Bette employed Plan B. She brushed Tina’s hair aside and graced the back of her neck with a soft, wet kiss. She let her hand slide down to cup Tina’s firm satin-covered ass and gave it a sweet squeeze. Despite her mission, Bette almost wished Tina would stay asleep. This was fun. Having complete and unfettered access to this body. Not that Tina had fettered anything lately. In fact just the opposite. They had been enjoying each other’s bodies immensely. But it was more than just flesh meeting flesh. It was souls reconnecting. Hearts healing. Love growing. A future… Jesus, Tina. Wake up already!!
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I really enjoyed Shane and Alice’s scenes in that. :D
The overslept panic is awful! It’s the only way my mind will be come unclouded quickly after sleep. Good for Dana getting the last laugh! :D
Yet another chapter jam-packed with funny and psychologically acute moments. Bette covering Boo’s ears because she was afraid that Henry’s name would provoke a smile really got to me. And the Sharpie returns!
Loved this chapter Red. They way you showed them all getting their days started was really cool. Great conversation with Alice and Shane regarding Dana getting the last laugh – that was ingeniously funny…and kind of sad at the same time. It’s good that Tina is helping Bette face her demons. Bette is learning that even though she and T may have some trepidations, they will be alright as long as they keep communicating and working through them together. I’m glad Tina wasn’t upset that Bette was late…I hope Bette’s car doesn’t get towed with her being double parked! Thanks Red! This story is just awesome!
Wonderful read, I love this story more every time you post another chapter. Great update.PPS
This was such great chapter, from Bette and Tina, to the interspersed scenes with their extended family, to the end. What’s one night and the risk of aticket or a towing when you have forever to look forward to? Thanks for the post, red, hope the next is soon.
Bette, why don’t you just give us all a heartattack.
thanks! you’ve outdone yourself again! all of the little snippets were fantastic. hadn’t thought of the coin as a seed, must say. and i’m sitting here hoping bette remembers having double parked. i somehow doubt it … eagerly await your next update! thanks again!
So glad that Dana finally got the last laugh…forever. Glad Bette is willing to admit her weakness. Thank you for your post.
I loved both Bette and Tina in this chapter. Bette able to express her fears and Tina not letting her get away with hiding them :). Great update–can’t wait for more.
I am totally loving all the B&T goodness and your writing in general – keep it (or them wink wink) coming:-)
Have I mentioned I love your writing? Bette trying to wake T was just fun.The Dana – Alice coin thing was a perfect. Glad she has the last laugh. So does it say “Bullshit”? or something else, was a bit confused? Thanks for finding the time to post.
Loved it! PPS!!
Nice…everything abouyt it…how everybody woke up, how Dana was a prankster, how Bette was unsure of sleeping in Tina’s bed (i’d totally be the same way)…pps
Great update Red! How great was that, Dana’s taking the coin? So funny. And loved Alice’s reaction to it – “That little bitch.” So funny. And B&T were very sweet. I’ve had that panic when I’ve overslept for something, you captured it perfectly! Thanks for taking the time to update, I know things area little hectic right now, what with all the crying you must be doing over last night’s game! LOL. Okay, sorry, just had to squeeze one trash talking moment in, I feel deprived since I haven’t been able to watch the games! PPS!!!
Desite the lovely story, all I can think of is the double parked car. I hope Bette remembers.
Ahhh…The return of the mischievous sharpie… hilarious, loved that scene! Brilliant chapter. Happy to see Dana get the last laugh on Alice… sweet. Just love your writing.
I loved this chapter. Having Bette work through her fear of the “bed” brought fourth how much each is willing to do to get back together. Good riddence to both henry and jodi. Can someone please give back ic’s brain so that she can fix Tibette?
that was so great; i’m so in-love with this story…
yep, i can imagine bette’s fear, i’m glad tina was cool about it..tibette rule!!!
God I felt Bette’s heart racing and feeling what she must have been thinking ” omfg I have screwed up” but glad to read your ending it was greatpps
Summon the U-HAUL! It’s funny that Dana really got the last laugh!
Oh, red….so good. Bette needs help. She is so unsure of herself at times. PPS.
Liked Tina calling Bette out on the bed double standard. Love that they are ready to U-Haul but I hope it isn’t too soon. I read for the B and T stuff but surprisingly really liked the idea of Dana getting the last laugh about the coin. PPS.
Dana got the good one or the best this time. B&T are great!