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Great Unexpectations Chapter 32
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"Wait a minute", Tina interrupted. "Your name isn’t even Richard?"
He smiled coyly. "Maybe it is and maybe it isn’t."
He continued. He’d spent his time working small jobs for men in unsavory positions. Some people called them "connected". Others called them "wise guys". To the general public they were known as the mob. He earned himself a reputation as a man who knew how to keep his mouth shut and get the job done. Whatever that job may be. As a result he was never wanting for work. He convinced himself that since his victims were other mobsters there was no harm in what he was doing. He was never asked to collect from civilians. He dealt strictly with wise guys.
One night while out walking the street two men in black hats approached him. "Hi Richie", one man said briskly while the other grabbed him and pushed him toward the curb just as a black van screeched to a halt. The doors flung open and Richard was inside the van in seconds. The vans wheels squealed as it sped off, leaving the two black hatted men to continue their walk down the sidewalk as if nothing had happened.
Inside the van Richard looked at the three men who stared blankly back at him. He knew better than to demand answers of his captors. If they had wanted him dead he would be spilling blood on the sidewalk by now. They wanted something from him. He waited patiently for them to speak. They never did. Thirty five minutes later the van stopped and when Richard was pushed into the night air he found he was in the middle of the woods. The van drove off and he was collected by yet three more men with guns. They hiked a half mile deeper into the forest to a secluded cabin. Inside the cabin were two men playing cards while their handguns lay on the table next to them.
Over the next two hours it was "explained" to him that his special skills were requested by a very important client. "What special skills? I don’t do anything that any other hood wouldn’t do."
"Oh come on now, Richard. That’s not entirely true. We know all about you. Your real name. Your time in the military."
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you so did not stop there
you are so wrong for stopping there!!!
Perfect. Why can’t IC see that? PPS. Have a Merry Xmas.
Faye’s death was a tear jerker but I’m glad it’s bringing Bette and Tina closer together instead of driving them apart. Thanks for posting!
red, red, red, you are a little devil for leaving all these poor ladies in the lurch.i think that’s why htere are only three comments, the rest of em just plain passed out. i’m sure you have the rest of this moment already on your laptop so quit re-reading it and post it! lol. just kidding. merry christmas…
Stopping like that is a crime in NY.
Faye’s passing is sad, but in the aftermath, there have been one or two good things happening. One of them, a Really Good Thing. I just hope that they find Cora as well. Thanks for the post red, and I hope you have a really happy Christmas and New Year. Cheers
Loved the proposal. I just love this story. Hope you have a Merry Christmas!
I didn’t care for Faye in the begining either, but was saddened to see her go. I hope Bette and Tina find her daughter before it is too late and she is able to trust them to help her get back on solid ground and leave the life she is living now. PPS and Merry Christmas.
First, let me say to everyone, have a very Merry christmas and a Happy New Year. Second, the woman in the Dove commercial just at the end of the story is absolutely gorgeous. Now for the story, Jeeprs, did you have to stop at that point? That is so wrong. I loved that Bette did not want Tina to stop asking. Love the story. sorry to see Faye go, at first I would not have cared but, this has helped to bring our girls closer.
It had a properly sad beginning, but I like the tease of happiness at the end. I think the Faye you have in this story would appreciate it. I hope they find Cora soon.
I was happy to see a new post from you and then life got really busy with family. I finally was able to read it and jumped for joy. Loved how Tina was there for Bette when she slowly lost control. I also loved how Bette knew that every night Tina would ask her to marry her.
Yay! Thanks Red! You’re amazing!
oh god yes!!!! PPS
Great chapter redhorse. I love the way you have Bette and Tina sgaring their feelings and turning to one another for support. God I hope I.C. sees the light of day and has them talking like this in S5. Bring on that next update you tease!
Huh…&#@#ç&%@è#&$ù£%£…Bllrrgggkkklll…DUH! Hmmm.. yep! That’s pretty much what this little ending did to me!!! Well done… Very well done!!! So romantic and in line with the characters in your story… IC, read and learn!… But will Cora be found? Stay tuned…
Absolutely perfect, red! This was a nice Christmas present. Love that Bette’s been hearing the proposals all along, so sweet. I think I also gasped, “oh God yes” when Bette asked if Tina was going to say it. Hope you have a happy and safe New Year!
This is so good and loving it. Love B&T and happy Bette say yes, sad for Faye and hope they will find her daughter soon. Please post more, thanks!