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Great Unexpectations Chapter 18
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The next day they received their first piece of mail. ‘Their’, meaning addressed to both of them at their home address. Tina opened it giddily, feeling silly for being excited about a stupid piece of mail. But in a way, it was a validation of their reunited family. If the Post Office says it’s so, then it’s so.
Bette watched Tina act the fool over the card with immense pleasure. The pleasure soon faded as the look on Tina’s face turned sour. "You have got to be kidding me!!"
"What is it Tina?", Bette said as she reached for the card. Reading it over, Bette’s face took on the same expression as Tina’s. It was an invitation to an evening of drinks and conversation. Courtesy of Faye Buckley. Bette raced to pick up her phone, still holding the card in her hand. She dialed the RSVP number and impatiently waited for it to begin ringing. Tina grinned as she imagined the ass chewing somebody was about to get.
"Hello, this is Bette Porter", Bette began in that tone that let Tina know she’d reached an answering machine. "I’m responding to your invitation. Yes. We will be there." She hit the ‘off’ button harshly and threw the phone down on the table.
Tina’s mouth dropped open and her eyebrows furled. "What the fuck did you do that for? I’m not going over there!"
"Tina. She obviously wants something. This is never going to end if we don’t figure out what it is. Let’s just do this thing and get it over with and get on with our lives."
"You can ‘do this thing’ by yourself, Bette. I’m not stepping one foot in that woman’s house."
"Tina. It’s for both of us. You have to go. I don’t want to go without you."
"Well, then you should have talked to me first!"
Bette’s rising anger was slowly dissipated by the inconvenient fact that Tina was right. She walked up behind Tina and wrapped her arms around her waist. Tina felt Bette’s warm breath whisper onto her neck. "I’m sorry, T. You’re right. I should have asked you."
Tina was quickly becoming very forgiving as her loins grew moist at Bette’s tender touch. She turned to face Bette and was lost in her big brown eyes. "Bette. If you want to go, then I won’t try to stop you. But you’ll have to go without me." Bette did not like the deal but was so enamored at having Tina’s lips in front of her that she forgot to protest.
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i think i know where this story is going-i like it
Oh red, I’m so intrigued by your tangled little web… I’ll have to save my guess for the next chapter. Love your writing!
Faye Buckley is still a b_ _ _ _, and so is her mama. Thanks!
I’m even more confused than before, but will continue to read anyway. This is a very interesting tale. PPS
Great update and a little confusing. Still can’t figure what she is up to and I hope she is not planning to hurt the girls in some way. Maybe a foundation to help the LGBT community. PPS
Well, I’m officially not the sharpest tool in the shed because I have no idea what Faye is up to. I mean, I can guess that she wants to give something huge to Bette and Tina, probably the print Bette sold when she had no j-o-b but other than the obvious I’m dying, I’m sorry, I’ma jackass with a ton of money, I’m drawing a blank. Besides you are way to clever for something as obtuse as that so I guess I’ll have to wait and see like everyone else. Besides I’m too depressed to ponder it any further tonight! LOL.
Man this story gets more intriquing with each chapter. I get the feeling that Faye is dying or just maybe Faye may end up being Bette’s mom (no just kidding). Something is definitely up here.
Maybe I need something as obvious as Blue’s Clues cos this is all a bit Where’s Waldo? for me… I haven’t a Scooby as to what Faye’s up to. But natch, I can’t wait to find out! Still don’t trust her, her motives, or her throwing money at anyone affiliated with a Porter to buy away her guilt. Anyway, I really liked the description of Bette As Driver… it rang so true. I don’t think Bette As Passenger exists, and if she does, she must be fearsome. Excellent as always, red. Thanks for the chapter.
faye better give that print back; i still don’t like the lady.
If this chapter was to let us know what Faye is up to, you still have be stumped. But, that ok, it just means I’ll have to wait to see the connection between Bette and Buckley and why Buckley bought the Kiki Smith print. More to look forward too. Thanks for the update and PPS.
Great writing as always, but Faye’s intentions are a mystery to me. I get very bad vibes from her though.
Good chapter and what the hell is Faye up now!
so faye has kiki smith print…what’s going on? what secret is she hiding?
I am completely hooked! PPS
I have no idea where this is going, but I can’t wait! PPS!
I think you really have the characters and writing so connected realistically and I am definitely gonna put my ff vote in for you next time. It seems to me that you know the show inside and out and I can understand every nuance to your situations. Gotta say the best series I’ve enjoyed so far…..keep up the good word and oh yeah don’t take your time!!!!
Can’t wait to see what’s next. Love B&T’s easy and loving banter. Thanks for the post :)
I’m anxious to see where you’re taking this story. What is up with Faye? Please post again soon!
WOW!!! I so can not wait to see where you take this. I am hooked, Thanks PPS
Hum, I have a little problem. I’m french and I have absolutely no idea of what “a nestled potted fawn” could mean. And the web translations are awful, so would someone please explain this to me. Because I feel I’m loosing a big part of the story here…
I had a feeling that Bette saw the print she used to own. Are Faye’s hands cold and clammy because she’s dying? Please, I need more! PPS!!
I have no idea what Faye is up to.. But can’t wait to find out. Love this story. Angie has great taste in watching Blue’s clues. I used to love watching that with my son. lol
The mystery (reformed Faye or evil-as-ever Faye?) deepens, leaving your readers more hooked than ever. The inventory of Bette’s driving habits was brilliant! Kendra, it’s spotted fawn.
Kendra35, the fawn thing is the Kiki Smith print that Bette sold. :) No idea what Faye is up to.