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Healing a sequel to The Plot
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“You OK?” Kit inquired softly but to Bette it was Kit challenging her. Trying to regain her balance on her own, Bette tried slapping Kit away.
“Settle down Bette. I’ve got you. You’re in no condition to do much of anything right now. Let me help you.” Kit says realizing the stern voice she is using is getting louder.
“Nooo” Bette whines still resisting Kit.
“Listen Bette, stop acting like a baby!”
Bette agitation was escalating by the second. Flailing around Bette almost clobbered Kit in the nose with her elbow. “Will you just settle down?” Kit was loosing her patience.
Tina could hear the commotion coming from the bathroom. In truth she was not far away. She couldn’t stand to sit in the kitchen when Bette was clearly not well in the bathroom so she was in the hall pacing back and worth. Not knowing what she could do to help she hovered near the bathroom door but hearing Kit’s last statement she knew she needed to intervene.
Opening the door she quickly moves towards them. “Kit let me.” Tina demanded standing in front of the two of them blocking them from leaving the bathroom.
“No Tina, you’re pregnant and I’m not sure if Bette can make it on her own. I don’t want to have anything happen to that baby you’re carrying.”
Tina ignores Kit’s statement and moves close to Bette. She can see the aggravation written all over Bette’s body. Raising her hand and softly caressing Bette’s cheek with the back of her hand. “Baby, let me help you.”
Bette closes her eyes at the feel of Tina’s hand and the sound of her voice.
“Good, let’s get you to the bedroom.” Tina says reading Bette.
Bette’s reaction to Tina’s actions was instant she quits squirming, ceasing her effort to escape from Kit. Instead she seemed to relax into Kit, closing her eyes.
Kit begins to move in closer to take Bette away from Tina.
“No Kit, I’ve got her. Don’t I Bette?” Tina says as she sees this.
Kit looks from Tina to Bette and shakes her head. She knows Tina should not bear all of Bette’s weight. Thinking quickly “I’ll tell you what, let’s get out into the hall and then you can get on her other side.”
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oh j this is so good and it feels so real. never been like that and know i never want to. yes plumbing is fixed after 5days of 6 having a plumber over for various break downs, wooo hooo. now its organizing. thx
Okay! This is great news, Tina can still reach Bette. I can see how Bette and Kit would both serve as a reminder of Melvin’s disappointment toward each other. It’s sad, in this case, because we know that though Kit was obviously disappointed, she was the one person who could sympathize the most with Bette. Thanks, Jwet. PPS!
Still so potent. Love this story. I’m with jikes, it’s great to see Tina can still reach Bette at least on some level. Can’t wait for more. Thank you.
Tina is exactly where she should be, with Bette. Helena can go swim to Hawaii without help. There is still a connection between Bette and Tina and if any one can bring back the once vibrant Bette it is Tina.
Just wonderful, poor Bette at least she has Tina again who I am sure will wonders for B. love this story PPPS
Happy to see Tina can still reach out to Bette. Kit and Bette are another problem. I so wish Helena would just take a slow trip to Hell!!!! Thank you
It’s so sad to think of the emotional abuse Melvin put Bette through as a child. It’s really heartbreaking.I’m also really glad that Tina seems to have a calming effect on Bette. It’s not much but it’s a start.
I agree with Sammer, and once again you did a wonderful job of describing the physical scene with such clarity. I found myself continuously swallowing as I read about Bette. Thanks J!!
Poor Bette, hitting bottom is a sad state of affairs, you’re painting quite a picture. Looking forward to more.
What an amazing update and was so good to see that Tina could still reach out to Bette. Love this story. Thank you! Definitely a start to more :)
so heartbreaking…and i really liked how tina’s voice has such a calming effect on Bette…
You have Bette in such a bad situation that it will take a lot to get her out and among the living. You have the skills to do it so I’m counting on you to bring her through. PPVVS.
That was great and glad Bette listen to Tina and hope she will let Tina help her get better. Please post more, thanks!
wow, Helena seems likely to do Tina some damage on the morrow. Trusting that T won’t go near her. Great stuff, a little more hope there too.
just catching up with this story, I really do wonder how I get anything done?? this is heartbreaking seeing Bette so broken….I am hoping that Tina is up for the challenge here because clearly Bette needs her and in fact Tina is the only one that can reach her.
Hi JWETI’m really enjoying this story – LinBooks wrote a great start & i’m so glad you have picked it up. but its such a page turner i’ve just read it all in one go! i always like storys wher T is strong for B – because all that control& drive always hid her vulnerabilities ( & the harder the fall) I fear for T though; Helena’s retribution when she works out where T has been will be cruel – though i think her first act will be to try to show that she owns Tina & can take what she wants of Tina. & who is going to pick T up after that? please kep writing and let B recover herself through T’s support.
Powerful and heartbreaking, Jwet. I’m hoping you’ve taken Bette about as far down as she’s going. Made me smile though that Tina’s soothing voice could still reach her. Love your writing!