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Great Unexpectations Chapter 33
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Tina’s mouth, now engulfing Bette’s breast, broke into a smile at these memories, and so many more. Her tongue slowly and methodically circled the nipple. She gently teased it with her biting teeth, feeling it harden against them. Discreet moans escaped Bette’s throat, sounding out her lustful delight. "You like that, don’t you?", Tina observed with a semi-gruff authority. "Mhmm", Bette managed through her closing throat. "I can’t hear you", Tina playfully demanded. "Yes. Fuck yes, Tina! Don’t stop! Please don’t stop baby."
But Tina did stop. Her hand departed the fiery center and her warm mouth abandoned Bette’s bosom. Her tongue left a slow, happy, moist trail down her stomach and lolled playfully in her navel. Tina’s breast rubbed against Bette’s clit and both women hardened immediately at the contact. As Tina continued to feast on Bette’s abdomen her breast rubbed harder and harder against the moist center. "Jesus, T!!", Bette cried out, feeling the excitement uncontrollably rise in her. "Hold on baby", Tina whispered. Her mouth drifted further south, winding it’s way to the fine moist hairs. She kissed them. Slowly. Deliberately. She savored the taste of Bette’s warmth. Lower she went. She found Bette’s engorged lips and licked them. Softly at first until the thrust of her actions wedged them apart to expose the clit. Her furtive tongue captivated the hardened nub with a slow massage. Bette’s hips rose and fell, rose and fell, encouraging Tina further into her. Bette’s head sank further back into her pillow while she inhaled and exhaled deeply. I love having you inside of me T.
Tina continued to nuzzle Bette’s clit while bringing her hand back home. Two fingers again wound their way inside. Stroking. In and out. Tina pushed harder into Bette’s wet entry, adding another finger, filling up any hint of a void. The warm give of Bette’s inner walls soon began to tighten around a good portion of Tina’s hand. Hearing Bette’s pitchy breathing go up two octaves, Tina massaged with a singular mission against the up and down movements of Bette’s center. The throbbing muscles tightened more as Tina fought to control her own excitement Longing to look into Bette’s deep brown eyes and sensing the last moment was near, Tina’s face urgently met Bette’s. She curled her fingers in slightly and lightly rubbed the tiny patch of Bette’s anatomy that always produced the desired affect. She whispered hotly into Bette’s ear, "Marry me, Bette."
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Woah. Now what? Loved the Intimate Bette and Tina stuff.. even the breakdown was good.
Yes!! To the nolten hotness at the beginning of the chapter, to the surprise ending, (and also cos you’ve posted again), that was one of those triumphant-fist-in-the-air moments. It’s weird, but I think Faye’s death is making Bette and Tina stronger in a way. And now they’ve found Cora! I hope they can keep her safe. And I hope their efforts to keep Cora from the Black Hats and that jerk Mr Buckley doesn’t involve anything that lands Richard in jail… I’m still wondering: what was the favor Tina wanted from Kit? I’m stoked you’ve posted again, red. Ace chapter, thanks!
Erm… molten. (See? It was that hot I can’t type for my own brain mushiness.)
Yeh!! They found Cora, or Cora found them. It’s all good. Glad Tina was able to forgive Bette so quick. PPS!!
Awesome cliffhanger! I love the Tibette bonding too. Every time their relationship starts to go off track, they have the good sense to talk things out.
Great chapter! I especially loved the scene where Tina gets Bette to admit that her “sneaking out at night” wasn’t the smartest thing to do. But I can truly see Bette doing anything to avoid failure. Good thing Tina is there to support her. PPS.
Finally, they get a break. Thanks to Bette’s sneaking out and Tina getting mad at her and unable to sleep. If Tina had not decided to run and meet up with Richard they would have never come across Cora.
Thanks god finally Cora is here and now take her home and tell her everything. Glad B&T are ok. Please post more, thanks!
jp22, I can tell you what Tina wanted Kit to do, “bring Angelica to Michigan.” So happy to see this post tonight. And equally happy that Cora bumped into them, now hopefully they can get her back to California w/o her father knowing where she is and keep him from her. And maybe Richard can see that the bstard is arrested. Thaks for posting. PPS
Woohoo, they found her! Now comes the difficult part of convincing her to stay and listen. Great update. Please don’t scare us by telling us you are done with NC-17–you write them so well :)
Hey RE, I am totally GOB-SMACKED! After everythign that the gals and Richard have been through it is awesome that they have forund Cora. I reallly can’t wait to see how this all plays out. I really am hopeful of a happy ending as Tina just asked Bette to marry her. That would be the most magnificent finale after everything that they have been through. The beginning of this chapter demonstrated yet again why Bette and Tina have to end up together. Even when Bette resorted to old behaviors and tried to protect Tina, Tina calls her out and get Bette to admit her failing. This is Tina’s true power; getting to Bette’s heart and soul and making her face everythign that she is. Truly awesome. Can’t wait to read more of this fabulous Fan Fiction. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
What a chapter, red! Not to put myself in the horndog catagory, but glad you continued where the last post left off. So,so sexy and loved Tina continuing to ask her nightly question. I almost hate that they found Cora knowing that it signals the impending end to your fabulous story. Thanks for such a wonderful read!
well red, you’ve out done yourself again. the natives don’t seem as riled by this cliffhanger, maybe because it din’t end with Tina’s hands in bette’s pants! Excellent twist with the running into Cora, literally. it’s funny cause that’s what happens when i lose something – i look and look and can’t find it and then when i least expect it, voila, there it is right in front of my face. can’t wait to see what happens next but it better not be a month before i do! PPS!!!!!!
u sure worked that chapter. Great stuff.
This was a great chapter from beginning to end. Can’t wait for your next post. Thanks.
WOW!!!! Page 1 was so HOT!!!!! I am glad they found Cora. Thanks PPS
I love that Tina forced Bette’s hand and broke down that wall. I can’t wait for Tina’s surprise, I am assuming Kit is bringing Angelica to them. But most of all, WHOO-HOO, Cora has been found. A new round of drama is about to begin I am sure.