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Great Unexpectations Chapter 29
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"In a minute, Mrs. B", he said, carefully navigating the stairs. "You know I can’t resist holding a beautiful woman".
"Oh please", she said. Clearly not buying his flattery, but smiling nonetheless. "You know I’m too much for you to handle."
They made their way to the tarmac and Richard gently set her on her feet. "Can’t blame a guy for tryin’ Mrs. B", he said. She playfully slapped his arm while Bette and Tina hid their smiles.
The car swiftly maneuvered the streets of Chicago, heading toward the Hotel under Richard’s careful guidance. Although the rental car was equipped with an onboard navigation system, it was not needed. Richard’s adeptness at studying the various street maps made itself impressively apparent. Before thirty minutes had passed they’d made their way from the airport to the hotel and into their respective rooms.
Richard and Faye had adjoining rooms. Bette and Tina shared a suite. The bellhop traded bags for tip and left the women to their privacy. Exhausted, Tina slowly opened a suitcase and began to unpack. Bette walked to her and took her hand. "Sweetie, come on. That can wait. Come to bed."
Too tired to protest, Tina allowed herself to be led to the king sized bed. They undressed much like zombies would. If zombies ever did anything more than walk with a stunted gate and outstretched arms as they ‘chased’ their prey. They slipped under the sheet and collapsed into their plush pillows. The soft mattress soothed the backs and legs that were screaming from the travel.
Bette curled up behind Tina and held her close. "I love you Tina", she said, kissing her shoulder.
"You too babe", Tina sniffed. Bette closed her moistening eyes. We’re just tired. We’re tired and we miss our little girl. That’s all. Trying to convince herself of that would sap the rest of her strength.
"T. She’s ok. I promise."
Tina rolled over to face Bette and kissed her soft lips. "I know. I just miss her. She doesn’t understand why we’re not there."
"Baby, right now she’s not even thinking about it. She’s sleeping. Remember?"
Tina smiled through her tears and nodded. "Can I see her again?" The first time they saw her was in the car on the way to the hotel. Kit sent a picture of Angie to Bette’s cell phone. A picture of Angie, sleeping soundly. Lips pursed. The text message that accompanied it said simply, "All fine in LA. We miss you. Find that girl and get your ass’s home."
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I won’t worry about Richard messing with Tina now that he’s received the famous Porter death stare. Now on to Bette and Tina catching up on “other things” after touching base with Angie.
Another Great Chapter!!!! I so hope they find Cora very soon. B&T to be home with ther daughter. Thanks PPVS
Richad checking Tina out only to find Bette staring him down was hilarious. PPS!!
First, LMFAO@Bette’s death glare! I just knew that was coming. And second, even though it’s morbid as hell, LOL@Faye! I guess that’s one of those moments where you have to laugh at yourself because the only other option is to cry.
Tut tut, Richard. Eyes off Bette’s woman. I really hope that this lead gets them to Cora, because I fear for Faye lasting much longer. The restaurant scene… that was funny, yet not, but still… I laughed, anyway. I hope that girl waitress wasn’t too scarred by it all. Thanks for the chapter red, it was ace. And whatever you need luck for, I wish you bucket-loads of it. Post when you can. Cheers
Their love for each other and Angie is such an inspiration. They take good care of each other. I love this story. PPS.
They are close I can feel it in my bones. Or maybe that is old age or the weather turning slightly cooler. Whatever it is, there is some hope because Bette and Tina are on the case.
Good chapter. Hope they find Cora soon and B&T get home to Angie, no drama for them. Please post more, thanks! Glad to catch up with your story and love it, can’t wait to see more, thanks!
oh, me first, that never happened before. As for the story, so sweet that T&B. Md
Yes, let’s let B&T catch up on other things, shall we??? LOL PPS
Then leaving Angie was so sad for them, Angie just was with the people that loves her and didnt care. Faye and Bette are funny together Bettes death atare to Richard was priceless. thanks
Hey Redhorse, I have just caught up with your amazing adventure. I love and adore your Bette and Tina. The love they share is sooo Season 1. Yippee!!! I loved the whole redemption puzzle at the centre of this drama. This tale is unfolding perfectly as Bette and Tina continue to talk things through before committing to Faye’s requests. The mystery is enticing and I really want to get to the bottom of it and see what to whole fuss was about. Prehaps it is just a mother, realizing her faults and trying to reach out and save her child. Great to see Bette and Tina, in it together. Angelica is their main priority but their hearts are big enough to include others. Liucky for Cora though. Please continue soon. I can’t wait. Thank you so much for all the hard work and effort to bring this fabulous fan fiction to my eyes. A Fan.