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Great Unexpectations Chapter 6
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Previously…
Bette extricated herself from Tina’s clutches, careful not to wake the beautiful blonde. As she stood over the bed watching Tina sleep she whispered "God T. I love you so much." Bette leaned down to kiss her gently on the forehead and brush the hair out of her eyes. Tina stirred slightly but remained fast asleep.
Chapter 6.
Tina woke as the early afternoon sun warmed her face. As the events of the day slowly came back to her she was filled with a quiet horror, reliving her poor choice of words. Still berating herself she went into the bathroom to take her shower. Upon entering she looked up and smiled. On the mirror was a message written in red lipstick. "Tina, we love you. Come join us by the pool. B&A."
She quickly showered and brushed her teeth, hastily donning a pair of Bette’s shorts and a T-shirt in her eagerness to meet her girls. She slid the patio door open and stepped out into the warm California sun. Bette and Angelica were in the pool, splashing softly.Bette’s back was to Tina as she was holding onto the round plastic raft that the toddler was sitting in. Upon seeing her Mama T, she began giggling and clapping. "Mama, mama". Bette turned around to see Tina beam at her daughter. "Hi, T", Bette smiled.
"Hey babe. How’re my girls?"
"We’re great, aren’t we Boo? How about you? How are you feeling?"
"Better. Still can’t believe what I-"
"Tina, don’t. It’s okay."
Tina stepped into the pool, not caring that she wasn’t wearing a bathing suit. Each slow step brought the water level higher and higher up her body, slowly engulfing her shorts. Bette’s smile turned into a hungry lust as the bottom of Tina’s shirt also became victim of the rising water. By the time she reached her, Tina could see the toll this was taking on Bette as her breasts heaved. She didn’t break her stride as she walked right up to Bette, slowly draped her arms around Bette’s neck and pulled her in for a slow, deep kiss. Bette kept one hand on Angie’s raft and wrapped the other around Tina’s waist, pulling their bodies closer.
"How did I get so lucky?" Tina asked, after breaking the kiss.
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I think I am firs t, but, alas I am really tring to get some work done so I will have to come back to this as a special treat when I get a few things finished… I hate to admit this but I am really new to this site…would someone be kind enough to explain the ratings.the how to part…thanks
i hope tina will bring a lot of her things…it might be too soon but they need to deal with that together, and angie seems happier too :)
Uh oh da gossip monger’s there! LOL Loving ur story Red !!! :) Amazingly Fantastically Beautifully Adorably lovely just so niceee ahh..Thanks for writing it :) Keep going u r doing a gr8 job and i hope to see the award on ur page the next time !!! :Dokay back to work…
You have excellent writing ability. Your English teacher was correct, you do have a wy with words even if it is to write lesbian soft porn. *smirk* It’s a tough job (seriously) to write NC-17s well. Please continue w/the s/l b/c it is very interesting. PPS.
I am so happy to read this chapter Ms. Red. Wonderful . PPS
Tina needs to go get the U-HAUL and drag Alice’s nosy ass to help her move back into Porter-Kennard kingdom. Nuf said! LUV’d THIS POST!
You deserve more than just a nomination! You write beautifully.
They are lucky Alice didn’t show up before now! Talk about hell on wheels! LOL! I wonder if Alice was waiting for Tina to leave or if it just seemed that way with her showing up just afterwards. What a great post Red! Your writing is absolutely brilliant. It was beautiful the way you had Bette telling Tina how much her C-Section scar means to her. Their talk of the past was hard but they need to do that…and it’s good they are doing it in spurts. Thanks for writing Red and please post soon!
Loving your story – just got back into town and on line for the first time in weeks and your story was a wonderful thing to find. You really capture the loving tone that makes me care about these two characters – thanks so much for your humor and sweetness in your storytelling. You definitely deserve to be nominated.
What a great ending!! Loving this story, PPS
That was awesome!
You made my morning. I was unable to continue with my own sleep so I read this story. Now I know that today will be a good day.
Busted!!! was Al next door, I forget…pps
Adoring this story :) Beautiful expressiv writing. :) I’m looking forward to the next addition.
Firstly, you deserve those noms, red–your writing is excellent. Secondly, the “lesbian soft porn” remark is pretty funny, but I think this chapter’s a good bit better than that phrase suggests. Thirdly, the pacing of the story is spot-on. Keep it up. Fourthly, I knew the peace couldn’t last for long, and now that Ms. “Rude Awakening” Pieszecki is on the scene, well… And lastly, I’ll have to repeat myself and say that this chap was awesome. So, post soon, red. Thanks
I second all five of jp22’s points. That four-star rating must have been a technical glitch because there is simply no logical explanation for it. You are one of the best writers on this site and I would have been shocked if you hadn’t been nominated. I especially admire how you ground your writing in the concrete, Angie’s inner “thoughts” (pears vs. squash) being a prime example: exquisite. As for the lesbian soft porn, let’s just say page 3 of this instalment is assuming pride of place in my archives file.
Great chapter!! Love the B&T lovin. PPS!!
LOL@chickenshit! One of my favorite terms. I’ll have to remember “bitch on wheels” as well. Definitely a hot chapter!