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Hate is Such aHarsh Word [Chapter 1]
“What is this?” Bette asked.
Shane strolls around the corner and says, “It’s an invitation”
“Hmmm. No. not for that party she has been annoyingly promoting since October?” Bette said as a mental light bulb went off.
“That the one” Shane agreed with a quick nod.
“Sigh if only I didn’t owe her a favor…” Bette lamented.
Bette Porter knew that going to this party meant wasting a valuable Saturday night. Moreover, what is worse than that?, being in close proximity to
As Bette was making her way around the corner deep in thought of where to get takeout from tonight, Tina was walking the opposite corner mentally reciting the ingredients required for tonight’s dinner.
SMACK
“Ouch”
“Shit”
Both rubbing her head trying to sooth the forming bump.
“Tina, please watch where you are going next time, you don’t want to get more people hurt than you have to” Bette said with a smirk.
“Ms. Porter, I believe you are not so innocent, that’s one advice you should give yourself,” Tina countered.
“Ah Ms. Kennard, what spicy curry for lunch can do to a young lady such as you is bewitching,” Bette replied.
“If you will excuse me, I have somewhere to be” Tina said as she hurried off towards the elevators trying to avoid another painful second in conversing with Bette.
“Yes don’t we all” Bette muttered.
Tina took off first, while Bette stayed one pace behind. Both got on the elevator at the same time, retreated to their respectful side, and stared straight ahead while an uncomfortable silence blankets them. As the elevator reached its final destination, both women got off and turned in opposite directions.
“Drive safely, and stay on the right side of the street,” Bette said without so much as a head turn.
“You too and don’t forget to stop at all the red lights along the way,” Tina yelled back.
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(27 votes, average: 3.44 out of 5)
Well, J. Good to start with a little hostility. Go for it.
I love it, I love it. You must finish it! lol
Loving it..please continue
hate and love are really just a step from each other…reminds me of Much ado about nothing…please continue
OMG I was just thinking either today or yesterday that there is something alluring about hatred because it seems like the hottest sex starts with hostile verbal foreplay. No, I’m not saying that’s what I’m looking for in a partner personally. LOL But hey it’s something that can’t be denied. ;)
Great start looking forward to where you will take it!!!
Great! I can’t wait to see what brings them together. I hope you continue.
they are so going to do it.
thin line between love, hate
I can feel the sexual tension already!!
Ha, what a different begining, but I like it. They’re already getting on each others nerves. Keep going, can’t wait for the party, maybe some alchol will help ease the tension.
This is gonna be fun seeing which hard head gives in first and admits to an attraction. Maybe the booze at the party will help them. Great start, please continue this. Thanks for the post.
That was good, Not liking each other is even better. Post soon thanks
I find this very funny and interesting…you’ve to continue. It’s so promising….keep’em coming.
This is good start and like it. They are funny and can’t wait to see what’s next, thanks!
haha its kinda like bette n al but instead tina im intrigued!!