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Great Unexpectations Chapter 29
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He looked up occasionally to check his watch or to rest his eyes or take a drink of his water. On one such occasion he happened upon the sight of Tina’s bare legs, crossed and emerging from beneath her dress. His eyes slowly followed them until the fabric allowed no further access. He continued on regardless, letting his mind conjure up images the eyes could not. Up and up they traveled. He imagined her thighs, soft and supple. Her waist, firm and toned. He saw the gentle slope of her bosom and the arm that reached over to Bette’s waist. Tina’s closed eyes. Her head on Bette’s shoulder. Bette’s head resting on Tina’s head. Bette’s eyes. Not closed. Staring directly at him. Knowing the journey his eyes had been on. Glaring at him. The knot in his stomach was unidentifiable to all except perhaps the most learned of fisherman. Or maybe a boy scout. At this point in time it was certainly beyond Richard’s grasp. It was also beyond his concern. He was more preoccupied with ridding himself of it than naming it. He quickly averted his eyes and stared at his computer. Barely seeing what he was looking at, hoping to give the impression that his visual field trip had been but a momentary lapse.
Bette’s lips turned up slightly at the edges. Satisfied at his quick retreat. She could not pinpoint the exact moment that it happened, but somewhere along the way Richard had become afraid of her. Maybe afraid was too strong a word. She imagined he would prefer to call it a healthy respect for her strength of character. She reveled in that. She closed her eyes again and took in the perfumed scent of Tina’s hair.
Eyes closed, Bette ran the last two hours over and over in her mind. Boarding the private jet everyone quickly took their seats. Their plush leather seats. Richard and Faye sat side by side facing Bette and Tina. Upon takeoff Richard opened his laptop and debriefed the ladies on the precise reason for their trip.
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"I’ve found three names that might get us somewhere. This kid, Jason Landers. His name came up more than any others so we’re trying him first. He’s 23. His mother lives outside of Chicago. I’ve done a complete background check on him. For starters he and Cora worked on four movies together. He’s not in them. Just a set hand, usually. Day laborer. That kind of thing."
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I won’t worry about Richard messing with Tina now that he’s received the famous Porter death stare. Now on to Bette and Tina catching up on “other things” after touching base with Angie.
Another Great Chapter!!!! I so hope they find Cora very soon. B&T to be home with ther daughter. Thanks PPVS
Richad checking Tina out only to find Bette staring him down was hilarious. PPS!!
First, LMFAO@Bette’s death glare! I just knew that was coming. And second, even though it’s morbid as hell, LOL@Faye! I guess that’s one of those moments where you have to laugh at yourself because the only other option is to cry.
Tut tut, Richard. Eyes off Bette’s woman. I really hope that this lead gets them to Cora, because I fear for Faye lasting much longer. The restaurant scene… that was funny, yet not, but still… I laughed, anyway. I hope that girl waitress wasn’t too scarred by it all. Thanks for the chapter red, it was ace. And whatever you need luck for, I wish you bucket-loads of it. Post when you can. Cheers
Their love for each other and Angie is such an inspiration. They take good care of each other. I love this story. PPS.
They are close I can feel it in my bones. Or maybe that is old age or the weather turning slightly cooler. Whatever it is, there is some hope because Bette and Tina are on the case.
Good chapter. Hope they find Cora soon and B&T get home to Angie, no drama for them. Please post more, thanks! Glad to catch up with your story and love it, can’t wait to see more, thanks!
oh, me first, that never happened before. As for the story, so sweet that T&B. Md
Yes, let’s let B&T catch up on other things, shall we??? LOL PPS
Then leaving Angie was so sad for them, Angie just was with the people that loves her and didnt care. Faye and Bette are funny together Bettes death atare to Richard was priceless. thanks
Hey Redhorse, I have just caught up with your amazing adventure. I love and adore your Bette and Tina. The love they share is sooo Season 1. Yippee!!! I loved the whole redemption puzzle at the centre of this drama. This tale is unfolding perfectly as Bette and Tina continue to talk things through before committing to Faye’s requests. The mystery is enticing and I really want to get to the bottom of it and see what to whole fuss was about. Prehaps it is just a mother, realizing her faults and trying to reach out and save her child. Great to see Bette and Tina, in it together. Angelica is their main priority but their hearts are big enough to include others. Liucky for Cora though. Please continue soon. I can’t wait. Thank you so much for all the hard work and effort to bring this fabulous fan fiction to my eyes. A Fan.