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Great Unexpectations Chapter 30
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"Hold on there sparky. We need to make sure you understand something. You can’t tell anybody what happened. Ok? Those bad guys we told you about? They might be right on our trail. If anybody comes asking about us or Chyna don’t say anything. And then call me." He held out a card with no name. Just a white card with a phone number. "I’m gonna keep this though", he said holding Jason’s cell phone. "Can’t have you tipping her off if she calls. If we don’t find her after a month I’ll send it back to you. We don’t want to cut her off from her friends. But she can’t know. Not yet. Ok?"
They watched him walk into his house, hiding his newfound small fortune in the back pocket of his Levi’s.
As they drove back to the hotel, Bette looked at Richard with suspicious eyes. "You’re a scary guy", she said. He laughed. "I try", he said.
"No. I mean it. That poor kid was scared to death."
"I know. It’s a good thing you were here. He wasn’t gonna tell me shit. I played it too strong."
She looked out her side window at the passing buildings. "What now?", she asked.
"We go to Faye. Tell her what Jason said. See if it rings any bells. Maybe try some of those numbers from his phone. Then, if we have to, we go to the next person on the list."
Bette chewed on that for the rest of the drive back. Feeling guilty for her impatience. As much as she wanted to help Faye, she also just wanted to be with Tina and Angie. Back in L.A. With family and friends. Away from all of this Cagney and Lacey bullshit.
They let the valet park the car and rushed into the hotel. They opened the suite door and found Tina and Faye enjoying pictures of Angelica on Tina’s laptop. "Hi babe", Tina said. "How did it go?" Faye looked expectantly at Richard.
He held his breath before telling Faye everything. Well, almost everything. He censored the parts about Jason’s tears, and nearly soiling the back seat of the rental car. When Richard repeated what Jason said about Cora being happy, Faye broke down into tears. Tina quickly went to her side, and rubbed her back. Soothing her. When he talked about Cora being at some anonymous bay she nearly fell out of her chair. Tina caught her and Bette shored her up on her other side. The shocked look on Faye’s face in time turned to a wide smile. "I think I know where she is. Bette. Call the pilot. Tell him we need to go to Michigan. Traverse City, Michigan."
TBC.
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Supercool to see you back in great form. I love your mix of suspense and B&T lovin’. Will there soon be a real proposal??
Glad to see your back. I am so loving this. PPS Thanks
Wow… this was some funny, intriguing, sexy and lovely gi-normus chapter!!! Angy was sooo sweet… she is like her momma B!! Mmm… Is T going to propose B someday?? Please don’t take so long to post, we miss you (and the story of course)!!! PPS!!
Bette falling asleep on Tina was adorable, but I’m glad they made up for missed opportunities the next day. It’s entirely plausible that a power-suited Bette might be mistaken for a tour guide and brilliantly rise to the occasion. What a terrific scene; I was mesmerized right along with Tina and the crowd. Can’t wait to see if Faye’s apparent breakthrough pans out. Thanks for posting!
great story loving it. are you from michigan if you are so i,m i flint
Well, well, well Red, welcome back and thanks for another great chapter. Md
Missed ya, Red! Bette falling asleep on Tina was funny, but it’s a good thing they were able to make up for it the next morning! PPS
Dang, hope that it is in the summer because the bay would be aweful cold in the winter. I love how much Bette and Tina love each other and are willing to show it. The day trip was funny with Bette garnering a fan following with her every move. I would have been front and center in that group and I would only be looking at her not the art work.
thx; come back soon.
Cagney and Lacey, huh? Which one of them got to play the “good” cop? Richard blew it… I thought Bette was supposed to be the scary one? And hell yeah for Bette in a power suit! That could never disappoint, nor can your writing. Great chapter, red. Thanks for the post.
And you were worried that no one would remember your story or read it?! LOL. Another great update – so many different moments/emotions, quite the fun ride I must say. I makes me want to go back and read this one from the beginning! Hope you’ll have time to keep on with your story, we’d all be devastated if you didn’t. PPS
Hey red, happy to see you back. Too funny with the museum scene. I can picture the crowd looking around for their guide after the intermission. Love the whispered nightly proposal also… just hope you allow Tina to vocalize it outside of Bette’s REM-cycle one time!! Anxious to see what lit Faye’s fire and what she finds in Traverse City. Love the story!
Great chapter. Love B&T’s love and they are sweet. Hope this is time to find Cora and ending the drama. Please post more, thanks!
Hello Red, Good to have you back and with this wonderful post you are most welcome. Life is on an even keel atm so I’ll PM you later with further details. As for this latest addition, it was heart-warming to see the gals ga-ga over Angelica and then reconnecting in the most primal of physical pleasures. I love the fact that Tina constantly falls for Bette and that this adoration is returned in full. They are each putting everything in to their relationship and being able to talk to each other is wonderful. This case of mistaken identity as a tour guide was LOL, Tina’s gentle amusement was sweet. Good to see Bette at her best even if she did fall asleep the previous night just as Tina was revealing her soul.I think that this run in with Faye is bringing out the best in Bette and Tina. As for their search for Cora, Richard was funny as he manhandled Jason. Intriguing stuff that I can wait to read more and see how it all plays out. Many, many thansk for returning and sharing this excellent adventure with me. Your Loyal Fan.
LOL@Bette’s little fan club. XD And mmmmm for power suits!
Ahhhhhh……Bette in a power suit. Bette out of a power suit. Love them both! Hope this leed pans out. PPS!!