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Great Unexpectations Chapter 33
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They drove back to their house for a light lunch. On the way they passed the other rental house and saw that Richard was still parked in the driveway. Tina exhaled a sigh of relief. "You know babe. We should’ve taken his keys."
"He’s a big boy, T. He knows not to drink and drive. Besides…", Bette opened up the console behind the gear shift and brought a key chain with a solitary key. "I’m way ahead of you", she smiled.
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Richard snored loudly on the sofa, drowning out the sound of traffic from the street outside. He was dreaming of his final revenge. Or rather, the exacting of a final revenge on someone else’s behalf. His one last promise to Faye. The details were all worked out. He just needed to make sure Cora was safe first. I promise Faye. I promise. He woke with a snap. He feared that promise would be the death of him. He knew that if it took his life to keep it, it would be kept.
He felt that at some point Bette and Tina would throw up their hands and cry uncle. That they would return to their East Hollywood life. Return to their friends and family with a clean conscience that they’d done all they could. And that he alone would be left to keep all of the promises to Faye. He didn’t even begrudge them that. He just wished they’d go already and leave him to it. No more of this masquerade of "teamwork". He worked better alone anyway. He was already getting used to the idea.
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Sitting outside, on their private beach basking in the sun, Bette and Tina enjoyed a contemplative moment. A moment of silence. Their half-eaten sandwiches resting on top of the beach furniture at their side. They missed their friends. They missed their jobs. More importantly they missed their daughter. "We can do this, Bette. We’ll be ok."
The silence that hung in the air indicated to Tina that Bette had her doubts. Sure, they’d made a good show to Richard. Full of confidence and bravado. But in the moments they shared with each other alone, neither woman was sure how much longer this search could go on. How much longer it should go on. They quietly tried to calculate the pros and cons of even finding Cora at this point. Con: if they found her they’d have to tell her that Faye was dead. Pro: if they could never find her then maybe her father would never be able to either. Con: if they don’t find her they can’t help her get out of that awful porn business. Con: what if they do find her but she doesn’t want out of the porn business. Before long the cons outweighed the pros and the calculating came to a quick halt. It was much too early to admit defeat or give in to doubt.
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Woah. Now what? Loved the Intimate Bette and Tina stuff.. even the breakdown was good.
Yes!! To the nolten hotness at the beginning of the chapter, to the surprise ending, (and also cos you’ve posted again), that was one of those triumphant-fist-in-the-air moments. It’s weird, but I think Faye’s death is making Bette and Tina stronger in a way. And now they’ve found Cora! I hope they can keep her safe. And I hope their efforts to keep Cora from the Black Hats and that jerk Mr Buckley doesn’t involve anything that lands Richard in jail… I’m still wondering: what was the favor Tina wanted from Kit? I’m stoked you’ve posted again, red. Ace chapter, thanks!
Erm… molten. (See? It was that hot I can’t type for my own brain mushiness.)
Yeh!! They found Cora, or Cora found them. It’s all good. Glad Tina was able to forgive Bette so quick. PPS!!
Awesome cliffhanger! I love the Tibette bonding too. Every time their relationship starts to go off track, they have the good sense to talk things out.
Great chapter! I especially loved the scene where Tina gets Bette to admit that her “sneaking out at night” wasn’t the smartest thing to do. But I can truly see Bette doing anything to avoid failure. Good thing Tina is there to support her. PPS.
Finally, they get a break. Thanks to Bette’s sneaking out and Tina getting mad at her and unable to sleep. If Tina had not decided to run and meet up with Richard they would have never come across Cora.
Thanks god finally Cora is here and now take her home and tell her everything. Glad B&T are ok. Please post more, thanks!
jp22, I can tell you what Tina wanted Kit to do, “bring Angelica to Michigan.” So happy to see this post tonight. And equally happy that Cora bumped into them, now hopefully they can get her back to California w/o her father knowing where she is and keep him from her. And maybe Richard can see that the bstard is arrested. Thaks for posting. PPS
Woohoo, they found her! Now comes the difficult part of convincing her to stay and listen. Great update. Please don’t scare us by telling us you are done with NC-17–you write them so well :)
Hey RE, I am totally GOB-SMACKED! After everythign that the gals and Richard have been through it is awesome that they have forund Cora. I reallly can’t wait to see how this all plays out. I really am hopeful of a happy ending as Tina just asked Bette to marry her. That would be the most magnificent finale after everything that they have been through. The beginning of this chapter demonstrated yet again why Bette and Tina have to end up together. Even when Bette resorted to old behaviors and tried to protect Tina, Tina calls her out and get Bette to admit her failing. This is Tina’s true power; getting to Bette’s heart and soul and making her face everythign that she is. Truly awesome. Can’t wait to read more of this fabulous Fan Fiction. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.
What a chapter, red! Not to put myself in the horndog catagory, but glad you continued where the last post left off. So,so sexy and loved Tina continuing to ask her nightly question. I almost hate that they found Cora knowing that it signals the impending end to your fabulous story. Thanks for such a wonderful read!
well red, you’ve out done yourself again. the natives don’t seem as riled by this cliffhanger, maybe because it din’t end with Tina’s hands in bette’s pants! Excellent twist with the running into Cora, literally. it’s funny cause that’s what happens when i lose something – i look and look and can’t find it and then when i least expect it, voila, there it is right in front of my face. can’t wait to see what happens next but it better not be a month before i do! PPS!!!!!!
u sure worked that chapter. Great stuff.
This was a great chapter from beginning to end. Can’t wait for your next post. Thanks.
WOW!!!! Page 1 was so HOT!!!!! I am glad they found Cora. Thanks PPS
I love that Tina forced Bette’s hand and broke down that wall. I can’t wait for Tina’s surprise, I am assuming Kit is bringing Angelica to them. But most of all, WHOO-HOO, Cora has been found. A new round of drama is about to begin I am sure.