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Great Unexpectations Chapter 32
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"Please. I’m here about your daughter. I think there may be people after her."
Faye lowered her gun slightly so that she could look him in the eyes. The rain dripping from his hair urged him to blink but he fought it. He looked into her eyes. He pled his case with his pupils. She lowered the gun and stepped aside. "Well, come in if you’re coming in", she said irritably. He stood in her foyer, dripping wet. Faye looked on in contempt at the puddle forming on her precious hardwood floor. "I’m sorry", he said, looking down. "Take your clothes off", she ordered. "I don’t believe for a second that you know anything about my daughter, but you’ve already woken me up so you might as well come in. But leave your wet clothes where you stand. I’ll get a towel for you. And I’ll be watching you. If you’re here to steal my silver I’ll shoot you before you even have a chance to leave the property." Richard had no reason to believe she wouldn’t.
Over the next few weeks they’d grown to know each other better and better. Each one slowly letting the other in on the painful details of their past. Faye had taken to answering her door with a gun because of the many death threats she had received since the debate. Not every time the doorbell rang, but a visitor at three in the morning definitely warranted some cold hard steel. Richard proved himself to be a genius in communications and electronics (courtesy of the military). After finding a paper trail on Cora which had shown they missed her by only two weeks, Faye embraced him fully into her home. And he’d been there ever since.
Richard finished his drink and began to pour himself another. "No no no", Tina said. "I think you’ve had enough. We all have." Richard’s drowsy eyes looked up as his head tilted back with all of the coordination of a newborn baby. "I think you’re right", he said. Bette and Tina helped him to his bedroom and watched him fall to onto the mattress. They looked at him fully clothed, lying across the bed with his head hanging slight off one side and his legs off the other. "Good enough", Bette said and closed the door.
Once back in the living room they locked up and turned off all of the lights. "We are not driving home T. We’ll just have to come back in the morning anyway. Besides, there are like five bedrooms in this place."
They found a room that suited them, meaning it was the closest and had a bed, and slowly undressed. They climbed under the cool silk sheets. Tina spooned her body behind Bette’s and whispered into her ear. "I love you, Bette. Go to sleep now. Go to sleep."
Bette pulled Tina’s arm close to her. Wrapping herself in Tina’s warmth, while a tear spilled down her cheek. Her love was so overwhelming. "Aren’t you gonna say it T?"
"Say what, Bette?" Poor thing. She’s exhausted. She’s making no sense.
"What you say every night", Bette said simply. Almost pleadingly.
Tina’s breath caught in her throat, realizing that her unheard nightly proposal had not been so unheard after all. Simply unanswered. She blushed and smiled and brought her beaming lips to the back of Bette’s neck. Her warm breath sent a chill down the mocha spine. "How long have you…"
Fighting the tingling sensation Bette answered, "Ever since the night of the barbeque. You were so drunk. But every night since then I’ve waited for you to say it. And you always do."
"I thought you were asleep. Why didn’t you say anything?"
Bette looked straight ahead into the dark, Tina behind her. "Because I didn’t want you to stop asking."
Again, Tina kissed the back of Bette’s neck. "I’ll never stop asking, Bette."
Bette turned to face Tina. The moonlight coming through the window allowed a hint of Tina’s smiling eyes. "Even if I say ‘yes’?"
"Let’s find out", Tina teased.
"Let’s", Bette agreed.
Tina leaned forward and softly took Bette’s upper lip between her own. She leaned back again and looked into Bette’s eyes. "Marry me, Bette." Bette smiled. "Yes." Tina leaned forward again and this time took the lower lip in hers. "Marry me, Bette." Again, Bette said "yes". Tina’s hand ventured down the front of Bette’s moist panties. "Marry me, Bette." Bette gasped. "Oh god yes".
TBC
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you so did not stop there
you are so wrong for stopping there!!!
Perfect. Why can’t IC see that? PPS. Have a Merry Xmas.
Faye’s death was a tear jerker but I’m glad it’s bringing Bette and Tina closer together instead of driving them apart. Thanks for posting!
red, red, red, you are a little devil for leaving all these poor ladies in the lurch.i think that’s why htere are only three comments, the rest of em just plain passed out. i’m sure you have the rest of this moment already on your laptop so quit re-reading it and post it! lol. just kidding. merry christmas…
Stopping like that is a crime in NY.
Faye’s passing is sad, but in the aftermath, there have been one or two good things happening. One of them, a Really Good Thing. I just hope that they find Cora as well. Thanks for the post red, and I hope you have a really happy Christmas and New Year. Cheers
Loved the proposal. I just love this story. Hope you have a Merry Christmas!
I didn’t care for Faye in the begining either, but was saddened to see her go. I hope Bette and Tina find her daughter before it is too late and she is able to trust them to help her get back on solid ground and leave the life she is living now. PPS and Merry Christmas.
First, let me say to everyone, have a very Merry christmas and a Happy New Year. Second, the woman in the Dove commercial just at the end of the story is absolutely gorgeous. Now for the story, Jeeprs, did you have to stop at that point? That is so wrong. I loved that Bette did not want Tina to stop asking. Love the story. sorry to see Faye go, at first I would not have cared but, this has helped to bring our girls closer.
It had a properly sad beginning, but I like the tease of happiness at the end. I think the Faye you have in this story would appreciate it. I hope they find Cora soon.
I was happy to see a new post from you and then life got really busy with family. I finally was able to read it and jumped for joy. Loved how Tina was there for Bette when she slowly lost control. I also loved how Bette knew that every night Tina would ask her to marry her.
Yay! Thanks Red! You’re amazing!
oh god yes!!!! PPS
Great chapter redhorse. I love the way you have Bette and Tina sgaring their feelings and turning to one another for support. God I hope I.C. sees the light of day and has them talking like this in S5. Bring on that next update you tease!
Huh…&#@#ç&%@è#&$ù£%£…Bllrrgggkkklll…DUH! Hmmm.. yep! That’s pretty much what this little ending did to me!!! Well done… Very well done!!! So romantic and in line with the characters in your story… IC, read and learn!… But will Cora be found? Stay tuned…
Absolutely perfect, red! This was a nice Christmas present. Love that Bette’s been hearing the proposals all along, so sweet. I think I also gasped, “oh God yes” when Bette asked if Tina was going to say it. Hope you have a happy and safe New Year!
This is so good and loving it. Love B&T and happy Bette say yes, sad for Faye and hope they will find her daughter soon. Please post more, thanks!