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Great Unexpectations Chapter 25
Bette lowered her hands from Tina’s back to her skirt-clad ass. She squeezed it firmly eliciting moans and grinding. She ran her hands down along Tina’s thighs and back up under the skirt. Skin on skin. "I want you in me, Bette", Tina panted. "Take me. Now. Please." Bette slipped her hand into Tina’s panties and found herself immediately swimming in Tina’s love. So wet. So ready. Tina unbuttoned and unzipped Bette’s slacks and finding Bette as wet as herself she gained entry to her own heaven. They entered each other simultaneously with happy moans of the force they were giving and receiving. They attempted to keep their kiss unbroken but the sheer force of their movements made that nearly impossible. They thrust in unison, harshly. Enjoying the warmth. Filling each other. Harder. Deeper. Tina used her top position to her benefit, grinding into Bette. Riding her. She also used it to Bette’s benefit. Pressing down on her own hand inside of Bette. Harder. Deeper. "Fuck, T!!", Bette cried out in pleasure. Followed by a long, indecipherable torrent of pleas and appreciation.
Tina’s guttural moans also helped fill the air. They felt each other reaching that moment. That moment of complete ecstasy. Their inner walls sprang alive with heavy contractions of orgasmic pleasure. They continued thrusting, prolonging the explosions. One wave after the next. Their lips found each other as their bodies surrendered to their exhaustion. Tina lay her head gently on Bette’s chest and listened to the racing heart beating. Beating for her. "I love you Bette", Tina whispered sleepily. "You too, Tina", came the answer.
Bette ran her hand through Tina’s hair, fighting off her own desire to sleep. She lost that fight and they napped. Napped happily under the shade of the tunnel of trees. Napped contentedly as spent lovers do. Napped through the grumbling of voices coming from behind them. Napping no more when those grumbling voices became angry honks from several vehicles. Tina snapped up first. Her vantage point allowed her to look easily out the rear window. What she saw evoked one of the few responses possible for such an occasion. "Oh Fuck!!", she shouted in panic. Bette began to stir but not soon enough for Tina’s liking. "Babe!! We have to go. Wake up!!" She tried to climb off of Bette and into her own seat as inconspicuously as possible. She groaned and rolled her eyes knowing that there were only so many ways one can try to disguise one’s deeds. And she’d not left herself in a position to exercise any one of those ways. It was obvious they’d been sleeping together. One on another. She poked and prodded Bette to wake her. "Fuck, T. What?", Bette said groggily.
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(26 votes, average: 4.15 out of 5)
That was hot and funny.
That was pretty funny. Sorry about the Tigers. I really wanted them to win the Wildcard over the Yankees. This is a lesson to everyone.. don’t fall asleep after car sex. PPS.
Very silly but very funny and nicely written pps.
Funny and sassy. You may feel uncomfortable writing NC -17s but you do a fine job. PPS. If you do the crime, you have to do the crime. In this case, it was worth it. LOL. PPS.
Gratuitous sex for shits and giggles? Honestly it’s not really my thing, but let me read this to see if I still feel the same. :)
LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!! Definitely hot too. ;)
Very funny chapter!!!
I take back my comment about you not being nice, my dear red. You are too cute! Loved the gratuitous chapter… funny and oh so hot! Gotta love the car sex.
I don’t think God minded…She was probably looking down and laughing at them just like Tina was! You are too funny Red! Thanks you!
Too hot and too funny.
That was sooo funny and HOT. I am having to fan myself with my mouse mat…:0/ PPS
Damn, I wish I was on one of those vans. That was hot, steamy, and then funny as you know what. I know how you feel about the Tigers because the Cubs seem to be doing the same thing now.
That was hot and funny!
Very very clever!!! U r too much…hot also, extremely hot… that car sex always seems to get the fans going.
there’s always time for gratuitous sex in a serious writer’s life; just the right amount of levity coupled with the seriousness of the task they’ve undertaken; nicely sculptured!!!
That was very well written, so funny and hot. I can’t stop laughing.. PPS
Bible camp? Ha! Oh hell yeah, that was definitely worth whatever embarrassment they might be suffering, cos that was h-o-t. (And Bette’s poor Saab… ah well, worth it!) And what’s with all that angry horn-honking? I thought patience was a virtue? Thank you for indulging this horndog with the quick post, red. More when you can! (And commiserations on the Tigers, but it ain’t over til it’s over. Words I need myself… *both* of my teams got a drubbing yesterday.)
You know as a true Tribe fan I feel your pain but not too badly. I think Bette & Tina were just seeking a little devine intervention in their spontaneous expression of joy and happienss. They were just closer to the source then they realized. Watch those religious types they can come back to bite. Thanks for the great post.
Well done! I had to admit the summary was intriguing but I am so glad they “visited” the bible school the way they did! As for the Tigers, all I can do as a Michigander is grumble, or cry when I think of what happened to the Lions too! *grumbling* Good job on the story though….PPS.
Thank You! So funny & hot! Can’t wait for more. PPS!!
How can a scene that hot and funny ever be called gratuitous? It was infinitely more satisfying than the three seconds of Bette/Nadia car sex we got in S4. I love it when Bette frets about her precious Saab too.
Bravo, well done
Praise be for Bette and Tee!