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Hate is Such aHarsh Word [Chapter 1]
CHAPTER ONE
“Why did you have to do it?” Tina said as she peered over her monitor.
“Do what?”
“You know damn well what,” Tina retorted.
“Oh come on Tina, ’tis the season to be jolly!”
“Nope, not when it pertains to her, no” Tina replied.
“Look, you know that if I don’t invite her, my party will not survive! I will go down into the lezzies book of shame not to mention that I want to be happy before the year is over alright?”
“My gosh you and your desperate-ness is just killing me” Tina said rolling her eyes.
“If she comes to my party, half the lez population will be there, now from that amount surely someone will find me easy on the eyes”
“They wouldn’t want you Al; they would have only came for her”
“Okay, now you are hurting my feelings here, besides, worst comes to worse, I at least get some eye candy for the night”
“Sigh just remember I’m not making nice this year” Tina said giving up.
“Oh you will, because you are my bestest best friend and you know my future depends on this, my futures as in good luck for the coming year”
“Yeah, whatever, just remember you owe me big time Al”
“Fine, just down two shots of patron and the rest will be smooth sailing from there,”
It was several days before
“Miss Bette Porter, I have something for you,”
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(27 votes, average: 3.44 out of 5)
Well, J. Good to start with a little hostility. Go for it.
I love it, I love it. You must finish it! lol
Loving it..please continue
hate and love are really just a step from each other…reminds me of Much ado about nothing…please continue
OMG I was just thinking either today or yesterday that there is something alluring about hatred because it seems like the hottest sex starts with hostile verbal foreplay. No, I’m not saying that’s what I’m looking for in a partner personally. LOL But hey it’s something that can’t be denied. ;)
Great start looking forward to where you will take it!!!
Great! I can’t wait to see what brings them together. I hope you continue.
they are so going to do it.
thin line between love, hate
I can feel the sexual tension already!!
Ha, what a different begining, but I like it. They’re already getting on each others nerves. Keep going, can’t wait for the party, maybe some alchol will help ease the tension.
This is gonna be fun seeing which hard head gives in first and admits to an attraction. Maybe the booze at the party will help them. Great start, please continue this. Thanks for the post.
That was good, Not liking each other is even better. Post soon thanks
I find this very funny and interesting…you’ve to continue. It’s so promising….keep’em coming.
This is good start and like it. They are funny and can’t wait to see what’s next, thanks!
haha its kinda like bette n al but instead tina im intrigued!!