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Great Unexpectations Chapter 5
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Bette smiled slightly and loosened the grip on her eyelids. "Why would that sound awful?"
"Because. I didn’t love him, but I stayed with him anyway."
"But you did leave him eventually, right?"
"Well, actually, he’s expecting me for dinner tonight." Tina tried to joke.
Tina felt Bette’s entire body tighten at her words. "That is so not funny, Tina."
Tina, instantly regretted her attempt at humor. "Shit, I’m sorry, Bette. I don’t know why I did that. That was stupid. I’m so sorry."
Bette said nothing. Still reeling from Tina’s words. Does she think this is a fucking joke? How could she say that to me?
Bette’s continued silence ate at Tina. "Bette, talk to me please. Say something", Tina began to panic and at once commenced to berating herself. Tina, you stupid, fucking cunt. How could you do that? She began to feel clammy and lightheaded as the lump in the pit of her stomach grew. As Bette’s silence grew even larger it wasn’t long before that lump was the least of Tina’s worries. "Bette, please get up", she said hastily.
"Tina, I-"
"I’m sorry Bette, you have to move. Now!!" Tina’s legs began to buck as she struggled to free herself from Bette. When she was loose, she stood and ran down the hall with her hand over her mouth. Bette stood up quickly forgetting her own hurt for the moment, concerned only with Tina. "Tina, are you okay?" she asked hesitantly following her. Tina ran into the bathroom and quickly slammed the door behind her. Bette stood outside listening in horror as Tina retched over and over again. A realization, her worst fear. Oh god no. Not that. Anything but that.
Finally, thankfully, Tina had nothing left to give. She leaned her head against the cool side of the commode as she blindly reached for the handle. She slowly stood up, trying to gain her balance. She stood at the lav and turned on the cold water. She splashed her face and cupped her hand to gather water for her mouth. Hearing this activity, Bette entered. "T, are you ok?"
After rinsing her mouth out several times, Tina weakly turned to look at Bette. Bette inhaled sharply and acted quickly. "Tina, you’re white as a sheet. Come on. You’re lying down." Not taking ‘no’ for an answer she gently took her hand and led her to the bed.
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First! Score :) But I’ve yet to read it, I’m sorry.. times are different since I’m in England :( I’m off to my room to pen a new fic. Can’t wait to read this :D Angel D xx
There is a God in heaven and if he will, please let our girls be okay. Love this story and the fact that they are getting back together as one, as it should be. They are so perfect for each other. Thanks for showing the love and the imperfections of we humans. In the end, it is indeed all about the love we share with that special someone. You show the imperfections but you also show the love they have, which is so important. Thanks for the story. PPS
I am glad you have them teing to talk. This is great. Tina writting on Bette with the sharpie that was just Great!!!
I love your writing..love the intimacy, the tenderness. Thank you.
That wet blanket IC really has cheated us out of good times, hasn’t she? That adorable family breakfast scene, and Tina’s sexy and funny handiwork with the Sharpie, are sublime examples of revisionist history (and not in the least corny). Please keep them coming!
Don’t worry about the stars you will get, if you have fun writing, we’ll have fun reading. Your style is fluid, good storyline and nice in depth description of their feelings and emotions, you got it! The Sharpie moment was priceless and the lightness of their banter reminds me of the good moments of season 1, what their life together could have been. Maybe after seeing Tina sick over a lame joke, Bette will realize that Tina is serious about this relationship. Great story, wish it would be the real season 5.
Hey Red another excellent post. You have to remove the ratings from your story because they are bogus. I don’t know how they are calculated, but they don’t make sense, so just ignore that and pay attention to the comments. You are extremely talented…your writing and your story rates off the chart. I can’t wait until your next post.
ok,i’ll put the binoculars away for now but can’t promise they will stay put. You write this couple with such tenderness,love and humor. Now that they have confronted their passion and stayed up all night praying about how they could overcome,I think they are willing to try and communicate. communication in all forms is GOOD! thnx for the update.
I loved this phrase “until the morning sun slowly trespassed into the room.” Great description. PPS.
I can’t explain the 4 stars… your writing is pure pleasure to read! I would love to see this played out in season 5. Ilene should take a tip from you! Perfect balance between the fun and the serious. The branding was too funny!!
Hey both of us, u for writing n me for reading lol. Excellent chapter just loved it. PPS
You had me all angsty for a minute there, thinking Tina was preggers. Thank goodness they dodged that bullet. Loved the use of the Sharpie. Excellent red, post soon.
I have no clue why I am always behind. Any rating below a 5 is just wrong. Somebody is messing with you. I am happy to read that they are talking even if it is making them (Tina) sick. That is the only true way to move forward.
Great update Red. I like how you re-focused them and got the conversation rolling. But I really love the branding – very funny! I’m a little behind in the game (commenting waaayyy after you posted) so I hope you see this!! Now on to read more.
I’m with rufus. How is it IC cannot or will not give us this. So glad they’re talking, they may hit some bumps on the way but its definitly a road worth traveling. Nice to see Bette letting Tina know it would take more than that to loose her.
I loved this post. You actually have me beieving IC could fix the mess she made of them—BUT she’d have to let them actually communicate, so I’m not holding my breath :). I’ll just have to soothe my TiBette heart by reading your beautiful words.
whoa scarey; that both tina and bette r scared of talking…sexy, funny and heavy tina heaving…tg she’s not pregnant to whats his name, that would be TOO YUK…
I’m craving an omelette now. Thanks. lol That was SO BAD of you to scare us with Tina possibly being pregnant! xD Loved the Sharpie joke. :)
So , where do I sent my $19.99? Do you take paypal? Honestly, this is a wonderful story.. love the banter, the sharpie, the comforting heart beating, and the quickly changing emotions to the point of making Tina physically ill. Would love to read more, I sure none of us would mind if you went ahead and posted Chap 6, and 7? even if we have to wait through short bloks later….Yes, hate the concept of delayed gratification, especially when it comes to Tibette.PPS!
Red, hope you don’t mind. I just want to acknowlege all the wonderful talent that is on this site. There is so much time, energy, passion and talent that you writers put into these stories. We all get to enjoy them for nothing other than the occasional applause or comment. Thank you for allowing us to share…
It’s good seeing them finally talk..but let them not do it properly and lovingly PPS…love the chapters
they have a lot to talk about but as long as they together, they can work it out
Oh god, that was beautiful :) I adore your writing, it’s so intimate and touching. I truly hope they work things out. :)
X-mas came early this year! GREAT!
Good chapter and good that they talk!