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Hate-4
Shane ran over to her seeing that she was going to start crying.
Shane: I’m sorry Dana I should have told you that first night. I just wasn’t sure it was her until I saw her tonight.
Dana: Tonight, wait she’s in there?
Dana was walking back towards the front door of the Planet.
Shane: Dana you don’t want to go in there. You don’t want to see her.
Dana pushed Shane away.
Dana: No Shane I have to do this. Where is she?
Shane: Last time I saw her I was kicking the ***** out of her in the bathroom
Walked with her head held high straight to the bathroom. Leaving Shane and Alice outside. There were two other girls in there with Jo.
Dana: Get out!
Jo: Its okay guys you can go. I know her.
The two girls left.
Jo: I never thought that I would see you again but now that I have why don’t we start where we left off last time.
Jo said pushing her against the door and locking it. Dana punched her.
Jo: You got a nice right hook there for a girly girl.
Dana: There is no way that you are going to do that to me again.
Jo: Oh yeah?
Jo then pushed Dana against the stall.
Jo: Just think about 5 min ago I was having the ***** kicked out of me by your girlfriend and now I’m going to do the same to you.
Shane was waiting outside thinking that Dana should have a few minutes to herself. She also thought that she wasn’t going to be much longer then that. Alice had gone home a couple minutes before that. Shane went to the bathroom but when she couldn’t open it she pounded on the door.
Shane: Dana?! you in there?
Shane heard some groaning on the other side of the door.
Shane ran to the front desk.
Shane: Something is happening to my friend in there and the door is locked.
They both ran back over to the door.
Worker: Hey open up the door.
From inside
Jo: Looks like your girlfriend realized you needed some help. *punch* It may be to late once she gets inside though. *punch*
Dana drops to the floor.
Jo: I see what I did last time maybe I can give you a couple scars so that you’ll never be able to forget me.
Jo pulled out a switch blade.
Dana: No…Shane she has a knife.
outside
worker: There is a door in the back.
Shane: I’m going in. Call the cops.
The worker ran to the phone. Shane ran around the back as fast as she could knowing that Dana needed her now more then ever. Her life was on the line. By the time Shane got in there Dana was bruised and beaten and Jo had already cut her a few times. Shane was pissed. She slammed her again the door unlocked it and pushed her into the lounge of the Planet.
Shane: MAke sre she doesn’t move and don’t let me near her other wise I will kill her.
Shane ran back into the bathroom and gathered up Dana in her arms. She went back out to her truck and placed Dana in the cab. Shane got in the drivers seat and drove away.
Shane: Dana I am going to tak care of you but not here. We are going to pick up Alice cause she is the only other on on our side and then we are going some where else.
Dana moaned and rolled over.
When they arrived at Alice’s house Shane told Dana she would be right back.
Alice heard pounding on the door and ran to it right away knowing that something was wrong. She was still in her clothes from the last time Shane saw her. She opened the door and saw Shane.
Alice: Shane?
Shane: Come on Alice you’re coming with us.
Alice: Where are we going?
Shane: We’re leaving I need to get Dana out of West Hollywood. She got in a really bad fight with Jo and she is bruised and beaten and Jo cut her a couple times with a switch blade. I need to get her away from here. I don’t think being around people that don’t get her is helping.
Alice was walking with Shane as she was explaining it. The she saw Dana in the passenger seat in the truck. She stopped dead in her tracks.
Alice: OMG.
Shane: Come on Alice I need to get going, that is if you’re coming.
Alice: Of course I am.
Alice went to the truck and Shane was on the other side asking Dana to move over towards the middle so that Alice could get in on the other side. She did and as they were driving away Dana took comfort in the fact that Alice cared about her just as much as Shane did. Dana leaned against Alice. Alice looked at Shane wondering what to do.
Shane: *Mouthing to her* Just comfort her, please. She needs to know we can care about her and not hurt her.
Alice did what she was told not caring that Dana’s blood was soaking her shirt. Shane got on the interstate and kept going north as the sun was rising.
Whacha think guys? I think I am going to keep Bette and Tina out of it for a while. I don’t really like them that much.
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Everyone can’t alway like the same people. Just keep on writing your own way,you are doing a good job at it,.
I totally agree with AmandaMG. You’re doing great!
Keep going!
sorry…..i like bette and tina too much…..but this is interesting though..
I agree with BluJewel! Great job it’s another interesting read. Please continue.
I liked your story, but you didn’t have to diss Bette & Tina. Leaving them out is one thing, but to display your dislike doesn’t sit well.
Don’t let your current rating fool you. You’re doing a great job on this story. I happen to like Bette & Tina, but there needs to be variety in the stories. You’re doing great so far.
I’m still with you on this one. I like the twists and the energy of this story. Shane has never really been portrayed as soft hearted so this is a great look for her. Keep on going.
Don’t let your current rating fool you. You’re doing a great job on this story. I happen to like Bette & Tina, but there needs to be variety in the stories. You’re doing great so far.
I just read all four parts. You’re doing a great job. I’m glad there is a fic without Bette and Tina. Can’t wait to see where Shane takes them.
I agree with Rayne!
Ignore the rating and read the comments…says it all…go with it no matter what…kudos to you…great story…Shane does kick ass!!!