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    Great Unexpectations Chapter 24

    Story written on September 22, 2007 by redhorse.
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    Season 5ish. I’m Porter. Bette Porter.
    Ok. That summary sucked, but are you intrigued? Read on for more.

    "Very impressive", Bette acknowledged begrudgingly. She wondered if she’d ever get over this uneasy feeling she had about him. "Thank you", he smiled. He could sense her unease and didn’t mind admitting to himself that he enjoyed it a bit. He knew of her ‘alpha’ reputation. Although Faye had made it clear he’d eventually be taking orders from Ms. Porter, he was having a hard time accepting it. Having a hard time getting used to the fact that eventually, too soon, Faye would be gone.

    "But we do have to throw them a bone every once in awhile."

    "How do you do that, exactly?", Tina asked.

    "Sometimes, not too often, I’ll feed them information that’s kind of on target. It’s always about a week old, but it’s enough for them to think that their sources are reliable. If they begin to doubt that, it’s over. I myself am usually about two or three days behind her. When I’m on her trail, that is. It’s been a little silent lately. But I’ve been monitoring the black hats. They are more clueless than I am right now."

    "What’s the longest you’ve gone without having any leads?", Bette asked. Faye smiled slightly. They’re asking the right questions. They’ll do just fine. A hint of exhaustion began to creep in and she sought out a place to rest. There was a chair in the corner. Nothing too terribly fancy but she quickly took it. This wasn’t a room for entertaining guests, after all. The next best option in the room was a stiff computer chair. No thank you. She listened in as Richard continued.

    "Seven weeks. That was a scary time. We’re still not sure where she was during that time. Our last known sighting of her before then had been in Colorado Springs. It’s all in the files", he sighed. "Which brings me to these", he said unlocking the cabinet drawer of the computer desk. He opened it and pulled out a small fire-proof safe with a combination lock on it’s door. He twirled the dial back and forth under Bette and Tina’s watchful eyes. He did not try to conceal the combination, knowing full well that they would soon know as much as he did, and had all rights to any information. Bette registered a startled look of recognition as the numbers clicked. Five. Fifteen. Five. Not very imaginative. But very familiar. She looked slightly to her left and could tell by the dropped jaw that Tina recognized the numbers as well. Numbers like these do not go by unnoticed. Numbers that they knew so well. May fifteenth, two thousand five. Angelica’s birthday. The women’s hands met and clasped tightly as they continued to look at the safe.

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    2. This chapter had excellent dialogue especially the banter between Bette and Tina. Your NC-17s are smokin’. In fact, all your writing is totally enjoyable and this plot line is intriguing.

    17. well looks like Spumoni has covered most of da 20 comments lol. I’ll leave one more for further encouragement. Great Story, loved da Bond girls reference;)lol PPS

    18. Okay, since I’m so busy, this should count for 2. I love the fact that after what Faye did to Bette and Tina they are still a forgiven couple. Lets find Cora before Faye is no longer with us, and get rid of Richard the easy way murder the sicko. thanks

    20. Shouldn’t Max be around to help with the computer searches? Just kidding. I’m sure the Bond girls can manage on their own. Now did someone say something about an NC-17?

    22. Great chapter, only bette could get away with the pussy galore comment. Let’s get these two home so they can take care of the situation bette has gotten them into. PPS

    23. Hi, I’m a silent reader but I had to go out of the shades to suport the team in order to help the cause to obtain an NC-17 for next chapter. So please!!!! Don’t let us down! We want a NC FOR NEXT CHAPTER!!!

    27. Sorry, I finally caught up so I read the last two chapters together. This chapter had it all, well maybe not all, but the sex was close by. It had intrique, humor and suspense. It also brought some tears to my eyes. I sense some thawing between Bette and Richard. I hope that they can find Cora before Faye moves on from this world.

    28. You are not playing nice, red… first being called a comment slacker, then left hanging with that Ursula Andress image, and finally teased with Bette’s wandering fingers. I’m loving the Cora storyline and am anxious to see much you’ll throw at the girls before she’s found. Very nice chapter, NC-17 or not!

    32. In the immortal words of Bette Porter: “Oh Shasta!!” Look what I’ve gone and gotten myself into. Spumoni, you are a cheater!! ;-) You’re right. Technically I said 20 comments, not commenters. I also ‘technically’ never said chapter 25 would be NC-17 if ya’ll hit the mark. I just implied I would do another NC-17 at some point. Any lawyers out there with some advice??? Have I entered into a binding contract? Oh man. OK. Let me think of a scene. Car or home? Hmm…Tigers lost, by the way. Shasta again!! -red.

    33. I could almost swear one of your readers is a fan of 4chan.org. lol I vote for them pulling over, having a quickie, then getting home and taking their time. ;)

    34. I hope B&T don’t entertain too many second thoughts. Someone needs to find that girl, and it really mustn’t be the black hats. So then, red, is Bette gonna pull the car over, or is she going to make a few (oh, let’s say… *no less than 17*) traffic violations in getting them home? ;) Do post soon, red. Good luck to your Tigers & thanks for the post.

    36. LOVED this line, had me laughing out loud! “He noticed the women comparing the colors of their faux lipstick tubes and not-so-discretely trading with school girl enthusiasm.” Do i sense an NC-17 coming up?

    37. Yay. You can totally get me to comment for an NC-17 chapter. Not that I don’t regularly comment..so I think this post should count at least three times. Think about it. PPS.

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