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Chapter 6
At hearing Bette’s voice both Tina and Kit turn and see Bette leaning on the doorway of the kitchen. She didn’t look like the sleep had helped her in any way, the dark tire treads under her eyes emphasized by the yellow hue to her skin. Right off the bat Kit recognized all the signs of a drug-induced sleep but Tina ignored the obvious and was just happy to have Bette finally awake.
“Bette you’re up!” Tina jumps up excited to see her. She gets close to Bette before she wonders if she should touch her or not. With her hands poised in the air she waits for Bette to give her permission. When it doesn’t come she backs up and uses her hands to jester to Bette to sit. “Come and join us.”
Bette squints in the brightness of the kitchen. She eyes the chair Tina is pointing at, it’s her usual place at the kitchen table. Pushing off the threshold Bette moves towards the chair.
“Bette” Kit says in a subdued tone to acknowledge Bette’s presence at the table. She can see that Bette’s not all together and doesn’t want to overwhelm her.
Bette gives Kit her best steely look as she maneuvers to the chair. The last thing she wants to hear today is Kit and her lectures, she hopes the looks will hold off any comments. Eyeing Kit in her steely manner meant to keep her at bay, at least long enough so she can figure out what’s going on here. Bette takes her seat.
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Alice’s ever curious mind could not resist looking over at Dana’s suggestion that ‘Tina’s Helena’ was in the house. Jumping to her feet, she strains her neck to gain a glimpse of what Dana was talking about. She spotted Helena easily sitting at an elevated table but what she recognized immediately that Dana had not was the woman talking to Helena.
“Dane … Oh my God … don’t you recognize the woman Helena’s talking to? I can’t believe this. Oh Jesus look at the steam coming off Helena. She looks really pissed. This is awesome.”
Standing still in the sea of jumping bodies Dana stretches, standing on her toes. She squints her eyes trying to recognize the woman making Helena so angry. “I can’t tell who she is. She needs to turn around so I can see her face.” Dana states letting out her frustration at her failure.
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Did I actually catch this fast enough to be the first to comment? How are you, my friend? Twelve hours to get to Atlanta really sucks. But look what you have given us! Talk soon. Hugs. Lin
Fantastic!! Loved the bobble-head image! You are so good at this writing stuff! My mouth was watering as I was reading…and not in a good way!! LOL Thanks!!
So good to see you writing.
Ouchie. This story is so hard to read… in a good way. To imagine someone as strong as Bette reduced to this? Heart-breaking. Thanks, Jwet! It just hurts so good :D PPS!
This is heart-breaking but oh, so accurate. PPS!
I love your stories. This one is a little heart breaking with Bette so down but you’ll make it right I sure.PPVVS
Man, this is hard. Bette needs help, but will she except that help? Thank goodness Kit understands what is happening to Bette’s body.
Inch by Inch we feel Bette’s pain. Hopelessness… Wow…..More please…
So sad, come on Bette let them help you and getting better. What cadyass have to tell Alice now. Please post more, thanks!
I think Tina should take care of Bette instead of Kit! She will be more nurturing with less judgement.
Whoa, J this is some really tuff stuff!!! Thx but when does B come out of this tragic downward climb. Should I go back read the prequel=the previous story? Who wrote it plz?
In this story Helena is the devil. don’t like her at all. Gosh so painful to see Bette like this. I can’t bear it. I hope Bette somewhere deep inside her will remember Tina truly loves her and is the person who will help her get out of this hole. I also hope that Bette will start climbing this hole out very very soon. Can’t see her suffering like that any more. Helena needs to learn that you don’t hurt Bette or any member of the family and get away with it, she would get punish nd very soon (I hope). PPVS
Geez…Bette is really in tough shape but I think her portrayal here is very true to her character. I expect that we haven’t seen just how low she’s going to go. This is a great story and I look forward to your next post.
Thanks for the update. I love Alice and Dana scheming to “accidentally” bump into Candace. I was laughing out loud picturing the two of them dancing like maniacs. I hope Alice gets some useful information out of her. Tina is going to need all the support she can get trying to help Bette out of the dark hole she has sunk into. I hope Bette is ready to make some changes soon. It is so hard so see her in this condition.
Heartache, but yet so good keep up the great work.
so very sad. sometimes you do have to fall but its still hard and sad. i know there is drama about. were under water also. just moved in on sat. the sewer has backed up!!!! thx
Wonderful but so sad!!!!! I just hope Bette can pull herself together and get better. Now what does CandyAss have to tell Alice? Thanks PPS
Hey JWet, Wonderful to have another post from you so soon of this inticing and intriguing story. Your descriptive skills bring me right into the middle of the action. I can see the brightest fo the light blinding Bette and hear the loud, harsh sounds she wants to run from. Even her attempt at eating was expressive. I could feel my stomach heave and argue with my head as to the success of consuming some sustenance. A speedy exit was required. Then Kit’s realization of the error of this meal and its effect on Bette. Good to see Kit taking the lead here and helping her sister through this tough time.And as for Alice and Dana; the comedic crime cappers. This dynamic duo trying to eavesdrop and then catch Candace was hilarious. More please of this magical read. So appreciated from Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
I just love the way you write. It’s like being in the room with them.
An excellent update. Thank you. You have such a way with words. Love this story. Thank you again :)