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Great Unexpectations Chapter 24
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Tina raised her eyebrows, impressed. "Something tells me you’re a big James Bond fan."
"Actually, I’m more a fan of the Bond girls", he said with a bit of mischief.
"Me too", said Bette quietly with a smile. Not quietly enough to escape Tina’s attention. Tina smirked and gently squeezed at Bette’s rib to tickle her. A humble admonishment that did not contain the full weight of it’s intent. Bette giggled easily while grasping Tina’s hand. Richard cleared his throat and the ladies immediately snapped back to attention.
Faye laughed at the whole scene. Or she would have had she been awake. The trio looked to her corner chair and found that exhaustion had fully claimed the frail woman.
"I should put her to bed", Richard said sadly. They nodded solemnly, realizing that their roles as ‘observers’ may be short lived. "Thank you for coming over today. And for agreeing to help. This might be the bit of good news that’ll keep her going a little longer", he said hopefully. "If you don’t mind, we’d like you to look over the files. Get familiar with everything. There’s no real rush, as I’ve said things are kind of silent right now, but you never know when something’s gonna turn up. Also, I’m not too proud to say that fresh eyes might see something I’ve missed. Don’t be afraid to mention anything, okay? This is the type of situation where no ideas or questions are dismissed."
"Okay", Tina said, watching Richard walk to Faye. He gently lifted her out of the chair and carried her in his arms.
"Do you need any help", Bette asked.
"Nah. This I’m used to." The ease with which she was lifted into his arms suggested that Faye was easily under a hundred pounds. The way her clothes hung from her frame verified this suggestion. They stood out of his way as he walked over the threshold and into the hallway. He disappeared into a nearby room for a few minutes before returning.
"Thanks again for stopping by. We’ll be in contact if anything happens. Don’t worry about having to check in. Mrs. B will probably call you about those papers she wants you to sign but other than that and looking over the files, don’t bother yourself too much." He looked down to his feet sadly, trying to hide the onset of his trembling chin. "There will be time for that later."
Bette and Tina politely avoided his eyes and allowed him his emotions. They said their quick goodbyes and left for Bette’s car. While driving home they enjoyed a quiet contemplative atmosphere. Tina began to play with her flash drive. Taking the top off of the tube and putting it back on again. "I’ve seen these before, but never in the shape of lipstick. Pretty hi-tech stuff."
Bette squeezed Tina’s thigh, keeping her eyes on the road, saying nothing.
"Bond girls, huh?", Tina teased. Bette let out a soft laugh and let her hand move up Tina’s thigh slowly. "T. Those women were all before I met you", she joked. "But come on. Pussy Galore? How can you not love that?"
Tina laughed in submission. "Guess you got a point." Her laughter soon turned quiet as Bette’s hand continued on it’s journey. Bette grinned smugly, feeling the affect she was having on Tina. The warmth emanating from Tina’s center and the halted breaths escaping Tina’s mouth were unmistakable. Tina leaned back in her seat, closed her eyes and moaned. "Babe. You’re either gonna have to get us home now, or pull over."
Bette smiled.
TBC
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Another great chapter, great to see that B&T are helping, definitely would make them Bond girls. Please Post again soon.
This chapter had excellent dialogue especially the banter between Bette and Tina. Your NC-17s are smokin’. In fact, all your writing is totally enjoyable and this plot line is intriguing.
Another
amazing
chapter
Redhorse
(You
said
twenty
comments,
not
twenty
“commenters”)
:-)
NC-17
please.
well looks like Spumoni has covered most of da 20 comments lol. I’ll leave one more for further encouragement. Great Story, loved da Bond girls reference;)lol PPS
Okay, since I’m so busy, this should count for 2. I love the fact that after what Faye did to Bette and Tina they are still a forgiven couple. Lets find Cora before Faye is no longer with us, and get rid of Richard the easy way murder the sicko. thanks
ok comment from Md, are we close enough to 20 yet?
Shouldn’t Max be around to help with the computer searches? Just kidding. I’m sure the Bond girls can manage on their own. Now did someone say something about an NC-17?
You are so mean leavin off right there. The next chapter better be an NC-17. I think you got your 20 comments. Hope you enjoyed the game! PPS!!
Great chapter, only bette could get away with the pussy galore comment. Let’s get these two home so they can take care of the situation bette has gotten them into. PPS
Hi, I’m a silent reader but I had to go out of the shades to suport the team in order to help the cause to obtain an NC-17 for next chapter. So please!!!! Don’t let us down! We want a NC FOR NEXT CHAPTER!!!
“Entertain second thoughts” indeed. What have they gotten themselves into??
“Entertain second thoughts” indeed. What have they gotten themselves into??
Pull-over and practice “safe sex” LMAO!
Sorry, I finally caught up so I read the last two chapters together. This chapter had it all, well maybe not all, but the sex was close by. It had intrique, humor and suspense. It also brought some tears to my eyes. I sense some thawing between Bette and Richard. I hope that they can find Cora before Faye moves on from this world.
You are not playing nice, red… first being called a comment slacker, then left hanging with that Ursula Andress image, and finally teased with Bette’s wandering fingers. I’m loving the Cora storyline and am anxious to see much you’ll throw at the girls before she’s found. Very nice chapter, NC-17 or not!
Good chapter. Yeah everyone like James Bond’s movies but they only like to watch James Bond’s girls thats all lol!
The Bond Girls Line so loved that. Bette pull the car over right NOW!!!!! Thanks PPVS
ok you defiantly have 20 comments, I will so look forward to the next chapter. pps
In the immortal words of Bette Porter: “Oh Shasta!!” Look what I’ve gone and gotten myself into. Spumoni, you are a cheater!! ;-) You’re right. Technically I said 20 comments, not commenters. I also ‘technically’ never said chapter 25 would be NC-17 if ya’ll hit the mark. I just implied I would do another NC-17 at some point. Any lawyers out there with some advice??? Have I entered into a binding contract? Oh man. OK. Let me think of a scene. Car or home? Hmm…Tigers lost, by the way. Shasta again!! -red.
I could almost swear one of your readers is a fan of 4chan.org. lol I vote for them pulling over, having a quickie, then getting home and taking their time. ;)
I hope B&T don’t entertain too many second thoughts. Someone needs to find that girl, and it really mustn’t be the black hats. So then, red, is Bette gonna pull the car over, or is she going to make a few (oh, let’s say… *no less than 17*) traffic violations in getting them home? ;) Do post soon, red. Good luck to your Tigers & thanks for the post.
sure i’ll comment for a NC-17.another great chapter btw
LOVED this line, had me laughing out loud! “He noticed the women comparing the colors of their faux lipstick tubes and not-so-discretely trading with school girl enthusiasm.” Do i sense an NC-17 coming up?
Yay. You can totally get me to comment for an NC-17 chapter. Not that I don’t regularly comment..so I think this post should count at least three times. Think about it. PPS.