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Hate is Such a Harsh Word [Chapter 5]
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“Hey guys! Don’t camp out in the
kitchen, come out here and mingle with all the fine laaaaadies in the house
tonight,” said
while rounding the corner, keeping her head in the kitchen and her body where
the music is at.
“Soon enough little one, I need to
put the finishing touches on one more platter”
“Shane, I noticed the trail of
glances and glares all residing towards you the moment you walked in” said
“I didn’t know you were paying
attention, you seemed so busy” Shane said after a gulp of beer.
“You know how I do, beside I am waiting for you to personally introduce me to
the rest of them, ya know, put up some good words for ole Al”
“Al, if they want you they want
you, if they’re not interested, then there is not much I can do” Shane
replied.
“Gosh, fine be stingy, I’ll have
my ways,”
returned to the party grooving to the beat as she danced away.
Tina finally finishes with the
preparation work in the kitchen and starts to head out to join the party. She stands next to the wall and bobs her head
up and down to the beat of the music.
She makes a general survey across the room and thinks, ‘honestly, there
really are some pretty women in here tonight, I wonder why I never took notice
of this before’ Majority were dancing
in the center of the room, a few couple were mingling in the corners, and two
were getting really touchy-feely towards the end of the hallway. As she turns her head back around she notices
a nice looking brunette eyeing her up and down, then slyly approaches her.
“Hi there, you look lonely, can I
get you something to drink?, oh by the way my name is Roxy”
Tina was about to give the brunette
her name when the door flung open with such force only experienced in cabins up
north during snowstorms almost everyone stopped and turned around to get a
better look at who was at the front entrance.
Roxy, the girl next to Tina, exclaimed
“Oh finally! Bette Porter is here to
rock the house!” and without second notice, she rushed away forgetting all
about the lonely and drink-less blonde next to her.
If anyone knew how to make a grand
entrance, it was Bette Porter. All eyes
would miraculously turn towards her, making her the focal point of the
room. As she sauntered through the door
and slow-motioned into the room, Tina could have sworn that people were
literally drooling. Bette was dress in
black, a sheer black sleeveless with tailored black slacks, and a pair of
high-end shiny black heels. The silver
earrings, necklace, and bracelets countered the dark color and gave her a
glimmering edge.
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Fucking hilarious! I think I was right last time, they are the “3 Stooges”. Do you think Roxy’s reaction to Bette’s entrance will improve Bette and Tina’s relationship? Can’t wait to see what Bette has up her sleeve now that Tina won the bet. (Bette, bet-too many bets)
oooOOOooo I have a feeling this little game is going to continue. . .and hopefully it will end with the two of them FINALLY getting over their egos and noticing eachother. PLEASE POST AGAIN SOON!
haha omg J ur humor..man i was rolling!! waitin for ur next!!
Great chapter. Looking forward to more.
you are too funny! looking forward to the next chapter.
Come on what are you waiting for – we want another post and NOW :o)) This is so hilarious and I really hope that you will continue with the little but dangerous B&T game wink wink….please
This is so fucking funny, poor Alice. Ok now let see what’s next, thanks!
Poor Alice she always gets the brunt of things. Now as far as B&T go I do believe the bantering has begun. Let the games begin.
Great chapter can’t wait to see what you have in store for our girls!!!
The three stooges is right they are a mess. Poor Alice her face is going to be a mess if this keeps up thanks
How the hell did Gloria keep from laughing in Tina’s face what with that bigass black eye? And slapping the chick with the fucked up nose? ROFL *still praying for hot office sex* ;)
What’s next? Post soon I love the humor in your story it keeps it light and fun. Now what’s next?
poor alice, she get’s on a way everytime…i too hope that bette will come up with payback and they’ll have more fun
The only thing is bad about your fiction is expectation of the next chapter, LOL.Poor Alice,but that’s soooo funny, post soon.
So sick of drama, you’re my hero ! :)
Great chapter! Very funny, can’t wait for more!
SO HILARIOUS! Every time Bette & Tina get together Alice ends up getting hurt. LOL. Poor Alice. Bette lost the dare, so looking forward to how this game is going to progress. I’m sure Tina has something up her sleeve. Please continue.
I’m laughing so hard. This is what we really need when faced with Season 3. Looking forward to more competition between Bette and Tina but that potent energy could be put to better use.