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Hate is Such a Harsh Word [Chapter 5]
The three girls took care of the
major detailing that night and would continue with the minor ones the next
day.
with the mishaps along the way. She
couldn’t wait for Tina to start preparing some of her special hor deurves
platters because she truly was gifted in the kitchen. Shane took care of all the wet bar and liquor
items, aka the life juice of the party. As
the mirror she casually glanced at her reflection. She’s stoked about this party and everything
is going as planned so far, but the only problem now was her appearance. She wants so bad to jump start a relationship
again but now with this silly nose cast, she wasn’t so sure if she can qualify
as good-looking again.
“That’s not fair Bette got cool
chick-magnet stitches on her eyebrow and I end up with bozo-the-clown
nose? Life is just too cruel sometimes
as if Porter needed more help in getting the babes”
“Al, be quiet and get some rest I bet I look
worse” Tina said without opening her eyes.
“Well missy, you aren’t looking to
hook up at this party are you? So it
doesn’t even matter,”
said back.
“Heh, whatever Alice” she said as
she drifted back to sleep.
The party was in full swing by
nightfall and
was running around like a chicken with her head cut-off trying to say hi to all
the guests and the guest’s guests and their acquaintances. Shane arrived not long after, enough time to
head to the kitchen and fish out a bottle of beer.
“Man, this party is really
happening” Shane declared.
“Yes it is, Alice got all the micromanagement
planning stuff out of the way early so now she can enjoy being cool hostess,”
Tina replied as she put more finger food on the party platter.
“So Tina, how do you feel?”
“About the party? Or my eye?” Tina asked, genuinely lost. “My engorged eye feels like its on steroids
and I can only make out simple shapes with the other eye”
“Ouch, it doesn’t look that bad”
Shane reassured with little conviction, then took a step closer to examine it.
“Really? Well, it doesn’t matter how I look right now
though, I mean look at
she is having a grand time and I bet she doesn’t even remember that there is a
big obstacle clinging to her face.”
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(26 votes, average: 3.58 out of 5)
Fucking hilarious! I think I was right last time, they are the “3 Stooges”. Do you think Roxy’s reaction to Bette’s entrance will improve Bette and Tina’s relationship? Can’t wait to see what Bette has up her sleeve now that Tina won the bet. (Bette, bet-too many bets)
oooOOOooo I have a feeling this little game is going to continue. . .and hopefully it will end with the two of them FINALLY getting over their egos and noticing eachother. PLEASE POST AGAIN SOON!
haha omg J ur humor..man i was rolling!! waitin for ur next!!
Great chapter. Looking forward to more.
you are too funny! looking forward to the next chapter.
Come on what are you waiting for – we want another post and NOW :o)) This is so hilarious and I really hope that you will continue with the little but dangerous B&T game wink wink….please
This is so fucking funny, poor Alice. Ok now let see what’s next, thanks!
Poor Alice she always gets the brunt of things. Now as far as B&T go I do believe the bantering has begun. Let the games begin.
Great chapter can’t wait to see what you have in store for our girls!!!
The three stooges is right they are a mess. Poor Alice her face is going to be a mess if this keeps up thanks
How the hell did Gloria keep from laughing in Tina’s face what with that bigass black eye? And slapping the chick with the fucked up nose? ROFL *still praying for hot office sex* ;)
What’s next? Post soon I love the humor in your story it keeps it light and fun. Now what’s next?
poor alice, she get’s on a way everytime…i too hope that bette will come up with payback and they’ll have more fun
The only thing is bad about your fiction is expectation of the next chapter, LOL.Poor Alice,but that’s soooo funny, post soon.
So sick of drama, you’re my hero ! :)
Great chapter! Very funny, can’t wait for more!
SO HILARIOUS! Every time Bette & Tina get together Alice ends up getting hurt. LOL. Poor Alice. Bette lost the dare, so looking forward to how this game is going to progress. I’m sure Tina has something up her sleeve. Please continue.
I’m laughing so hard. This is what we really need when faced with Season 3. Looking forward to more competition between Bette and Tina but that potent energy could be put to better use.