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Great Unexpectations Chapter 30
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He believed her. He didn’t know why, but he did. "Somebody’s after her?", he asked.
Bette nodded, brow furled. "Please help us."
"I don’t know where she is."
"Come on kid", Richard said. "Don’t do this to yourself. The sooner you help us the sooner we leave you alone."
"I mean it. I know she went away, but she didn’t tell me where. She calls me sometimes, but I don’t have her phone number."
"When’s the last time you heard from her?"
"About two weeks ago."
"What did she say?"
"Nothing much. Just checking in, you know. Said she was fine. She said something about loving to be by the bay. That it was just like when she was a kid. But that was it."
"San Francisco?"
"I don’t know. Maybe."
"Is there anything else you can tell us?", Bette asked.
He thought for a moment and then shook his head. "She doesn’t open up a lot. She’s pretty private. But she sounded happy. Happier than she’s been in a long time."
Bette smiled. "Thank you Jason." Richard gave him one last stare-down before releasing the grip he had around his shoulder. He opened his door and returned to the driver’s seat. They drove in silence until Richard stopped in front of a convenience store. Jason looked up, puzzled. "Here, don’t forget your mom’s smokes", Richard said, handing him five one hundred dollar bills. Jason reached to take the money, but was denied at the last minute. "Let me have your cell phone", Richard bargained.
Jason reluctantly reached into the pocket of his hooded sweatshirt and found his phone. "Here", he said. Screw it, he thought. With five hundred bucks I can buy a new one.
While Jason was inside trying to get the clerk to make change for a hundred dollar bill, Bette and Richard scanned the call log of his phone. There were a few numbers that showed up with no name attached to them. Bette quickly entered the numbers into her blackberry for later use.
Ten minutes later they were dropping him off in front of his house. Jason quickly made for the door, eager to escape his temporary captors, only to find it still locked.
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Supercool to see you back in great form. I love your mix of suspense and B&T lovin’. Will there soon be a real proposal??
Glad to see your back. I am so loving this. PPS Thanks
Wow… this was some funny, intriguing, sexy and lovely gi-normus chapter!!! Angy was sooo sweet… she is like her momma B!! Mmm… Is T going to propose B someday?? Please don’t take so long to post, we miss you (and the story of course)!!! PPS!!
Bette falling asleep on Tina was adorable, but I’m glad they made up for missed opportunities the next day. It’s entirely plausible that a power-suited Bette might be mistaken for a tour guide and brilliantly rise to the occasion. What a terrific scene; I was mesmerized right along with Tina and the crowd. Can’t wait to see if Faye’s apparent breakthrough pans out. Thanks for posting!
great story loving it. are you from michigan if you are so i,m i flint
Well, well, well Red, welcome back and thanks for another great chapter. Md
Missed ya, Red! Bette falling asleep on Tina was funny, but it’s a good thing they were able to make up for it the next morning! PPS
Dang, hope that it is in the summer because the bay would be aweful cold in the winter. I love how much Bette and Tina love each other and are willing to show it. The day trip was funny with Bette garnering a fan following with her every move. I would have been front and center in that group and I would only be looking at her not the art work.
thx; come back soon.
Cagney and Lacey, huh? Which one of them got to play the “good” cop? Richard blew it… I thought Bette was supposed to be the scary one? And hell yeah for Bette in a power suit! That could never disappoint, nor can your writing. Great chapter, red. Thanks for the post.
And you were worried that no one would remember your story or read it?! LOL. Another great update – so many different moments/emotions, quite the fun ride I must say. I makes me want to go back and read this one from the beginning! Hope you’ll have time to keep on with your story, we’d all be devastated if you didn’t. PPS
Hey red, happy to see you back. Too funny with the museum scene. I can picture the crowd looking around for their guide after the intermission. Love the whispered nightly proposal also… just hope you allow Tina to vocalize it outside of Bette’s REM-cycle one time!! Anxious to see what lit Faye’s fire and what she finds in Traverse City. Love the story!
Great chapter. Love B&T’s love and they are sweet. Hope this is time to find Cora and ending the drama. Please post more, thanks!
Hello Red, Good to have you back and with this wonderful post you are most welcome. Life is on an even keel atm so I’ll PM you later with further details. As for this latest addition, it was heart-warming to see the gals ga-ga over Angelica and then reconnecting in the most primal of physical pleasures. I love the fact that Tina constantly falls for Bette and that this adoration is returned in full. They are each putting everything in to their relationship and being able to talk to each other is wonderful. This case of mistaken identity as a tour guide was LOL, Tina’s gentle amusement was sweet. Good to see Bette at her best even if she did fall asleep the previous night just as Tina was revealing her soul.I think that this run in with Faye is bringing out the best in Bette and Tina. As for their search for Cora, Richard was funny as he manhandled Jason. Intriguing stuff that I can wait to read more and see how it all plays out. Many, many thansk for returning and sharing this excellent adventure with me. Your Loyal Fan.
LOL@Bette’s little fan club. XD And mmmmm for power suits!
Ahhhhhh……Bette in a power suit. Bette out of a power suit. Love them both! Hope this leed pans out. PPS!!